User talk:Varkanax39

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Chapter
Got it. Will start on the chapter now.

And you read Redwall? God, I used to love those things. Tell me, how many books are there now? 80?

The  Slicer  18:49, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. I thought I heard you talking to Jared...

Anyway, I'm starting on the chapter now. I'm going to have the Baterra army destroyed, is that OK?

The  Slicer  18:56, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Chapter's not over yet, no...

The  Slicer  22:34, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Robe
Ok. But on one condition. If Iruka or Kouhiimaru manages to get themselves killed in The Eternal Game, I want them to die honorably. I know not to complain but I would really like for that to happen.- Scorpion   665

Glory Wars
Sure, we'll have an allience!  Jareroden 97  00:40, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Glory Wars
Do you want to form an alliance? We might even be able to have a 3 way alliance between you, Jareroden97, and myself.- Scorpion   665

Re: Prequels
Sorry for my quietness, school's been coming to an end this week! Anyways, no I didn't read your earlier prequels, so I must admit, embarrassingly, that I had little to know idea what's actually going on in your storyline. BTW, I'm really liking the conclusion of The Eternal Game, but since I know your pulling all the strings, I've seen stories like this long enough to know that there is something much darker being prepared in the wings XD. Anyways, I love your story, and can't wait to see the final battle, though I'm gonna miss this story when its gone, since this is pretty much the first time I've ever taken part in a wiki community story. --Chicken Bond 07:10, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

You added a bunch of useless code, and the end result was no change whatsoever. The  Slicer  13:56, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

OK, see this edit and this edit. Except for a new message at he end, there's no difference, right?

Wrong, you see, for some reason, you added 20,000 bytes of completely useless code. For example:

Check the code of your user talk if you don't believe me.

You see, that doesn't DO anything. Basically, the end result of typing that useless material is that the color of everything remains BLACK. No point in that.

The  Slicer  14:03, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

OK, I'll update it.

Hmm... I don't know how that happened, sorry...

The  Slicer  15:48, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Robe
Thanks dude. Did you know that in The Championship of Death, Naraku was killed by thugs and Ghost had his head used for target practice. But enough of my rambling, you can use the picture.- Scorpion   665

TDR
Glad to have a fan out there.

And the next chapter won't fully make sense until Gigas Magna: Underworld is finished. I'll update it now. Will do TEG after that...

Yes, I do do a lot of writing...

The  Slicer  18:40, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Will do. Sorry I took so long. The  Slicer  23:32, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

I will. Sorry I couldn't do it yesterday... The  Slicer  15:43, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

I updated it again with a super-epic chapter, but could you please wait until you update it? I'm going to add another part to the chapter, in the middle of the two battle scenes, which details the battle with the Baterra. (Can't do it now; I have piano.)

The  Slicer  21:15, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re: I See
Ah O.K, that's a very simplified version I must admit XD. By the way, since I've finished most of my work on Toa Hydros' pages (for now at least), I'm free to work on your pages. --Chicken Bond 21:32, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re:
Very well. Your wish, is my command XD --Chicken Bond 21:48, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Re:
O.K. I was right in the middle of editing Skorpix when the internet closed down, son now I have to start all over again. --Chicken Bond 23:56, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Skorpix
Sure thing. Sorry about yesterday, when I lost all the work I did on Skorpix, I kinda lost my editing spirit, I was kinda tired at the time. But don't worry, I'm refreshed now. --Chicken Bond 22:43, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

I have to briefly get off the computer, I'll complete Skorpix's page once I'm back on. --Chicken Bond 00:01, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Skorpix edits and other stuff
Alirght, I've updated a certain amount of Skorpix's earlier life, though I won't be able to get it all done in one day, instead, it may take several.

Off subject, how would you like an alliance in The Glory Wars contest?

Also, I've been thinking for sometime about starting a wiki contest/story crossover, much like your The Eternal Game. However, I find it much more interesting if I had two other people to help me construct such a story, and I wanted to ask if you wanted to be one of those people. As i'm already aware, your usage of the "survival of the fittest" style story sparked a whole new interest in Custom Bionicles users about such contests, and several people have started making their own. I do not intend to create such a contest, instead, I hope to set this in an alternate reality with a different type of plot. So what do you say? Would you like to create such a story with me?

Regards, --Chicken Bond 10:24, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

TEG
Are you going to update TEG soon? And how do you plan to kill Speewaa? Also, if you have an alliance in The Glory Wars, write it under alliances here.

Also, view the story here.


 * Baterra1202

Re: Thanks!
Thank You very much for accepting! Excellent! Now I'll explain the basic idea of the story. Beware, there's a lot of reading below.

The story is set in an alternate universe, where the Eostra Nihiltian and his Shadowy Ones have allied with Millennium and his Shadow of Ages, and together with another powerful faction (Who I have not chosen as of now), form a new, more powerful group.

They swiftly conqueror the reformed planet of Spherus Magna shortly after Teridax's death at the hands of Mata Nui like the canon storyline of BIONICLE. They establish themselves the rulers of the planet, and begin use the remains of Mata Nui and Teridax's robotic bodies to create a new, much larger robot with which they can conquer the planets beyond Spherus Magna.

However, during this time, a resistance is formed, consisting of several different beings whether they are Makuta, Matoran, Zyglak, Skakdi, Agori, Glatorian, Toa, or Turaga. More recently in the events of this universe, the resistance receives a massive influx of new warriors willing to fight (the MOCs of users who have entered them into the story), and that is where the story starts, with the recruitment of these new warriors. There isn't an official name for the series just yet, though the prototype name is "Dark Realities", any suggestions for a name?

Also, I haven't decided the third person to be writing in this competition with us, though I'm thinking about inviting Jareroden97 to be one of the people writing the plot alongside you and me, as he is a brilliant writer, a person a believe you and I can trust in the making of this series, and his "Dark Lord" and the Empire of Shadows could be the third faction that allied with Millennium and Eostra.

My alternate choice as a writer is TheSlicer, and his factions could be his Brotherhood of Gigas Magna alongside the Bounty Hunters' Guild, so I may ask both him and Jarerdon to be part of this. Who do you recommend?

Regards, --Chicken Bond 23:34, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Alliance
Oh yeah, did you accept my proposal for an alliance with my MOCs? --Chicken Bond 23:44, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Idea
Oops my mistake XD. Eostra and HER Shadowy Ones. Anyways, all seven would be excellent. Should we stick with the title Dark Realities? --Chicken Bond 00:15, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Also, just to let you know, Jarerodan97 has accepted the invitation as our third writer. Therefore, we now Eostra Nihiltian, Millennium, and the "Dark Lord" ruling over Spherus Magna, PURE EPICNESS!!!!! XD --Chicken Bond 02:31, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Shardak
Umm, why is he just an existing BIONICLE set with other weapons? Seems weird to me, I don't want to sound offensive, but it looks like yer lazy to make MOCs, no offense.

 Toa  Fairon  (Contribs)

Re:
O.K, Dark Realities it is then. Also, how do you make an entry page for other contestants like you did here? I've never created this kind of page before, and I might need some instructions how. --Chicken Bond 22:33, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the plan. Updating TEG now... The  Slicer  01:18, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I don't think the beginning of your plan makes sense. They're being forced to work together, remember? I have a better idea...

Re: TheSlicer
Well, the message above answers you're question to me on where he is. And hi, am I glad to meet you officially. I know you've been reading things in the Gigas Maga Storyline, and weren't you planning on doing some writing for it? I heard you read some of my stories, so I like you already :p! I'm sorry I can't say the same for you, except for the eternal game. But now that we've met, I'll be sure to do so. Any reccomendations on good ones of yours?

Team  mcb  01:47, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

It has begun!
O.K, I've made the page, check it out contest page here. I've also made the actual story page with a prologue here. Quickly enter you MOCs, before the fourteen places are taken (We writers count as three places taken). --Chicken Bond 05:36, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I think it would be better if you finished that chapter for me. 'S that OK with you?

The  Slicer  12:35, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, but chapter 1 will be set approximately 100 years following prologue, the scene will feature the leaders of resistance (Freztrak, Shardak, Hydros, Ixtil, Jareroden, and Leviathos, and a few others) in discussion over a group of recruits (NOTE: Not every MOC entered is a new recruit, some are already members, and not every MOC shall appear in the first chapter, so we won't have some guy standing on a stage reading off a bunch of names like in several other stories) at their main base of Atero (or what's left of it following the Skrall's attack on it). Also, I would ask you to write chapter 1 after we have a total of 14 users. Thanks, and good luck, --Chicken Bond 22:14, June 30, 2010 (UTC)\

Bad Kill'n
When are'ya gonna enter? You can enter for free. Collector1

Could you get someone else to write it? I'm happy with my TEG work so far, but I've written five chapters, which is ore than anyone else has, and I'm ready to give another person the chance to work on iy. The  Slicer  06:08, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

What can you write?
Well, once Slice is done with TDR, the next in the TFC saga, The War With The Order Of Darkness, will be colaborative. Meaning Slice, Fairon, and I are all gonna be writing it. So we could definitely use an extra hand!

Also, I believe there are plenty of open holes in the storyline that you could write. I'll talk to Slicer about other stories.

As for TEG, it's great. I love it.

I think I'll take a peak at Twilight Void.

And finally, what's that message above about? It sounds cool, but I'm not sure what exactly it is. I'll do my own research, but if you could shed some light...

Team  mcb  00:35, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Deciding the sides, entry time's over
Alright, since entry time for Dark Realities has officially ended, it is time we decide the allegiances of the characters so far. I've done the maths, and once we reach 14 users, you, me, and Jareroden will decide the sides of the characters of 3 users of our choice, each (Not including ourselves, though decide what sides your characters will be on)

I've chosen 3 users already to assign sides. Other than my own characters, I've chosen the sides of TheSlicer, Toa Hydros, and RandoMaster07's characters, so you can't choose their sides. Jareroden has chosen the sides of the characters of ThatDevilGuy, Toa 95, Biogecko, in addition to himself. That leaves you to choose the character allegiance of yourself, Abc8920, Baterra1202, Collector1, and SubAqua. Is that O.K. with you? Also, when you do assign a character's side just follow the example I've put below.


 * Ixtil (With the resistance)

or:


 * Sovnoron (allied with the Eostra/Millennium/"Dark Lord")

Also, judge the entry's by their character, and decide which side they should be on. However, that doesn't mean that every bad guy has to be on the Eostra/Millennium/Dark Lord's side, we can have some evil guys on the side of the resistance. In one such case, Toa Hydros requested I place his MOC Zevrahk on the resistance side, since I've agreed with him that during Millennium/Eostra/Dark Lord's rule, Verahk and Kylla mysteriously disappeared without a trace of evidence to say they were alive or dead. Zevrahk, as requested by Scotttjt, is now serving the main resistance out of self-interest.

I'll finish off this remarkably long message by saying that since the maximum amount of users allowed to enter is 14, and we have 12 so far, you and Jareroden will choose which sides the characters of the last 3 users allowed to enter will be on.

Once this is done, you may write the first chapter, but please don't include stuff like blood (this is because I like sticking very close to canon info) but you can still include the ways you can kill and decapitate someone, just no blood, if that's O.K.

Got it all? XD

Regards,

Oops.
When I said above.... Well, this is confusing, and I don't know why it happened, but the above message of THIS message used to be above my other message, but Chicken Bond must have moved it down for who knows what reason. Anyway, I did my own research, so don't worry about it.

Justa another random question; have you been reading The Bounty Hunter Wars? You know it's the 3rd longest page on the wikia?

Team  mcb  14:51, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Twilight Void
When is Dracox the Dragon gonna appear?

 Toa  Fairon  (Contribs)

Chapter 1
Are you ready to do chapter 1? if you are, is it alright if you can leave a premise in it for Jareroden, since he'll be writing chapter 2. Also, have you decided the allegiances of the other users' entries, or would you like me to do that? --Chicken Bond 21:36, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, O.K, do the chapter when your ready. --Chicken Bond 22:28, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Seeing as your busy at the moment, I decided to determine the sides of the characters of the last user, Abc8920, so this should give you one less thing to worry about. Now that the sides of the characters have finally been drawn, we can now begin the story at long last! Good luck with chapter 1, but get round to doing when you can, don't feel pressured or anything like that.

Anyways, enjoy writing, --Chicken Bond 23:46, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ah I see. Since I really want to get the series going, is it alright if Jareroden does chapter 1, and you can do chapter 2? --Chicken Bond 21:16, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Not to sound snotty or anything but shouldn't Piruk be on your Template:Toa Ultimate?

dont know
o ya i have not really seen him in a while but i think he took a little break

Lego aquaman13

Chapter 2
Chapter 2 is all yours, write as you please. However, try to make new characters appear instead of carrying on from where the last chapter left off, a fresh start if you will (i.e. Tetrack is with a group of resistance fighters on a mission to infiltrate one of Eostra/"Dark Lord"/Millennium's fortress). --Chicken Bond 23:21, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Tetrack
Yeah, my original plan was for Nightwatcher to kill him, but the thing with Mordrax getting powerful and all that wasn't in my original plan. And you know how stories are dominated by the characters' intentions? Well, it just doesn't make sense for Mordrax to serve someone who's not as powerful as he is. The  Slicer  02:54, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Writing GMS
I hath heardth zat Teammcb or TheSlicer of Ze Creathors of Gigas Magna senth a message via something people of ze currenth time call "editing talk pages". It was abouth writing in the GMS.

Teammcb wanthed to make War with ze Order of Darkness collaborative, but it won't be, according to my plans.

I am very sorry for the unfortunathe news, buth you can still help me with writing ze follow-up of it, Inferno, goodth lordth, read Fairon's Blog to catch up onto the currenth evenths, ith takes place in Inferno.

Thanks for your good time.

P.S. did you understand this message?

 Toa  Fairon  (Contribs)

Oh yes, I hath readth Twilight Void, its interesting...

 Toa  Fairon  (Contribs)

Chapter 2
Hey there. If you get time, is it alright if you can finish chapter 2, or should me or Jareroden do it for you if your busy? --Chicken Bond 21:55, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I just read chapter 24 of The Eternal Game and noticed you made a slight mistake with Millennium. Millennium is not a Makuta, and does not possess a majority of the Makuta's powers, the exceptions being teleportation and his advanced telepathic and telekinetic powers. Just letting you know. --Chicken Bond 22:12, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

O.K, I'll do corrections. Ah, O.K. I understand, don't worry about chapter 2. Also, don't worry about Skorpix, his article's updating and correction was my job, and I simply got distracted by arranging Dark Realities. --Chicken Bond 22:28, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re:DR
Don't worry, I wasn't planning on killing him.  Jareroden 97  02:09, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Pages
O.K, good to hear! Also, I'll put more effort into updating and fixing up your pages (I have been a bit slack I guess XD). Oh yeah, and that's fine, I think it would seem more plausible that we have the surviving Shadowy Ones alive to fight the resistance. --Chicken Bond 22:42, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

DR Chapter 3
O.K, I've done Dark Realities' third chapter, what do you think? --Chicken Bond 12:09, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Would you like to write chapter 4? It would include focus on an appearance of Varknax and the conflict with Skorpix left unresolved in chapter 2. --Chicken Bond 11:30, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re: DR
O.K, I'll get back to work on Blast. It's just I've got a lot of work to do with Toa Hydros' pages and they've taken a bit of time. --Chicken Bond 22:02, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

No problemo. Also, since you left the latest chapter of DR unfinished, would you like either myself or Jareroden to finish it, or do you want to do it yourself? --Chicken Bond 23:08, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

The update was awesome as usual. Also, fine with me, yuo can finish chapter 4 when it suits you. --Chicken Bond 23:25, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, O.K then. Little brothers can be annoying like that XD --Chicken Bond 22:34, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Nice work on chapter 4! I know you want to complete it, but I'll just do a quick spelling correction. Also, I noticed you accidentally left Hydros out of Nalek's team. Did you just miss him out, or do you have plans for him to appear in the completed chapter, since he is supposed to be the team's leader. --Chicken Bond 23:18, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, I missed it, though I'll read it now. And, your welcome. --Chicken Bond 00:34, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Very well, your wish is my command XD. Anyways, yeah, I was starting to think Eostra was getting a slightly bigger role than the other two (No offense or anything, she's a brilliant character). The "Dark Lord" would be the most suitable for the interrogation. Also, Dark Empire is fine, I've been trying to think of a name for their united armies (Since they ultimately merged their factions together to form a far more powerful faction when they joined forces). --Chicken Bond 01:20, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I'm gonna try and include official characters like Raanu, Kiina, Kopaka etc in the story. Also, we should try to let other users' characters live as long as possible since we have a smaller cast the you do in TEG, (though this doesn't mean you can't kill them off, just not too many in one or two chapters). --Chicken Bond 01:25, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Brutal Nightmare
'''I AM IRON MAN! You are the only one who can bring balance to a world at war. '''

TCOX
Can I join TCOX?


 * Baterra1202

Chapter 6
Would you like to write chapter 6? If you do, there are several other matters that have been occurring earlier in the series that we haven't resolved yet, so it may be a good idea to resolve them. You can:


 * Write about Korzor's imprisonment in the outpost with one of the "Dark Lord's" damaged machines.


 * About Tetrack's infiltration of a fortress in Eostra's kingdom (You may wish to link that with Korzor's imprisonment)


 * Shardak's observation of the training in Atero, and the final outcome of the training.


 * Rando's team vs. Skorpix situation which hasn't been resolved.


 * Jareroden's team to head to the Black Spike Mountains after his army's stop off to aid the resistance's efforts against Makuta Treix.

The bounty hunter one with Janneus is something I'll be writing in the next chapter I'll write as a whole. So until then, could you restrain from introducing bounty hunter characters other than Nightwatcher into your next chapter. I know it sounds a bit mean of me, but I have a plan to introduce in one mind-boggling twist. --Chicken Bond 04:39, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Admin
I think you'd make a good admin. I know you're going to run for rollback, you'd be a good one, but you would make a great admin. That is, if it was fine with you.

Dredzek in TEG/DR Chpter 6
This is just a question out of personal interest, but how did Dredzek survive the first battles of The Eternal Game? He was ripped in half by Mersery (though I am aware his Antidermis could have just been floating around). --Chicken Bond 22:20, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, are you sure you'll get the chapter done, or are you busy with TEG? The chapter will still be yours to write alone, you've had the least amounts of chances to add chapters. --Chicken Bond 00:17, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

O.K then, though don't let DR pressure you to stop work on TEG, I'm eager to see how it all falls into place. --Chicken Bond 00:21, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Should that info about Dredzek/Benarjamin be added in the chapter where Dredzek reappears. Also, your certain your occupied with TEG today? If you are that's fine. --Chicken Bond 22:12, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ah O.K, fair enough. --Chicken Bond 23:36, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry
I thought it was a copy. :( I thought the guy made a copy of your story. I know, what was I thinking. Collector1

Re:
Yes, I've seen the latest  update, but one question: were's Serrakaan and Kelvar?  Jareroden 97  19:51, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Challenge
An update on the evil MoC challenge: I'm almost finished. Sol, the only MoC I need to finish, is halfway done. I need to add its legs. So far, with wings out, it is 9 inches tall (still need to add legs), without them, it is 7 inches tall. Shadowmaster 20:07, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

I'm also creating a new storyline. I'm still continuing my other main story, but this one will have new villains. Do you have any villain suggestions?

I meant any suggestions for any villain characters for my new story.

Re:
OK, thanks for the info.

P.S.Thanks for the complement on the HB M.O.C.s!  Jareroden 97  20:22, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Blast
Sure thing. Also, yeah, I read the chapters. Their epic!!! --Chicken Bond 23:25, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

GMS
I'm not sure. You really should talk to Slicer about what you can write. I have this idea for a story that takes place during the Core War... I haven't told Slice yet, but I was thinking maybe you and I could write it. I'll talk to Slice and get back to you.

Team  mcb  19:05, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Chapter 6
When do you think you can get round to chapter 6, seeing that TEG is reaching it's intense conclusion. --Chicken Bond 02:44, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, I understand, that can get really annoying sometimes. --Chicken Bond 23:12, July 17, 2010 (UTC)