I'd like to start my review on this chapter, but is it already finished? I saw two red links in between the images and a whole bunch of them at the end. --
11:50, August 31, 2014 (UTC)
Hey there!
Yeah, sorry about that. My internet connection went down at 6am and I've only just gotten back from church. I will be uploading the remaining pictures presently.
Calling upon my grand mastery of the Matoran language...Time To Quick Run! Classic.
ElephantTusk 13:46, September 1, 2014 (UTC)
Review[]
It's time again to review yet another chapter of Zero Hour!
I feel that some of the pictures here were just made to be liked :P
You really worked with that small stream here, first with Jekkai being pulled out of the water, and later Merra with those amazing elemental water powers! It looked very authentic, with the water going up and then splashing her attackers.
I also like the development in this chapter of both the story and the characters. I wouldn't have presumed that Makuta Scarla would use an infected Kanohi to control Salaak, but it makes a lot of sense. It brings back memories of the time when Teridax controlled the Rahi on Mata Nui.
And who would've thought Bonecrusher is actually Krika? It brings a nice and interesting twist to the story, with another character who stands against the threat... on his own terms.
Thode had a great introduction here. He seems to be a veteran Toa who knows much more than any of the villagers do, and he's not the typical heroic kind of Toa. Characters like him bring much more variety to the plot.
And then we have Jekkai. Has he discovered his dark side now? Will his revenge on the Rahkshi change his behavior towards others as well and make him more ruthless? So far he's one of the most interesting characters to read about and I'm exited what he will become in the future.
And yet again, some nice details here and there, for example Carnac's picture!
Another amazingly well-done long read. It takes you longer to publish each of these, but it's also much longer, which is nice.
Lastly, I would recommend you to make a feedback blog like I did with Patriots. I see that there are a lot fewer comments on these talk pages then there should be, and it might get you more attention! -- 14:22, September 1, 2014 (UTC)