User blog:DeltaStriker/Update - July 2013

"“Name’s Agnos,” he replied, leaning against the wall as he spoke, “Toa of Fire. Pleasure to meet you…?” His voice trailed off questioningly. “Knox,” the green armored Agori finished for him. “My name is Knox.”"

- Excerpt from Chapter 1 on Son of the Suns

There's a little tidbit from the latest chapter of my story serial Son of the Suns, posted just about three quarters of an hour ago, give or take a few minutes. It's taken me a while to get it finished, and I hope you guys are pleased with what I've written. Any and all feedback would be appreciated.

Story Updates
As of now I have officially put both Shadowlands and Origins on hold, so don't expect many (if any) updates on them for quite some time. Son of the Suns is my primary focus at the moment, and I want to see it finished by the end of the summer, if possible.

Son of the Suns
The story that I seem to have trouble not mentioning, SotS is coming along nicely for a story with only a Prologue and a single chapter. It is set to flip perspectives between Knox, and Jungle Agori Trader (whom I was graciously permitted to use by ) and Military Colonel/Detective Mezak (Another Jungle Agori) as they try to save their nation from the threat of and evil Toa of -CLASSIFIED-.

While it may seem like the two segments I have posted to date are completely unrelated, I assure you everything will explain itself in time. In the mean time, if you enjoy a good old fashioned firefight and/or a wisecracking Toa of Fire, I suggest you check out Chapter 1 of SotS. As I said above, any and all feedback is appreciated.

What did you think of Chapter 1 of SotS? It is a great piece of writing and I look forward to Chapter 2 It was well written and decent It was ok, but not worth the wait (I'm sorry about that, I truly am) It stunk (Please elaborate in the comments section)

Vacation
On Monday the 29, one week from tomorrow, I am heading to camp for a week. Immediately after that, I will be going camping with my Family. I will not have access to the internet at all while I am away (most likely), so don't expect to see me around again until sometime around August 10-12. After that I should be free to edit and post Chapters to SotS for the rest of the summer.

Farewell
That's pretty much it for this update. So long, farewell, all see all you fine blokes int the comments section. With feedback...and other stuff.

--  DeltaStriker   21:50, July 21, 2013 (UTC)