User:Clone Trooper 1000/BIONICLE Origins: Nektann

This is the page for members of the BIONICLE Origins Club to plan out the new comic BIONICLE Origins: Nektann. A premise will be written by leader Clone Trooper 1000, and other members will be asked to write the story in detail. Please write "unfinished" under issues you haven't completed.

Premise
The story takes place before Nektann became a warlord. He is a young warrior under the command of high warlord Malakai and the Zakaz High Council. This comic details Nektann's conquest of Malakai to eventually become a ruling warlord of his newly-created faction: the Piraka. Also in the comic will be detailed Nektann's first encounter with the Makuta that would eventually lead to his alliance with them.

Issue One
Nektann threw his weapon at an opposing Skakdi warrior,killing him.

As he fought,he reflected on what had hapened in the far past...

It all started when an orginisation known as the Brotherhood of Makuta assinged one of it's members to their island,Zakaz.

The Makuta,named Spirah,experimented on the Skakdi,giving them extraordinary powers and abilities.

But,the experiments drove the Skakdi over the edge,plunging them into war.

Nektann became a warrior unde the command of Malakai,a member of the Zakaz High Council.

Though young,Nektann was vicious,and had thoughts of power.

But,he did not have time to reflect any more,as he was locked in combat with an opposing army of Skakdi.

Nektann locked blades with one of the the enimy Skakdi."Die,die,DIE!"

He stabbed the Skakdi,in his chest,and threw the carcass aside.

He looked up,to see Malakai's army slaying the opposing army.

A battered Skakdi walked up to Nektann."Well,we sure showed them."

Nektann nodded."We sure did,Thok."

The Skakdi of Ice looked down,to see an enimy Skakdi still alive."What should we do with him?"

Nektann grabbed the Skakdi,by the neck."Let's take 'im back to Malakai.He could give us some information."

Nektann threw the Skakdi he captured in front of Malakai."I got a prisoner for you."

Malakai leaned forward."Excelent.Tell me,what warlord do you work for?"

The captured Skakdi crawled backwards,gulping."Why would I tell you?"

Malakai brought his blade to the prisoners throat."Tell me,or do want to live without a head."

The Skakdi blurted out."Okay,okay!I work for Lumish!Please,don't kill me!"

Malakai smiled."Good...and now..."

The Skakdi warlord ran the prisoner through,killing him."...You have outlived your usefulness."

Nektann stood there,waiting to be spoken to.

Eventually Malakai noticed him."Hey,what are you gobbing at?Get out of here!"

Nektann clentched his fists,holding back foul curses.

Eventually,he turned away."Yes...sir."

Nektann was walking through the debries of the battles,looking for something he could salvage.

He was then knocked flat,into a ditch.

He opened his eyes,to see four beings standing over him.

One of them spoke to a tall,white one."What should we do with him,Krika."

Another one gave a gahstly suggestion."I say we decapatate him and be done with it."

Yet another one shook his head."Oh Icarax,you always were far too barbaric."

Icarax growled."Yes,that's coming from the one who started all this in the first place!"

Spirah narrowed his eyes."Listen you-"

"Enough!"

They all turned around,to see another one.

Icarax sighed."Teridax..."

Teridax walked over to face Nektann."Tell me,what's your name."

Before Nektann could answer,he felt the strange sensation of his mind being probed.

When it ended,he was looking at Teridax.

Teridax returned the look."Your name is Nektann,am I correct?"

Nektann nodded.

The Makuta continued."And you serve the warlord,Malakai."

Nektann nodded again."Yes."

Teridax looked at his fellows."I say we let him live."

Icarax looked at Teridax."Why?"

Spirah backed him up."Yeah,what if he tells his fellow Skakdi about his encounter."

Krika looked at them."Oh please,if he did,who would believe him?"

The other Makuta nodded in,reluctant,agreement.

Teridax looked down at the form of Nektann."You are lucky,we will spare your life."

Nektann gave a sigh of relief.

When he looked up again,the four Makuta were gone.

The Skakdi got up."I don't know who those guys were,but I'm gonna' find out."

Nektann spent the next several weeks trying to find more information about the Makuta,as his hatred for Malakai grew.

Eventually,the Water Skakdi discovered a scroll,in one of Malakai's secret rooms."Yes!"

He opened it,and read over it.

About halfway through,Malakai walked in."Hey!What are you doing with that?!"

The warlord lept at Nektann,and tried to pry the scroll from his hands."Give that to me!"

The two Skakdi fought tooth and claw over it,Malakai coming out the victor.

He held the scroll above Nektann."Now,you die!"

Nektann grabbed a knife,and stabbed Malakai in his leg.

Malakai fell over."YAIIIIIHHHHHHHHHHH!"

Nektann raced out of the camp.

Issue Two Premise
Nektann has the scroll and needs to find Lumish, since it was he who fought Malakai's army. Everything else may be written freely.

Rough Draft: Issue Two
Nektann held a Skakdi of Iron against a stone wall."Again,where is Lumish!?"

The Skakdi wriggled in Nektanns vice-like grip."I'm not telling."

Nektann brought his scythe up to his face."Tell me,or do you want to aquire a taste for steel?"

The Skakdi wailed out his answer."All right!All right!He is in the western part of the island!Now,LET ME GO!"

Nektann dropped the Skakdi,grinning."Excelent.I will spare your life."

Nektann walked away from the terrorfied Skakdi,with some of the answers he sought.

Nektann sat behind a rock,studying the scroll.

It was in fact quite interesting,and it detailed much of the history of the Brotherhood:

"The Brotherhood of Makuta was formed about 100,000 years ago,and is lead by a Makuta named Miserix.

Many of the Makuta worked solely on creating Rahi to populate the universe.

After a four hundred year long war broke out on the island city of Metru Nui,Miserix assinged most of the Makuta to different islands.

Nektann stopped there,and got up.

But,he was bemused.

How did Malakai get this scroll?

Could it be that he has ties to the Brotherhood?

Temporarily putting this out of his mind,Nektann got up,grabbed his blade,and continued to make his way to the area of the island the Skakdi told him about.

Nektann had Lumish's camp in his sight.

Smileing on the inside,the Skakdi proceded to the entrance.

Four Skakdi blocked Nektann's entrance."Halt."

Nektann walked forward."I want to see Lumish."

The Skakdi raised their weapons."Over our dead bodies."

Nektann grinned."That can be arranged."

Nektann lept at the four Skakdi guards,strangleing one of them.

Another one of the guards ran at Nektann with his spear.

In the last second,Nektann dodged,and the spear-bearing Skakdi ran another Skakdi through.

Nektann kicked the spear-bearing Skakdi in the gut,and slammed his head on a rock,killing him.

Now,only one guard was left,and he was the most skilled of all of them.

He charged at Nektann,knocking him over.

Nektann looked up,to see the guard bearing down on him.

Nektann grabbed his scythe,and slashed the guard across his mid-section.

The Skakdi fell over,bleeding.

nektann walked over to him,and stomped on his head,slaying him.

He turned around,and started making his way to where Lumish was.