User blog comment:Vorred/Elegy - Feedback Blog/@comment-11429692-20150416233313

As usual, I'll be doing this as I read. But I do plan to do a second read-through with focus solely on it :D.

I really like the way the narrator speaks during those first few panels... "Rangeand" gg. "None of them was meant to fight." Wimps

Gosh, Berwak, stop talking all cool. Actually, I really like the way everyone speaks in these panels. Very final battle-y.

Love the quick reference to Uprising right before the battle.

"Heh. The fireworks will be grand." Found my new favorite Skakdi. ^.^

"They came to visit us." Pointy stick party, anyone?

Love the Frisbee kanoka disk cam. Nicely done.

I don't care how many innocent Matoran died in that explosion. <3 explosions.

I love it when Nuva acts the hero. As always, you leave me wondering who to cheer for.

Shoulda known Nuva wasn't finished with his virus. Expecting Theran to join them...

I'm really loving this battle shots. Very nicely done (of course, I expected nothing less from you <3).

I almost panicked when it looked like Amarii would die... and then the coolest Skakdi ever acted cool again. It's a sign.

Classic hero-villain dialogue. Love it!

I can't tell who Nuva is fighting. He's just attacking the air. And why isn't Range in the battle? :P

Ouchie.

"Through."

"Shockwave."? Did Nuva secretly go to a wizard school?

"You minion has failed." "That was always his bad habit. Let's see if you're any better." You're making this skakdi too amazing. I wish I could remember his name >.<.

Lanudos doesn't need to speak. Everyone present is already thinking "hammer time".

Gosh, Berwak, pay attention.

Pwned. I would be upset at that, but he was just possessing it.

You couldn't have Nuva knock him out. You had to use sleep powder. GG.

Thank you for not killing Khyae.

Classic Aescela speech.

MATORAN BATTLE WAGON. ADORABLE.

And the most adorable attack hits Nuva. We know his weakness now.

Missing her old saw here.

Classic three-frame-final-blow-to-the-head-with-a-sword shot. I love how so many classics have happened throughout your trilogy.

Classic shockwave-emanating-from-now-dead-villain.

Classic power-sacrificed-for-dying-friend.

Classic fade-to-black-scene-after-saying-but-at-what-cost.

Masterful work. I really enjoyed this chapter. As usual, you have me amazed at your photography and storytelling abilities. 100/10. ;D