User blog comment:LoganWoerner/Spring Recap and Summer Plans: Comics, Stories, Contests, and More!/@comment-2026417-20140607070141

The drawing of Niha above the On banner is amazing. Great job on the...blast, what's the term? Putting the fist closer to the "camera" than everything else. Foreshooting? Whatever. Your art style is great in all of them and you do a good job with action pictures. As for hairstyle, the last one at the very bottom looks best.

However, frankly, with the comics thing, I actually think you should stick to writing. Well, at least if you plan on making the characters look fully human. Frankly, I don't think it'd look that good if they were all human. Some characters may be unrecognizeable (I know I would never have placed the guy in the captioning comic as Mersery without first being told), and secondly because Niha closeups suffer a little bit of uncanny valley (might just be me).

But, it's your decision. And if you have Microsoft Power Point, you can insert speech and thought bubbles along with proper text in order to look nicer. And if you're going to go human, I'd suggest doing it only with the faces and leave the bodies armored. Then the masks could make some great battle-helmets or something. Also, a drawing tablet and practicing graphic-style shading would really help the style, although you appear to be on your way. Best of luck!