User blog comment:LoganWoerner/Niha Storyline Character Applications/@comment-958607-20131021183042

Ah Range... he's a lover, not a fighter. XD

Niha's Mentor: Hmm, well, out of thin air, I pull the character Widsith, a male Vortixx with a reputation for ferocity and skill in battle. His main power is his limited Shadow Energy, which allows him to manipulate darkness to the extent where he can create small tangible energy constructs. Additionally, he carries a blade (I'm imagining a much smaller version of the Staff of Protodermis) that can launch Rhotuku - which traps a victim in a stasis field for extended periods of time. Widsith began as a dockyard worker on Xia who became angered by the female domination of the society. In seek of revenge, he began work as a hired gun. However, on one occasion, he came into conflict with a Dark Hunter, who'd been hired to kill the same target. The encounter eventually led to Widsith being taken to Xia and given the option to join the organization. After several years of extensive, harsh training, he uncovered the existence of the Order of Mata Nui, when investigating the death of Makuta Kojol. As such, he contacted the Order and offered his services, then faked his death so he could work for them. Hardened by his experience of being surrounded by the universe's scum, he has a deep hatred for the womenfolk of Xia and for weakness. He does, however, still have a great deal of respect for The Shadowed One and will not tolerate ill-speak of his former leader. He is missing his right eye and, as a Dark Hunter, he was nicknamed "Ripper." I would model him around Blackbeard for the desired effect. :P

As for the Discussion Topics:
 * I think that it's great to see that you're continuing the ATS story. :D The few chapters that you released of the original story were extremely good and brought up many original concepts. If needed, I would be willing to guest write a few chapters. I also think that the overall outline of your story sounds promising. I can see this being very successful. :D
 * Hmm, how about Age of Extremes? :P

Additionally, would you be interested in giving Tollubo a cameo in this? :P He served as both a Brotherhood agent and an Order agent so he could appear as either an enemy or as an Order servant? :P