User blog:Chicken Bond/New Scenes in DR!

Hey there! I am performing my final revisions of Dark Realities, from start to finish. I have made grammatical corrections, righted errors, rewrote words, and redesigned small scenes in chapters. However, what I think should notify you of is that I have GREATLY extended Chapter 21 (The chapter with Nightwatcher’s battle with the Emperors) and added three new scenes to the epilogue (Three scenes showing Sovnoron, Dredzek, and Skorpix meeting up, Serrakaan spying on Nightwatcher, and the Cold One descending into the Spherus Magna wastelands), so I suggest you re-read both those chapters everyone. Also, I just added a brand-new scene in chapter 14, which I added to revive a sub-plot I must have forgotten about, where Rando and Gurren got captured by Skorpix in chapter 8 and get taken to be interrogated by Eostra. It shows how they escape Skorpix's grasps, so go check it out too!

BTW, I have been trying to extend DR as much as possible, and I have found it is actually a small novel. My revised version of the story is worth 205 pages of A4 sized sheets of paper! And when that is compressed onto novel-sized paper, that means its worth even more pages so… YIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ME, VARKANAX, AND J97 HAVE WRITTEN A LONG NOVEL!!!! :D

Anyways, re-read the epilogue and Chapter 14 and 21 and tell me what you think!

Also, what do you guys think of the beginning of Broken Worlds?