User blog comment:Invader39/Late Summer 2018 Update/@comment-958607-20181006134221

Another great update. Love the banner and love the integration of MOCs to even out the written portion.

I'm very proud of you for finishing your Okoto entry, and prouder still that you've completed Fallen Heroes. With the story in planning since 2013, this is a monumental achievement for you, and I'm really happy to see it get such positive reception from the wiki as a whole.

As for the MOCs, I think your Jarodin has come leaps and strides since the last version. I especially like the prominent buttcheeks use of Metru shoulder pads and CCBS to mimic the original, but with your own twist. I feel there could be a smidgen of trans-light blue in the legs, but you've done so well to recreate the TECHNIC-heavy aesthetic of the original. Even the dark gray looks appealing.

Tollubo is a very creative take, since I don't think I've ever given him brown armor before. It might be an idea to throw in some tan pieces to further disguise him as a Toa of Stone, but this version really captures specifics of the original. The Pakari Nuva also feels very tasteful and the Photo Bolt Launcher is looking most groovy.

Pls give Yiolu Jekkai fingers