User blog:Serrakaan1407/New story line. End of Dark Origins.

Hello my friends, and acquaintances. This is Serrakaan 1407 with news concerning Dark Origins. I am finally able to say, that after a year of writing, the story is finished. This was the first installment of the series I have named "The Hand of Fear." I hope that those of you who have read it were pleased with what they read, despite errors concerning Grammer and Spelling. It was my intent to make the reader excited, curious, and suspended in the story, and I hope I delivered it well. I have infused many characters in this first installment such as Niha, Ra, Mersery, Skorr, Benjarmin, Gothmog, Shadowmaster, Dredzek, Jareroden, etc, etc. There are many who I was not able to incorperate into the first instalment, but do not worry, I will bring even more characters in the next story.

There are many things I would like to do differently in the next Story.

One, instead of having longer chapters with only twenty in the story, I will have shorter chapters with more like forty, so you do not have to read as much at one time, cause it can be quite exausting.

Two, I am going to cut out the dumb (He) "said" (She) "said" in all of the conversations. I trust ya'll can follow along without those captions.

And three, for clarity, I am going to start tagging all the characters in the story, cause I did not do that before.

Everything else like plots, action scenes, emotional scenes, and others of the like will remain the same, yet hopfully with less spelling or gramatical errors. ;P

Expect the sequal to be close to the same as its predacessor where character appearances are concerned. They will all still have long, or well documented appearances as necessary to the storys plot, and pleasure to the readers. And speaking of other peoples mocs, I hope that I represented them all well in my story. If there are things about your character you want me to know about or change, I will be happy to do so. It is your moc, and it is my goal to make them as close to your writings as possible.

Alright then, it has been a long year for this story. Tell me how I did in the comments below. Also, if there any changes you would like to see in the next story, please do inform me as well.

Once again this is Serrakaan1407, and it has been a pleasure including your fantastic mocs into the story. The story would not be near the same if they were not present. Thank you!