Talk:Juba Nui

Yeah there are things in this page that need serious improvemant, Change and no OP's are neededShockery (talk) 16:52, May 17, 2015 (UTC)Shockery
 * Overall there's a good backstory but you can't make all your characters OP or have some special past. Which you did.
 * You underate most of my characters, (I.E lackeys and all that)
 * You need to make paragraphs and a infobox