User blog:PepsiCola99/Some Story Updates

Without preamble, I shall inform you of the most recent status of My stories. I have completed Out of the Blue and Into the Black and The Gunner Chronicles, and I am currently in the process of continuing both stories in a new story, ''A World at War. This story will detail all the battles of the Primordius Magna Civil War, save for The Battle of Arcajax (Out of the Blue and Into the Black'').

What is more, I am reverting to my old, idiosyncratic style of writing. Below is an example from A World at War

''Onuju looked up from the fire he had been stoking with a long metal rod. All around the camp, where once the atmosphere had been sleepily peaceful, everybody was wide awake and attentive. Magnon dismounted from his Ussal crab, strode briskly into the camp, and spoke. "The tidings I bring are not those of cheer," began the matoran, "there are far more green soldiers than we initially anticipated. There is an entire legion of matoran soldiers headed our way."''

Please tell me what you think of my stories; I am open to suggestions for improvement. Liople urodon  ferox   04:52, July 17, 2011 (UTC)