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Bad Kill'n'
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Story
Setting
Mata Nui, The Dictatorship Universe
Date Set
58 AGC

Bad Kill'n' is a fight to the death contest written primarily by Collector1.

Story[]

Prologue[]

During a brief time of peace over Metru Nui, Turaga Dume reveled himself to be Makuta Teridax and had order all of its inhabitants into memory wiping spheres.

He also had implanted a virus in the Great Spirit Mata Nui, causing the robot to crash land on the planet Aqua Magna, which destroyed the beautiful Red Star and killed all of its inhabitants. Mata Nui fell into a deep slumber and accidentally camouflaged himself has an island paradise, unknown to the outside world.

The Toa Metru and Turaga lost their lives in an attempt to cancel the Makuta's further plans from becoming a reality, but their deaths were in vain.

Teridax used the Vahi, the legendary mask of time, to accelerate time to the point all the Matoran were weak and were completely stripped of knowledge, even of their own personalities.

When the residents awoke from their imprisonments, the Makuta fed them lies by telling then that he and the rest of his species were the creators of this world that had rescued the Matoran from a wicked tyrant called Mata Nui who had tried to overthrow the Makuta's peaceful creation.

He commissioned his new citizens to repair the damage done by the recent cataclysm, but he kept certain individuals away from their duties to be trained by him and other Makuta scientists. So that they work on new and more efficient Vahki to monitor the Matoran actions from disobeying or uncovering the truth.

Once the Vahki's design and artificial intelligence had improved to a certain amount, he began a conquest of the known world by establishing a navy of specialized Bordakh, Rahkshi, Exo-Toa, and other minions of his to do his bidding. But this action came with severe consequences.

The Matoran Spheres were very small for Toa and countless other beings, and larger sized spheres took much more time to create. Teridax could have just simply use the Mask of Time, but if he sped up time again rebellious citizens would take control over his property.

Another was the Order of Mata Nui reveling itself and using its highly trained soldiers that had more skill then his.

But the worst of these was when species from a planet called Bara Magna arrived on the planet not recognizing the Makuta, what was said to have created them, which raised doubts memory wiped residents.

Then to add salt on the wound rebellions broke everywhere the Makuta controlled. They mostly came from Toa Teams that formerly were guardians of their homeland before it was invaded, but some were toxic to Teridax's rule. One example was the Dume Rebellion.

Even though Dume was captured and thrown into a jail in Onu-Metru before he could encounter any Matoran, he managed to find a Noble Huna that blow way from a Mask Maker's shop during The Great Cataclysm. Thanks to this find, it regained his strength, as well as assisting him in escaping.

It wasn't quick and wasn't easy, Dume managed to sneak past the Bordakh and Keerakh guards of the prison where he stumbled upon an Onu-Matoran and Ga-Matoran archivists. They were automatically interested in him simply because he was Turaga, a species neither had seen before. But as they interacted with Turaga Dume, he began to discuss the real history of Metru Nui and Mata Nui, exposing several contradictions in Teridax's story.

This caused a revolt in the Archives, with the workers calling the Makuta "lying traitors" and not updating any info unless they see the events for themselves. It lasted two weeks before the Metru Nui Navy invaded Onu-Metru killing Dume in the process, the Matoran ether shared the same fate or were forced into Matoran Spheres. This event caused some damage throughout the city, making its residents distrust the Makuta to a degree. It also halted news from spreading, causing great confusion through Makuta territories.

Though the worst rebellion was the Rebellion Against the Brotherhood of Makuta started by Makuta Dredzek. Dredzek began to louse faith in the Brotherhood, feeling that its leader was leading it into the wrong direction. He soon began to follow a new master, of which his name is unknown to this day, and like a disease spreading throughout the Brotherhood, many of its members turned to Dredzek's new found master.

Teridax and the Makuta who had sided him withdrew from their conquest of the known world, and focused all their might and forces on the rebels that were once their brothers and sisters. The Brotherhood of Makuta succeed in the conflict against Dredzek's Rebels and cast their leader into the Field of Shadows, but with great losses.

At least 50% of the Brotherhood was now dead or captured after the Makuta's revolt, making the fraction have a huge loss in morale to support the group's goals.

With nearly everyone rebelling against the Makuta's rule, there were more prisons being built, and with space running low from evading forces, they were right next to very populated areas. Which made the Brotherhood of Makuta weary, because ever since Turaga Dume's escape there's all ways been a fear of prisoners escaping and railing the citizens against them.

All seemed hopeless for Teridax and the Brotherhood, but for some strange reason, luck began to shine on them.

Makuta Teridax remembered his navy finding an island that had recently appeared after Mata Nui's fell into his deep sleep. He ordered Mutran and Antroz to make it into a military outpost, though these plans were abandoned thanks to recent events.

He decided to send all of the most dangerous prisoners, about one-hundred per year, and made them fight to the death. The inmates would enter through the Great Barrier and into Mangaia. The location is guarded and convicts are escorted by Kranua twice the size of the standard issue model and had the Metru Nui Navy create a blockade over the island to ensure no escape.

Chapter 1: A New Begining[]

Six Years Later

Jarodin was waiting outside his camp in the middle of the Motara Desert for his collage Nalek to return from a supply run.

He was thankful for the Toa of Light, because he had cured his great sorrow that he had gained in the past.

When Jarodin was imported to the island of Mata Nui, the only team member that traveled with him was Galika. His other teammates were never captured by the Makuta, and fight along side the Order of Mata Nui as of this day.

She always comforted him in the worst of times on the large arena that was an island they lived in. But it ended abruptly when several members of the gang called the Blue Shadows held them captive while him and his partner were sleeping.

The Blue Shadows, though freedom fighters against the Makuta's rule over multiple islands, is not the most trust worthy fraction to join. They opposed authority and were troublesome even before the Brotherhood took control. The only reason a being would join was to hide behind an army of wicked people just like themselves.

The criminals confiscated the two Toa's masks and weapons, they also tortured them for information, wanting to find any leads to more groups they could rob.

Thankfully, a squad of Baterra attacked the gang, allowing for Jarodin and Galika to escape with their belongings. Though just as the Toa of Magnatism ran past his captives, Toa Galika was tragically killed in the conflict between the two groups.

The Toa of Magnetism was furious and saddened by his loss, so he committed a banzai run at the headquarters of the criminals. He accomplished a massacre of forty-eight members, before the Toa was overwhelmed by several Reptisapeans in the group.

Although Jarodin held up against their attacks, they eventually found a weak spot in his defences that crippled him to the ground. The Toa was at the brink of certain death and was defending himself poorly from the Rahis' acid attacks.

It wasn't until Nalek, a Toa of Light, blinded the Blue Shadows was a blast of pure light that could be seen all the way from Ga-Wahi.

Time had to pass for the Toa of Magnetism to adjust living with his new found rescuer, as he still was furious that the Blue Shadows still existed, and that he failed to destroy the fraction. Though he eventually made his memories of Galika distant along with the rest of his past. Instead, the Toa enjoyed living in isolation from the conflict that was occurring every second he breathed.

Po-Wahi may not be the most beautiful place on the island, but it sure gave the Toa of Magnetism peace and comfort.

"Are you there Jarodin?" called Nalek.

"Yes, Nalek, what is it?" questioned Jarodin.

"Retsam, step forward."

Nalek backed off to revel a Toa-like being with red and black armor, with a mask like the Kraahkan.

"He was left for dead by his Toa team he says, I didn't want to see him bake in the hot sun of this desert," explained Nalek.

"Welcome, Retsam, I'm J-"

"Nalek told me all of about this "team" as you call it," interrupted the Toa of Fire.

"Okay, come, let me tell you more," said the Toa of Magnetism signaling to his guest.


"Why, hello, Akatax," said Dredzek as Akatax, in Ganon's body, walked toward him.

"Not Akatax, just good ol' me," said Ganon clumsily just before his eyes turned blood red.

"Now, Ganon! How dare you be rude to my Makuta brethren!" Akatax scolded his possession.

"Well, I think you have some problems..." said Dredzek unsure of his comrade's control over the Toa of Plasma.

"NO!" screeched the Makuta inside Ganon as his eyes turned redder.

"I've got this under control!"

"Okay...." doubted the Akatax's Commander.

"Your new assignment is to let your new body kill various beings across the island, when loved ones of those victims need someone to turn to for the sake of revenge, they will turn to us," assigned Dredzek.

Ganon calmed down and his eyes went back to their original color.

"Oh, I will," the Toa of Plasma deviously said with a smirk.


A-12 got up on his feet after a long rest in an empty, dark, abounded Colosseum.

"It is time to rise!" echoed the commander's words.

A thousand Baterra woke up to hear their commander.

"You know what time it is?!" A-12 questioned his squad.

"It is the time to fight and take back what was once ours!"

The Baterra broke loose leaving the structure, trying to find anything to kill.


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Dan was just laying on a bed of rocks, snoring loudly, when a huge blast of energy flew at him and obliterated the rock bed and everything in a small radius.

"Good job, Colossus!" Butterfly said, patting him on the back.

Colossus sighed indifferently. He had never really cared about fighting, and watched the smoke clear to reveal not even a corpse.

Butterfly remained confident of Dan's demise till he felt a hand on his shoulder.

"Nice try, try again later, why don't ya?" Dan said, disappearing.

Chapter 2: Ganon vs Lazor[]

As he wandered about attempting to fulfill his mission, Ganon came upon something that he had no knowledge of.

"What's this?" he questioned retracting his claws.

The being stood up straight and looked the Toa in the eye.

"What the Karzahni are you?" cursed Ganon spiting at the face of the creature.

"I am Lazor; I would advise you to stay away," said the Dark Hunter threating the Toa of Plasma with his weapons.

"Not if I can handle it," cockily said Ganon with a smirk.

Lazor used his head laser and shot Toa dead center in the head. But to his expectations, he wasn't killed or severely damaged, rather he was unamused by his attempt.

"What?!" staggered the Dark Hunter in confusion.

Then Ganon used the Kraata power of Shattering, taking out one of Lazor's arms. As much as the dark hunter tried, he couldn't kill Ganon.

"Ha! Time to finish you..." the Toa smiled menacingly toward his next potential victim.

Ganon sliced Lazor's head off and kicked it like a Kolhii ball.

"Well done, we will win after all," said Akatax through the Toa of Plasma.


"So Retsam, what was your life before becoming an entry?"

"I lived..." Retsam almost hesitated to answer.

"...a meek life, I use to be a craftsmen, although I wanted to be an inventor."

"That's nice, I use to be one myself."

"Not to interrupt," intruded Nalek. "but you two need to see this."

The Toa followed their collage and saw fifty Baterra dart by their village.

"What are they after now, Nalek?"

"You know Baterra..." the Toa of Light replied remembering his terrifying past experiences.


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Dan sat in a tree a little while off, out of sight, and watched Akatax decimate Lazor.

"I'm sorry for Ganon," Dan said with a sigh.

"I don't know what's worse: a friend being controlled by a wimpy Makuta, or the fact that most people here probably don't know me. Inter-universal travel is an annoyance sometimes," Dan finished.

He got up and started to jump from tree to tree.

"By the way, Drake, don't try it on him," Dan said, jumping past a bat-like Rahi.

Chapter 3: Ganon vs Iceeye[]

Magneon woke up for another day.

The first thing he did was brush up the parts of Tygor and Tempra, recent intruders into his den.

He had stayed long enough in this Onu-Koro mine shaft, and it was time to find a more secure home for himself.

Magneon would usually go out weapons a blaze to win most of these "War-for-Sport" tournaments, but he knew what Teridax was doing behind his back.

The robotic being did a similar brain washing technique when he ruled Magnopolis, he wasn't easy to fall for the Makuta's trick to get rid of prisoners and gain new slaves.


Ganon was walking upon to a gate, it had a distinct emblem on the front of the gate. He had seen it before, but any memory of it had since been forgotten.

The Toa then tried to open the gate, it didn't open, but he did hear a familiar voice behind him.

"Halt in the name of the Corpse Empire!" threatened a yellow and white Corpsian coming out of a rock behind Ganon.

"Let me guess, you're that Iceeye jerk..." the Toa sighed remembering his past involvement with the empire.

The Corpsians never wanted to fight the war, instead they would mark their territory and lived in the poorly made fortresses with the few materials they had. You couldn't even breath on their property without getting a warning to step back.

"How dare you call me a "jerk"! I'll jerk your neck off your body!" Iceeye threatened once again letting his short temperament get ahead of him.

"Yeah, we'll we see about that," the Toa of Plasma said sarcastically before firing his High-accuracy Midak Skyblaster

The blast from Ganon's weapon hit the Corpsian dead center in the chest pushing his target at the gate, making it rattle loudly.

"That takes care of-" but before the Toa could finish his remarks, Iceeye jump-kicked him in the face, leaving a crack in his mask.

"We are Corpsians, you foolish Toa! We don't die that easily," intimidated the Corpsian.

"I don't either," Ganon replied with a devious smirk as the crack repaired immediately, catching Iceeye by surprise.

The Toa of Plasma retraced one of his claws and stabbed his enemy in the face.

Once again, the Corpsian got up back, stunned, but dead.

"Do you think you could really take down the entire empire?" mocked Iceeye as Vaarex to assist him.

"Actually, yes, yes I can, " cockily said the Toa just before leaping at the charging Corpsian warriors.


While everyone was asleep, Retsam woke up in the middle of midnight.

He slowly sneaked out of his Po-Wahi hut and wandered off into the desert, there was something that he had do, an opportunity not to be missed.


There was a boat floating slowly in Naho Bay, it contained the Makuta Vicoran, Trek, and Velnax, and they were on a mission.

They were dumping specialized Shadow Kraata made by Sovnoron throughout the Ga-Wahi region.

Vicoran used a Rau instead of his usual Xihius so that he see in the darkness and to check for dangerous Takea sharks that might be lurking.

The Makuta had been thinking about leaving the brotherhood, because of the harsh work conditions and his commanders treating him unfairly. Most notably was Trek, who's arrogance makes him thinks he's the highest of all Makuta.

Chapter 4: Ganon vs Vaarex[]

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Drake flew around; he was looking for a nice juicy victim. When you're a bat, it's hard to be seen, but why does that matter when you can kill someone and drain their blood with ease? The only annoyance, to Drake, was that the biggest pest was his creator, and a man whom he hated as much as he feared, a man (as far as he knew) who seemed incapable of death.

But there were more pressing matters; thinking too much when you fly leads to... crashes.

Drake stood up in his humanoid form and rubbed his head.

"Blasted trees; no blood, no reason to care," Drake said as he ripped the tree out by the roots and smashed down the other trees in a wide radius. Now, he thought, things wouldn't be as pesky.


Ganon ripped Ieceye to shreds by snapping his neck, blowing a hole in his heart area with a plasma blast, and using the Kraata power of fragmentation to fling his opponent's body parts at Vaarex.

"Well, there goes one of ya! Maybe your buddy should have watched what he said about me!" mocked the Toa to the remaining Corpsian.

"Before you make your move to attack me, I want to offer you a challenge," replied Vaarex in his usual emotionless tone.

"All right, hit me with what you got," said Ganon somewhat intrigued.

"We only use long ranged weapons for this fight, such as your Midak. No powers no swords, shields, or any melee weapons," said the Corpsian dropping his sword.

"Do you accept?"

At first Ganon was weary about not using his powers, but he gave himself the mindset of "I can conquer anything" which made want to accept Vaarex's challenge.

"So ya wanna have a gun fight, eh? Well, take this!" accepted the Toa pulling out his high-accuracy Midak Skyblaster and firing a blast of Plasma at the Corpsian.

The firefight was quick simply because Ganon's weapon was three times better then Vaarex's Thornax Launcher.

The reasons for this was that the Toa's high-accuracy Midak Skyblaster was semi-automatic, had four rounds in the clip, had increased accuracy, and fired pure bolts of Plasma. While the Corpsian on the other hand could only fire one at a time, meaning he had to reload on every shot. Plus Thornax fruit doesn't come close to anything Plasma can do.

Vaarex became stunned when molten rock created by Ganon's Midak on some of the rocks he used for cover splashed all over his body.

"Now to finish you..." said the Toa of Plasma pulling out his claws as he walked toward to draw the finishing blow to his enemy.

The Toa thrust his claws into Vaarex's face, but before the tip of the sharp blades touched him, he teleported in the nick of time.

Ganon groaned loudly in anger, and used his Kraata power of weather control to let out his anger by created a large thunder storm.


Jarodin woke up from a loud roar of thunder.

He got up to check on everyone to see if they were all from the current storm, but he noticed something off.

Where's Retsam?


Retsam was wondering around the Motara Desert, his objective was collecting body parts and armor of fallen entries and Rahi.

This night wasn't as great as he thought it would be, because he found parts more scare then expected, and there was also this mysterious storm that appeared so quickly and so strangely.

After this two hour delay, he saw a very needed piece of chest armor from a being covered in sand.

The fallen being was Makuta Krendarr, it appeared he must have done something to the Brotherhood that might have gotten him banished to the desert. He most likely died from a Blue Shadows raid judging by the slice marks, then the hot sun baked his escaping Antidermis to nothing but a vapor.

Retsam was glad to have found the corpse, because that armor was the toughest of its kind.

He began to detach the chest piece slowly with a dagger, but Retsam stopped his objective when he heard the sound of footsteps.

Having no place to hide, he lifted up the dead Makuta and placed it on top of him, and played dead. It wasn't the greatest mirage ever, but it was the best Retsam could do out in an open desert.

The creator of the footsteps reveled its self, they sounded like two beings talking. One sounded like a clumsy Dark Hunter that spoke in slang, while the other sounded intelligent and sinister.

"Ganon, there was no need to accept his challenge! You could have disintegrated him easily!"

"Should'a could'a-"

One of the beings then paused and observed Krendarr's body and Retsam.

"Looks like someone should'a took a diet on all those Madu he ate!" chuckled Ganon.

"I guess obesity kills!"

"Get back to the point, Ganon! You should never make mistakes like that again!"

"Whatever, I need a vacation from all this."

What intrigued Retsam was that it sounded like both voices were coming from just a single being. But what thing's for sure, he sensed a very dark and evil presence.

"That might not be a bad idea, it could help you rest your abilities. So, anywhere you want to go?"

"I was thinking somewhere in Ga-Wahi."

"Then it is settled!"

Ganon then walked away from Retsam's hiding place, he manged to take a look at the being, it was a Toa sized figure clad with orange and black armor.

The stranger was under Makuta influence and had to be stopped, not just for the sake of other people, but for his own.

Retsam knew of someone, but he couldn't contact him now, he needed to take the armor before anyone else does.

Chapter 5: The Offer[]

This Section Is Written By Daniel.c.c, But Has Been Revised and Modified By Collector1

Jarodin started to search for Retsam. He decided to check the nearby canyons, but a few steps in, he felt an eerie presence. Jarodin spun around and looked at a tree, but nothing was there.

"Why so jumpy, Jerry?" Jarodin heard from behind. He turned to see a Toa standing on a high rock, eating.

"Do I know you?" Jarodin said uncomfortably. The Toa gave Jarodin a bad vibe, yet some reason he felt familiar.

"I forgot that only reality jumpers like myself can remember various versions of the people they know," the Toa said, jumping out of the tree and holding his hand out to Jarodin. "Hi, nice to meet you again, Jerry, the name's Dan," Dan said, shaking Jarodin's hand.


"I'm here," said Velnax as he shifted back into himself.

"Good," said Vaarex, coming out of a tree.

"Who did you kill?"

"Some being named Vicoran."

"Any news?"

"All I heard was that, Dredzek is making a portal of some sort."

"To where?"

"I do not know; I'm guessing it's an army."

"This is bad. Go over there and stop it."

"Yes, sir."

"They will not stop the Empire!"


Retsam walked carefully through the barely lit caves and caverns of Onu-Wahi.

It's dangerous to go alone in these parts, as many captives hide here and could ambush you cloaked in a sheet of darkness.

He was hunting for the legendary Element Lord of Technology, the person that banded the people of Bara Magna to travel the stars and created space ships for himself and those willing to explore the universe. Of course he and his companions were thrown in jail for denying that the Makuta created the galaxy, because it was The Great Beings that did what the species took credit for.

When he was sent to the island of Mata Nui, he did not take part in the countless slaughter of others, only if it was in self defence. Instead, he went into a mine where he offered repairs to anyone, as he began to believe that there was no right or wrong. You would say this was a kind gesture, but he only did it so he wouldn't have to travel the whole island to eliminate his foes.

This gained him great respect among the island imprisoned inhabitants, as he would reluctantly heal injuries and upgrade armaments. It would be foolish to try to kill him, since he knows advanced levels of technology, he could easily disable any biometrical organism.

As the Toa marched through a long tunnel, he heard loud footsteps coming toward him. He put his back against one of the walls, concealing himself in the darkness. It was a Fikou spider, with a salivating Energy Hound trailing behind it.

What was strange about the hound was that it had characteristics of another being, like it was in the process of transforming. The only good thing was that the predator and its prey darted very fast, barely noticing Retsam and giving him no delay.

Where the Element Lord resided wasn't very hard to find, as very bright structures made of lightstones illuminated the entrance. Things like these could be commonly seen in Onu-Nui, but they were built from various materials from other Metrus and even other islands. Though this creation was special, as it was built solely from primitive objects only found in the region, and it looked city grade.

When the Toa step foot into the cave he saw the Element Lord of Technology repairing a Kakama clad Onu-Matoran. Retsam could tell that he was a member of the Blue Shadows by the blue marking on certain parts of his body.

"I'm busy. Please wait," ELT told the Toa while he was repairing the Matoran.

Chapter 6: The Element Lord of Technology vs Ganon[]

Ganon was out to have fun on the Papa Nihu Reef, a "vacation" as he called it. Akatax allowed him to do this as he himself felt that the Toa needed a break so he won't die of pure exhaustion.

Unknowingly, there was something watching him as he basked in the brisk warm sun. After several minutes of observing the Toa, it came out of hiding and approached his target.

"Hello, Ganon," it said calmly as it slowly walking toward him.

"What d'ya want?" groaned a tired Ganon retracting his claws.

"I'm here to try to help you with your "illness"."

"I don't need any help! Who are you?!" demanded the Toa of Plasma.

"I knew this would come to this..." the being sighed.

"Who are you?! Answer me or I'll kill you myself!"

"I am the Element Lord of Technology, and I'm getting that demon out of you," the Element Lord replied raising his Antidermis destroyer.

"Never!" screeched Akatax inside Ganon.

The Toa of Plasma lunged at the Element Lord of Technology, but his enemy simply shot him in the chest making him crash into the sea shore .

Ganon grunted, preparing to strike again, until he noticed the large hole left in his chest. Then all of a sudden, Akatax's Antidermis burst out of the Toa's body.

Ganon's body went into to convulsion as each drop of the Makuta gushed out of his body. The green liquid that was Makuta Akatax hissed in pain as it dried out until there was nothing left of his existence.

The Toa of Plasma fell with a thud, unconscious from the draining of the evil that lived inside his very body.

"Now to get you to somewhere safe," said the Element Lord of Technology throwing Ganon over his shoulder.


"He's waking up."

Ganon woke up, trying to recall what just happened.

"Where, where am I?"

"You're in the Wall of History, all thanks to the Element Lord here."

"Who are you?"

"I'm Daniel.c.c., but you can call me Dan."

"Where can I get new tools, and where's the Protectorate?"

"Sadly, the Protectorate were killed by Dredzek."

"Oh, I hate him for what he did to me!"

"Now, now, calm down we'll get 'm. Oh, here's some tools and stuff."

Dan pull out two laser Double Pistols. "Sweet."

"Oh, that's not it. Come outside."

Ganon fallowed Daniel.c.c. to find his Blaze Bike.

"Wow! Thanks man!"

"No prob'. Now if we can only find Jerry... I don't think he's where we left him."

Dan seemed to zone out then pointed in a certain direction. "Follow me!" Dan said dashing into the woods knocking trees to the side without some how uprooting them and Ganon and ELT followed close behind.

Chapter 7[]

Jarodin was still looking for Retsam. But where could he be? All he found was some dried-out chemicals. Then he heard something come out of the bushes.

"What do you want?" he said, thinking it was Daniel.c.c.

But it wasn't. He ran as fast as he could, away from it. Jarodin sighed. "Are you okay, Nalek? Nalek?"

Then the dead body of Nalek fell off the roof of the tent.

"Oh, man! I need to get out of here!"

He tried to go in the woods, but he saw the monster-like being looking for him.

"If I'm going to fight this thing, I will." Jarodin charged at the best, but failed.

"Ha, ha, fool! I'm going to rule all of this land!"

"Who are you, and what have you done with Retsam?"

"Ha, ha, ha. I am Retsam, and Retsam is the Master!"

"You little two-headed Tarakava!"

"SILENCE!"

The Master threw Jarodin and knocked him out.


Dredzek was talking to a being.

"Now that Akatax is dead, you will be my apprentice. Rise, Leviathos!"


Dan sighed and placed Jarodin on to his bed in his tent. "Jerry, you idiot, if I had known 'Retsam' was here, I would've warned you."

Ganon and ELT finished burying Nalek and walked towards Jarodin's tent. "What now?" Ganon asked Dan, who seemed to be the only person knowing what he was doing.

"Take care of Jerry, for now HE is your leader. I'm just helping to fix messes, like you. I've got my own agendas. By the way, watch your back; I accidentally released some dangerous creatures upon this land," Dan explained.

Without another word, Dan headed off alone, leaving ELT and Ganon to take care of Jarodin.

Chapter 8: Dan vs The Master[]

The Master sat in his throne. He was back, and nothing was going to stop him.

But what's this? A Toa was walking toward his lair. He went outside to deal with the being.


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The Master stopped the Toa from getting closer.

"Who are you, and what do you want?"

"Oh, I'm Dan."

"Okay 'Dan.' if you step any closer, you're dead!"

"Oh, I know that, but I'm going to stop you before you kill any more!"

Dan shot his gun at The Master, but it was blocked.

"You are now dead!"

The Master crushed Dan's head into the ground, but Dan was still alive.

Dan got up and laughed. The Master turned to look, to see Dan gone. Dan kicked The Master in the back of the head, cause him to almost flip forward, at which point Dan grabbed his legs and threw him into a wall. The Master coughed blood as he stumbled out of the wall, only to find a hand in his face. Dan unleashed a blast of energy from his hands, and The Master was gone.


Dredzek looked at the battered body that he found at his feet. The creature's face was so badly damaged, he couldn't even tell what it was.

Regardless, he decided, a new henchman is always useful.


Dan walked back to the camp.

"Dan! Where have you been?"

"Oh, I made a deal with the Master."

"With what?"

"He'll leave us alone in exchange for a free trip to Karzahni," Dan said as he went to his tent, chuckling.

Chapter 9: Magneon's Alliance[]

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The Master screamed in pain as they worked on transforming his battered body.

Dredzek enjoyed watching him writhing around on the table, unable to break free, unable to stand the pain.

After the surgery, Dredzek walked up to the heavily breathing Master. "Do you want revenge?" Dredzek asked confidently.

"I'll slaughter him, and all his friends too." The Master said angrily.

"Well then, join me and we'll do it together." Dredzek said.

The Master smiled after being freed from the table. "Oh by the way, your next after them." The Master said.

"I can't wait." Dredzek said with a laugh.


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"So, the Master's back, eh?"

"Yes, and he wants revenge on a Toa named Daniel..."

"I'll give him something he won't forget," said Magneon, cracking his knuckles.

"Oh, and Fyxon?"

"Yes?"

Magneon cut Fyxon in half. "And that's for being late."

"That's no way to treat a pointless lackey! You mercilessly beat the obedience into them until they learn," said a somewhat sophisticated voice. Magneon turned to see a weird creature floating next to a gigantic being that was even taller than Magneon himself.

"And you are?" Magneon spat as he prepared to kill.

"The name is 'Butterfly.' Truly atrocious nickname, but it fits, and this big lug is named Colossus," Butterfly said calmly.

"I resent that," Colossus said in aggravation towards the insult.

"And what do you want?" Magneon asked.

"Do put that down; I'm trying to be civilized," Butterfly started, as Magneon's weapons were suddenly thrown to the ground as if the gravity had increased drastically.

"I am here to join you, but I refuse to be anything less than an equal to your leader," Butterfly explained.

Magneon laughed. "If you desire so, who am I to stop you? But status is questionable," Magneon said, trying to lift his weapons back up.

"You guys have a serious animal problem around this place!" said a very rough voice.

"Ah, Toros. Never a pleasure to see you," Butterfly joked.

"Yeah, well, you ain't too pleasing either!" Toros said angrily.

Butterfly released the telekinetic hold on Magneon's weapons, sending him flying back from the force he was exerting.

"Who are you calling an 'animal?'" boomed an angry but sophisticated voice.

"You, ya bat freak!" Toros yelled.

"He's a vampire, ya idiot!" came another voice.

"Spinax, you're here too?" asked Butterfly, surprised. "I didn't think a wild beast could survive here," Butterfly remarked.

At that, a brawl broke out. Spinax turned into his hound form and leaped on Butterfly; Drake tried to bite Toros, who shot at him, missed, and hit Colossus, who in turn prepared to fire a large blast at him from his cannon. In the midst of the brawl, Magneon angrily got up and yelled "Shut up!" followed by him firing tranquilizer darts at them all. The darts, although not able to put any of them to sleep, didn't calm them down.

"If you're to work together, you have to get along," Magneon said sternly, which was followed by an uproar of laughter.

"Fine, if not working together, then working toward the same goal, at least!" said Magneon as he pulled out a picture of Dan.

Everyone was silent. A common enemy to too many.

Chapter 10[]

Fyxan was helping Jorbyy find Speewaa.

"I don't think she's h-"

"There!"

Speewaa was standing right by a hut.

"I'm comin'!"

"No. wait!"

When Jorbyy went to Speewaa, he blew up, to find that it wasn't Speewaa; it was a bomb.

Verx came down from a tree.

"What do you want?"

"I was helping this Matoran find his friend!"

"Pity," said Verx, going back up into his tree.


"We are here!" said A-12, stopping his Baterra squad. "Open it up!"

The Baterra blew up a wall to find a cave of some sort.

"Follow me!" The Baterra went into the cave. " and Cover me!"

A-12 went into a crack inside the cave.

Chapter 11[]

Dan sat on the top of the tree, seemingly able to observe all events in the universe. "There are some trouble makers... I think they should be dealt with," Dan said, jumping into the surrounding forest.


Verx finished off a Baterra that, apparently, was heading to rejoin its pack, seeing as it has a message given to it, telling it to receive supplies, as well as the supplies themselves. So Verx headed to where he expected to find rather easy prey.


Lethal finished slaughtering a Baterra; it was heading for a nearby cave with supplies. It, apparently, had been given a message telling it to deliver supplies to its pack.

Lethal laughed. "What better prey than a bunch of weakened Baterra?" he thought.


Drake awoke inside his cave; he hung from the ceiling like a bat, he had aready detected lifeforms in the cave, but these soon to approach... smelled fun.


Verx walked into the dark cave, confused; where were they? While at the same time, Lethal, at another entrance, entered as well. Verx saw Lethal, and both armed and prepared to kill the other.

"WHO ARE YOU?" both said in unison.

"A better question is... WHO AM I?" said another voice.

Verx and Lethal went back to back against the unseen foe. Both span back to back, guns ready to shoot, but all of a sudden, Verx screamed as he disappeared into the darkness. Lethal rushed for the exit, but he heard a sinister laugh and his path was then blocked by the terrifying sight of an unmoving, bloodless, corpse of Verx.

As A-12 and his Baterra evacuated the cave, they heard Lethal's last scream.

Satisfied, Drake turned back into a bat and went back to sleep.


"Looks like it worked; thanks, ELT," Dan said.

"But did the fate have to be that gruesome?" ELT asked, rather disturbed by the two screams that he had heard, even from camp.

"All we did was coax them into the nearest place where we knew they'd be eliminated. Drake did the rest, I had no idea what he'd do; even if I told him something, he wouldn't listen. Like all my creations, he hates me," Dan said with a laugh.

"Dan, you're kinda creepy sometimes," Jarodin said, at which Dan laughed harder.

Chapter 12[]

Jarodin saw a being comeing out of the woods.

"Who are you?"

"Fyxan, I need a place to stay."

"Then come on in, we got food and shelter."

Then, Fyxan went into one of the tents.


Dredzek was talked to his portal that he was makeing.

"What do you want Master?"

"I WANT NO MORE FOOLS!" the portal said.

"But they won't harm you, if they do I will kill them I tell you! Kill them!"

"Okay, Dredzek, but keep an eye on Asmodexus....."

Then, the portal closed.

"It will be done my master."


The Master chuckled, keep an eye on him? the thought was hysterical to him, he was much more powerful than before and even then he could take Dredzek down.

"I think I'll make Dredzek and Dan into my slaves and then just drop this "master" of his on Jadax Magna." The Master thought.

As Dredzek left, The Master snuck by him and into the chamber he was in, then locked Dredzek out.

"Ah 'The Master'" Said a voice.

"And you are?" The Master asked to the portal.

"As you have named yourself, many have named me. Although there are those who, though doing my work, seem to prefer less... respectable titles for me." The voice said.

"THAT DOESN'T ANSWER MY QUESTION!" The Master said angrily.


Dan laughed as if hearing something amusing from miles away.

"What's so funny?" ELT asked confused.

"I have a feeling 2 egotists are going at it somewhere." Dan said with a laugh.

Chapter 13[]

"TELL ME WHO YOU ARE!"

"I will not, oh, and Asmodexus."

"Yes."

"Look out."

"For what!?"

The portal closed.

"TELL ME! WHO ARE YOU WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY LOOK OUT!?"


"Hold it right there Dredzek!"

"Ah, Velnax, how nice to have you come."

"I didn't come to eat Madu with you!"

"I knew that."

Velnax pull out his dagger.

"Oh, don't kill me, I will tell you what Vaarex will not tell you."

Velnax lowered his dagger.

"Tell me."

Chapter 14: Vengence of The Master[]

The Master was mad. The portal he was talking to was not telling him anything, aside from saying "look out". The Master didn't know what he meant.

"Fine, you don't have to tell me anything, I don't need you." Said the Master angrily. He walked out of the room and flew away.


Speewaa was walking around looking for shelter. Then she saw a bunch of huts outside the woods. "These look useful," she said.

She walked toward the huts. Then a yellow and red toa came up to her. She pulled out her Gemstone Cannon and aimed it at his head. "Who are you?" She said. "I'm Dan," said the Toa. "I need shelter." Said Speewaa.

"We've got room," said Dan. Then Jarodin, Fyxan, and the Element Lord of Technology walked up. "We've got two new people in our group guys," said Dan.

Speewaa put Spaunauh on the ground. "Your friend was looking for you," said Fyxan. "Jorbyy?! Where is he?" Speewaa asked. "He blew up." Said Fyxan. "Oh," said Speewaa sadly.

Suddenly, ELT's eyes turned red. "My scanners are picking up something flying toward us. It's The Master!" Dan drew a battle-ax and got ready to fly up into the air. ELT turned, his pincher at Dan's throat. "I will finish off that fool." Snarled the Element Lord. His thrusters started to light on fire as he flew up into the air. Then he flew up to fight The Master.

The Master was flying to Dan's camp. "I'll kill that pesky tTa," said The Master to himself. Then he remembered the portal's warning. Look out! The word screamed itself in his mind. He turned in midair to see ELT barreling down on him. The Master twisted in the air, but the Element Lord of Technology smashed into him. The two fell down toward the ground. Then the element lord fired his thrusters and they both flew upwards.

The Master punched ELT in the face. ELT shrugged it off and spat plasma back in The Master's face. The Master screeched and clawed at him, and ELT smashed him in the chest, destroying his chestplate. The Master couldn't resist. ELT was winning.

On the ground, Dan and his group watched. "Owch!" Said Jarodin as the Element Lord of Technology ripped the Master's arm off and began to beat him over the head with it. "Go ELT!" Shouted Speewaa. "Now I know why they call him The Soulless Killer". Said Fyxan.

ELT chucked The Master's arm away and electrocuted him. The Master screamed as his smoking body was clawed and shot by his enemy. Then ELT hurled the Master's burnt body toward the ground as hard as he could. The impact caused a massive explosion.

ELT floated to the ground, where Dan and Fyxan were examining the Master's body. "He's dead." Dan said. "I killed him?" said ELT. "Yes. We don't have to deal with him any more." "It's about time," said Jarodin.

The Master might have finally been destroyed, but Dredzek and the portal were still out there. Plus Magneon's group. Leaving Jarodin in charge, Dan walked off to find Dredzek.

Chapter 15[]

As Jarodin was taking a bath in Naho Falls, he noticeed a spot with the color of rust on his hand. He tried to rub it off, but it didn't work. He tried everything he could and still it wouldn't come off. So he kept it a secret, for now.


"A long time ago, there was the great Veiled One Empire. No one came past it even in the War. Then, Vaarex then thought about taking over the Empire. So, he lead an army of Corpsians to overthrow Nihiltidax by telling them that they could rule with him, they didn't. Most of they got killed, even when Nihiltidax died Vaarex used the rest as tools."

"Do you see what he is doing, Velnax."

"I.....I see."

"Goooood."

"So, would you like to come back?"

"Yes, I would."

"To bad, my master has no use for you any more."

"What?!"

"Say hello to my master will you, Velnax?"

A wormholl opened up and started to suck Velnax in. He tried to shapeshift. but the holl was to powerfull.

"RAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!"

Then the wormholl closed.

Chapter 16[]

It was black. There was nothing in existence, but the blacknes. Then, like a match being lite, there was light. The light then became brighter and brighter, until it filled the whole area, where Velnax laid in some plains of grass. Like wakeing up out of a coma, Velnax's mind was racing to remember what had happened and where he was.

"Am I alive?" he thought aloud.

He begain to explore what was there in this unknown place by going through the vegetation. He keep going and going, but it seemed the garden never ended, until he ran into something. It was a statute of The Fallen Six saying, The land where evil rules it's self.

"Well, this is not good."

As he kept walking, the beauty of the flowers and trees, began to die.

"What is this place?"

"The Field of Shadows."

Velnax turned to see Daran, standing there like he was waiting for someone.

"The Field of Shadows! Just becase I wanted to be powerful, does not mean I need to end up here!"

"That's what we all did, luckly Millennium's adviser on the outside is trying to get some of us out."

"Who's his adviser?"

"Dredzek."

Velnax froce from hearing his name.

"Well, it's time for another Shadow of Ages meeting, you want to come?" said Daran as a bell rang.

"No, I want some rest."

"Come on, if you to get out of here quicker."

What Daran said enraged Velnax.

"Fine, I will come with you."

"Good! Follow me!"

So Velnax followed Daran to a bell tower. where they met up with a crowd.

"I did not know that there would be so many pepole here."

"We are not they only ones traped in here."

Then, every thing stoped in a heart beat as Millennium steped forward.

"Today, we have a step forward into geting out of this life ridden place. My adviser is updateing the portal for we can enter it, and never come back. But for now, we can try are best to stay alive, because it is still being updated. And some thing for Velnax, I may have no use in you anymore, but there is something I would like you to do when we are released."

"What is it."

"I would like to tell you in private in a few hours."


This Section is Written by Daniel.c.c

"I have quite the distaste for that giant bucket of bolts." Butterfly said. He was among the other of Dan's evil creations.

"HE has no blood and as such is not an enemy for me, even though I have... recruited 2 to my cause." Drake smiled as his 2 victims were now mindless undead slaves of him.

"I'd be interested if he had some meat for me to tear off, but i think Colosuss is the only one inclined to fighting him." Spinax suggested.

"I agree, i could probabky take him but I get no satisfaction without any bones to break, so we should have Colosuss deal with him." Toros stated.

"Then it's settled, Colosuss, you're tasked with eliminating Magneon for us, unless you're scared." Butterfly chuckled.

"No." Colosuss said, to which Butterfly was confused.

"What do you mean?" Butterfly asked.

"I do not wish to kill." Colosuss replied in his usual sad monotone.

"Well it is not your choice, you are my subordinate and..." Butterfly stated before being interrupted by a stern "Not anymore." then Colosuss slowly walked off, the group shocked by the change to the point of not reacting.

Trivia[]

  • Pokermask made the Antidermis destroyer.
  • This is mostly written by Collector1 and Daniel.c.c..
  • Since Teridax took over Metru Nui, there are many differences from the main universe.
    • Nalek never found the Ignika, instead, he wears a great Ruru.
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