Talk:Haunted Origins, Prologue: Times Long Past

Review
With all the hard work you undoubtedly put into your comic series, it is about time it was recognized with a proper review. So I will be going through each chapter (and hopefully catching up to the newest release) of Haunted Origins which I've ben actively reading for quite a while but somehow never telling you.

First of all I have to mention your photography in general, with it improving even more in the following chapters. You have many great close-ups and interesting photography techniques in this installment already, with the camera following the Avohkii being tossed out or this close-up with the light coming throug the fence.

The prolog does what it needs to do: To set up the main conflict. We get to see the seemingly cursed Kanohi mask, it's powers and dangers and, in the final panels, the buildup to the enevitable war. As I've read the future chapters already I noticed that none of the characters of this installment made an appearance later on, which is quite interesting. Will we see them again? What happened to them after getting rid of the Avohkii?

I must say that the beginning reminded me of Zero Hour, with the item of intrigue being the Avohkii as well and some scenes taking place on a similar wooden construction (a slide for kids?). This does not substract from your story though and is more like a nice callback.

Finally, the crater created by the mask's landing is such a good use of the natural landcape. -- 10:51, January 3, 2019 (UTC)