User blog comment:SpikeyDragon/First set of MOCs/@comment-3009929-20111206011750

The colors kinda clash. You have black, white, orange, gold and silver on his armor! You should try and settle on a base color (probably black) and then a secondary. your secondary could be a metallic color such as silver, gold, or steel, or the eternally annoying see-through blue and orange pieces.