User:Vagra Nui Tales/The Shark Slave short story contest

This is a short story contest about Pridak`s past as a slave working on an island. Entering will be over on March 16 2011.

Rules

 * Your entry must be written in first person from Pridak`s point of view. No exceptions.


 * The story is supposed to put a new light over Pridak. The idea is to make people not judge on first glance.


 * Backstory:


 * Pridak once lived on Xia. He was a poorly-treated slave by a bad employer. One day, he got approached by Mata Nui. From then on, he is a great warlord, yet he still feels anger, and he and his brothers take vengeance on Pridak`s old boss, after which they would reform into an evil faction.


 * The story should contain at least one flashback to Pridak`s past.
 * The story should stop when they grow evil.


 * I decide on which story wins by judging on style, and fitting in my storyline.


 * Took straight from my story outlines: Pridak`s past is to be told as serving under a merciless employer, only offering him a few widgets for heavy work. He would later be chosen by Mata Nui to aid in a control unit, but he would get power-hungry. This is how the story should be, in most basic outlines.
 * Entering is over on March 16 2011. No exceptions, even if I am offline that day. Every entry coming after will not be tolerated! After entering, you will have a time to write your story, yet this one will not be specified yet.
 * It should not be too short. Don`t hestitate to make it a BZP-contest-long story, that is what I actually want.