User blog:Chicken Bond/Done!

YES! It's done at last its done! Mersery's new death story, The Curtain Descends is finally done and paged on CBW. I incorporated new themes and corrected some small mistakes, and tried to incorporate ideas #1 and #4 suggested by TDG into the story, but it otherwise has remained largely unchanged. Go check it out and read it now, and come back here to give your opinions on the new version.