User talk:BobTheDoctor27

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Thanks for the praise! I'm glad to hear it from you, and comments like this motivate me to write more. &mdash; Bionicle  Kid  (Blog 15:45, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Hey there. Just sort've getting back to (a bit late, I must admit) to some of your feedback, specifically that regarding the Zyglak. Whilst I understand your criticisms (I really do; they are fair and make decent points), I'm struggling to imagine an alternative way around them. I mainly used the Zyglak's lack of plague as a plot device that would sort've allow me to have the Zyglak directly fight Sonitous (the reason why it didn't have its plague was kinda built around this plot device) though I wish to address your feedback because it presents a minor plot hole. The only problem is, I'm not sure how I could do it, considering how much physical violence was required in the story. I appreciate the rest of your feedback quite a lot (thanks by the way), though if you could help me through this particular problem, I'd be very grateful because I always like a second opinion. If you're too busy, I'm sure I'll be able to work around it eventually, so no pressure. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 12:35, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Brorag
Hey Bob, I saw you "created" the page for my character Brorag, what happened there? I'm pretty aware of writing that article, but the archive also leaves no mark of my edit. Was it deleted? 14:48, February 21, 2013 (UTC)

Hey there, saw you were on, and I'm going to leave my bimonthly message on your talk asking if you ever got around to reading my novels like you said you would. :P

Sorry, I'm just in a bit of an annoying mood right now XD. I assume the answer's most likely "no", because if real life's being half the pain for you as it is for me right now then you probably have next to no free time on your hands.

I should also take the time to say I'm still following your novels and I can't wait for ''Judgement Day. ''If you want at some point I'd be glad to do NRC reviews for your stories if you want. I'm in the process of restructering the club at the moment. 00:06, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Glad to see you've returned to full activity! Actually I was offering to write reviews of your stories for NRC, not the other way around. That said, I wholeheartedly will accept you into the club, like you said we need to encourage story-reading. I'd be honored to do NRC reviews for your stories too, if you want. Feel free to add yourself as a member on the club page. :)

And Into the Darkness, while a good starting point, is also arguably my worst written work in the series (having been done just about three years ago now). Still, it's great you'll read it over. You don't have to review it though-- unless you want to... 00:50, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Even your weakest writings weren't as bad as my weakest, trust me. :P Anyway, one good turn deserves another. I'll get those NRC reviews for your series up as soon as my workload evens out a little. Any personal preference to which stories you want reviewed, and in what order?

No problem, and thanks again for the offer. Even though ITD's quite poorly written, I hope it interests you enough to read the rest, at the very least. :P I hope to eventually review all of your stories, but I'll wait for the rewrite to do Ghosts and ''Over Your Shoulder. ''In the meantime I'll reread WiTD and Frozen Calling and get around to reviewing those two. :D

I'm already doing a chapter-by-chapter analysis of ITD on my own. Though I'm sure Varkie would like to hear all our input, what I'm trying to say is don't feel too obligated to review it; feeling obligated is my job.

Timmy ( talk ) 02:31, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Just thought you should know I made that slight revision to The Voyager. Hopefully that covers everything you mentioned. Also, I've been contemplating of changing Mersery's speciality as a scientist. At the moment, I have him written down as a chemist, but I don't seen that as a very practical specialisation for an Order of Mata Nui member and I can't think where chemistry may come in to play in the Matoran Universe. Do you think you could throw me a few suggestions of what he could specialise in? http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 11:38, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Erm...why are you changing the wording of ITD's prologue? Not that it doesn't sound better, but I'm just curious. Varkanax    Talk    20:30,2/24/2013

That's really awesome of you (I really have no other way of saying it), that you're going through and spell- and grammar checking it in addition to reviewing. Here I was expecting something like an NRC review and you give me a grammar-checked prologue. :D Absolutely in your debt.

Anyway, glad you liked it. The prologue sounds much better now, however, I'd prefer if in the future you didn't do any rewording or removal, barring grammar or spelling mistakes. It's not that the changes are bad by any means, I just don't really want my writing (no matter how bad it was back then) to be altered, sorry. If you find something that sounds awkward or you think should be removed you can mention it in your review or on my talk. As it is, though, I like the changes you made to the prologue, so I'll leave them in.

Also, can't wait for more Falling in the Black, and once again thanks. Varkanax    Talk    21:37,2/24/2013

Late Answer
Another Message by me.

I just looked at all my pages again and noticed that I never actually wrote the article for Brorag. He was the last character of the six main Toa group I still needed to do, and I somehow forgot it. The only thing I'll change on the article will be the small pic there, I want everybody to get a unique one :)

But many thanks for your help with that article! It's completely written and has no information missing. And about the rest of them: If you like to write with me, that's great! Some of them will have similar background, others not, but I can tell you which ones if you like. Your name will be mentioned in the trivia, or even the headline together with mine.

It's also nice to see both Brorag and Range are some of your favorite characters on the CBW! 19:01, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Well, how should you've known of Merall's gender? The Mata styled body doesn't tell you anything and the mask is also pretty neutral. However, since Range is already male I thought it was pretty clear I kept all the characters the same gender as their look-alikes :)

I have such a great idea for a new armor design that would match Merall perfectly. Let's see if she survives Chapter 2 or if I have to put the idea to some other character ;) 20:09, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Hey there, sorry for the late reply. Whilst I like all your suggestions, many of them have been used in some way or another. Mersery did actually participate in the Time Slip, relocating a number of Matoean. However, from a scientific point of view, he couldn't really have participated, seeing as the memory-erasing was done by Mata Nui rather than the Order. And as for being a doctor, I already have him listed as being a competent physician (an idea I plucked from his counterpart in ' storyline). However, I wouldn't want to make him a fully-fledged doctor, as I don't think that's what Mersery would really focus in the scientific world and I, personally, feel that him as a doctor would be a really forced reference to my love of Doctor Who.

Apologies if I'm sounding blunt or appear to be disregarding your ideas. They're all quite good, but I guess it's just that they don't really fit my vision(?) of Mersery as a scientist. I'll try and think up of something. As for the research team, well... I already had a very big idea about that beforehand, but you'll just have to wait and find out what it is. :P http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 08:54, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

Again, the Toa-enhancing suggestion is part of the backstory. XD Since the storylines of myself and Scotttjt are semi-connected, it mentions on Mersery's page that he was part of the project that transformed Toa Hydros into what he is today. But the study of Energized Protodermis could still work. Like I said, I'll pay some thought to these ideas. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 11:31, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

Cameo
Hey Bob, do you have any favorite Matoran character? If so, I would like to offer you a very small cameo for Patriots, where you will see him/her in the prologue. If you like that suggestion, answer me as quickly as possible; I'm taking the first pictures very soon! 19:37, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Here you go!



I decided to use Danza; I basically needed to make a Metruan or a normal '03 Matoran for that purpose. I would've also liked to use the others, but I haven't got the mask of Lothorna, and like I said: Av-Matoran styled bodies don't match.

I'm very interested how you will like his Danza's small appearance in Patriots! The picture shows him next to Farside Village (some Trivia) ;) 19:52, March 6, 2013 (UTC)

Title Feature in Character Template
Hey, I dunno if you know about this, but you can have an alternate title in the Character infobox templates. Like, for the page Nalek (ThatDevilGuy). The Character infobox says "Nalek", yet the page in named "Nalek (ThatDevilGuy)". The coding is as follows: {{Character etc.
 * title = Title. "Nalek", for example.
 * header = Toa
 * -- [{{fullurl:User:ThatDevilGuy}} http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110823111447/custombionicle/images/4/43/TDG.gif] ( Talk ) 11:01, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

Hey there, sorry for the late reply. I don't think I had any plans for that Turaga of Stone; I primarily just created him to be Thode's 'employer' in Perspectives. I could use 'Slagjaw' as a character in the future, if the need arises, but for now, I don't think I'll need him. But do feel free to use him in some promotional shots if you want to take them. :D http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 21:05, March 25, 2013 (UTC)

Also, I didn't really touch on this, but I think some promo pictures would be great. I personally don't think the banner I made is too good, so any promo images that can brighten it up would be much appreciated. I intend to post the finished it very soon (hopefully today). http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 22:52, March 28, 2013 (UTC)

Well, I've published Perspectives. It's finally out online. I didn't proof-read it though, as I was eager to just post it. I've got Varkanax reading through it for mistakes, thankfully. XD http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 01:23, March 29, 2013 (UTC)

It's quite alright. I had fun writing it. :P

EDIT: I take it you're also anticipating Doctor Who, no? http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 01:50, March 29, 2013 (UTC)

Character Pages
Hey Bobby, seems you are quite active these times, aren't you :)

Well, as you may noticed, I wrote the article for my character Aescela. Since she and the other Matoran have a similar background, I would ask you if you want to write with me now (since you asked for it earlier).

On these pages, you can also be a bit creative regarding their specific backgrounds or jobs they had or the exact reason they came to Farside Village. If you don't want to, you can always just make a similar story to Aesclea's.

Tell me what you think! 23:14, March 29, 2013 (UTC)

Done. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 02:12, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

Many thanks for the article about Viretha! It's great you also put some information about her early life on Spherus Magna/Metru Nui, which works well together with the rest of the story. Nice integration of her Firearm :)

Only thing to complain is that you got her gender wrong; she is actually a female ;) But I understand why you hadn't known that, she is neither a Ga-Matoran nor has any details or build that show otherwise, so it's just a little thing to correct.

Otherwise, nice work on that article!

At last, about the "missing" page: I think Page_y10 doesn't even exist. Since I had to design a specific layout for the images of the comic, I always copied from the last page and later altered the file name, so it just happened that I typed in an additional page which doesn't even exist :) 14:01, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

I just wonder; who do think are females/males of my story? I think I just integrated 4 (Viretha, Aescela, Xafri and Merall) so that's sadly not very balanced... the reason for that is that I did that stupid stupid self-MoC sign-up on MOCpages. Since almost everybody there is male, I had a gigantic overflow of male characters, and I couldn't just go with making everybody of my characters to be female.

Really, I'm never doing sign-ups again. I mean, most of those people in the story don't even read the comic! Next time, I'll choose some MoCs of my readers and integrate those :I

Still, thanks for creating that article again :) 17:50, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, you are surely right on Vastara, Tilira and Falecía's genders, I though you talked about the females in Uprising :D

I hope that whole gender confusion won't appear in the last chapter, since I can design the bodies of them more than with the old designs.

And that you mention Jacobi... he's of course a self-MoC with the most ridiculous name I ever saw. Gonna change that.

And that sign-up when similar to yours, since everybody wanted to make just not an appearance, but a very important one.

And yes, I made Glonor, good you noticed him by now ;)

I just think the role I put Danza in was too little, since he just hasn't more then a minor statist role. Glonor will at least get a bit more attention. He is also one of your favorite characters, could that be?

And yes. Balfe Nui is the Island where everything takes place, including the location of Farside Village. 19:09, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58
Hey Bobby, I'm a new member of this wiki, and my trilogy is called the Damned desert Trilogy. I was wondering in the next story serial if I might be able to do some chapters in Tethys and include Tollubo and Jollun. I also want to maybe include Karabak in World of Hell, which I am writing, and include Lothorna and Jex in THIS IS BARA MAGNA. It's because there aren't so many characters left for me to make, and I need some crossover characters as well. So can I have permission to use them?

On the second thought, never mind. Still, u r AWESOMER THAN AWESOME!!!

Matoro58 Re: Characters
Thank you for your permission for a use of agori characters. I'd be happy to use Eselox and Lothorna. Probably in  Serbinius' blog, because I think it might be interesting for one of them to fight with Serbinius or Sahmad. Probably it would be because they insulted Thornox, a half-Zesk and half-agori, who likes eating dead stuff. I want to like include Santis in World of Hell, because you said he travels in alternate universes. Maybe also an alternate versaion of Juulant and Mudro. I hope those are enough and I gave a few good reasons why.

MATORO58

P.S. If I make an indirect reference of Tollubo through Santis if you O.K the characters I asked in this blog. And I need help to think of a fanon location in the damned desert universe.

Matoro58: Pouks
Hey bobby, can you read a page of mine. It's called Pouks. Tell me if I need to add a quote. I know about the no pictuters part because I don't know how to upload one.

Matoro 58: RE: Pouks
Thank you for telling me what the page is like. I recently uploaded pictures of him. And about Toa Santis, I'll include him probably in THIS IS BARA MAGNA and Eselox in Serbinius' blog. Now Juulant I'll include in World of Hell, probably in a Tajun chapter and Mudro in a Rocktus chapter.

Now I've got a favor for you and I'll hope you'll do it. I want you to do a story of Pouks in his matoran past. I'm asking you becuase I've read a few chapters of Over Your Shoulders and Whispers In the Dark and they are  AWESOMER THAN AWESOME!!!! So I hope you could do it, and thank you once again for giving me permission to use some Fractures and Deserts of Death characters. See ya bobby!

Matoro58: Juulant, Santis, and Mudro
Bobby, I will use Juulant in World of Hell in a fight which her vs. Kiina. Tell me what weapons to use so I could make a true apperance.

Also about Mudro, was he alive around 1,001 AGC? Because you didn't say when he died. And I mean which year. I'm just checking. Actually, maybe instead he can be kept alive? I think maybe he'll look like a bad*ss if he tries to kill  Serbinius. : ).

I think I know that Santis is able to be used immediatly. Because he doesn't have the weapons and cape from Falling in the Black. And I won't reveal anything unless if he was at Gaaki, Bomanga, and Kualus' universe. I would like to cange his mask. If he can aquire the Danju in the Damned desert alternate universe, somewhere underground, I'd be obliged.

So let me know what Juulant's weapons are, if I can have Mudro alive, and if Santis can have a lead role in THIS IS BARA MAGNA.

How do you keep toa santis's mask please post pictures or something.

Onu-matoran slave (talk) 13:51, April 9, 2013 (UTC)Onu-matoran slave

Matoro58: RE: Pouks story
Hey bobby, Matoro here. I was thinking, can we write the story together. I do the first part and you do the second part. Maybe they could be as long as a story serial both parts. That way, we could both contribute to a project I thought of. If you don't think it's good, then we could add some of your characters. Probably the matoran in Falling in the Black, because they originated from the same island. And maybe Tollubo could make a side appearance in Karzahni.

Hope your revamps are going good, and see ya.

MATORO58

P.S. You like Roodaka because you made Racasix out of her.

Just wanted to note that this picture of yours has a truly amazing effect. How exactly have you done it? Just by taking a picture when dumbing a big rock into the water? 15:12, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Oh man... I can't get over how awesome the effect with Jekkai jumping is! Seems that you can do a bunch of amazing effects with water!

And yes, I always follow your updates, and I like the new pictures of characters you upload :)

A big banner then, with Vorred's face on it saying that 50% of the comic is mine due to the inspiration? Nah :D

Just make a note somewhere. Would be cool! 15:32, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, those pictures I have already seen, even when I may never actually commented... seems I forgot. Those look very atmospheric and you can almost feel the adventure when you look at them :)

And I always wandered about if that mask was a reference or not. I came across the whole article for some times (it exists since some time, right?). Great you made that, it's cool to be a "part" of your story! 16:13, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: RE: Pouks story
It's okay. I'll write the story myself. Just give me a good one word title for it. Your titles r AWESOME, AWESOMEST, AWESOMER THAN THE AWESOMEST. I'm gonna need a matoran character other than Tollubo. You said I could use Lothorna. I'll take up that offer. She'll live on Pouks' home island like Pouks and Varian. And she'll get fixed. Like it?

MATORO58

P.S. Mudro has a drinking problem. .

Matoro58: RE: Degeneration
Thank you. The title will be the one above. ''Degeneration. ''You could make the "Fixed" version of Lothorna. I made a "fixed" version of Pouks, and it's bad. :P

Varian wasn't part of Norik's toa team. However, I read that Tollubo was on Voya Nui. So from Karzahni and on, he will be on Voya Nui.

Now, if I could use any of your matoran (I'm already using Lothorna) name them. And can I have Turaga Vilinus as the insane Turaga. The matoran can live on the Tren Krom Peninsula. Nihdiki will be in my story, and I was thinking of Lhikan being there, but he doesn't exsist in the damned desert universe.

MATORO58

P.S. How sane do you think Tollubo is, due to Chapter 1 of Whispers in the Dark.

MATORO58: RE: Degeneration
I think a blue painted 2008 Hau nuva sounds good, but I don't want it to be a Hau. If you could think of a fanon mask power, I'd be happy to use it. Can you think of another mask for the pre-fixed Pouks. The rode was given to him by Karzahni, and the Purai (Mask of Emulation) was given to him by Teridax. And if you could of a pre-fixed mask for Nihdiki, I'll be happy to use. : D

MATORO58

P.S. I don't have anything to say here

Matoro58: Degeneration cast
I'll use the mask of sensory apitude as Lothorna's Karzahni mask. And I've recently created a turaga who wears a Sanok, so that turaga will be the insane one. Now I'll show you the main characters for Degeneration. Like it? Tollubo will be introduced in Karzahni, but will be a main character. I'll also make a joke where he can't shake hands with anyone unless if they want to have holes in them. And can I have Tourik make a minor appearance. It's when he and his Toa team (Jovan's) arrive at Voya Nui (Southern continent). Jovan will sacrifice his powers so Nihdiki, Dalu, Varian, Pouks, Reysa, an a Ta-matoran called Alicaer become toa, so he'll become a turaga. I've already made a turaga version of him as well.
 * Pouks
 * Nihdiki
 * Dume
 * Krakua
 * Lothorna
 * Varian
 * Kazi
 * Tollubo

MATORO58

Matoro58: RE: Tourik
Don't worry. I'll make his appearance so brief, the reader won't notice. I also need to ask permission for usage of marriage. But in this universe, female matoran are able to give birth ("Who in their right mind would do that?"-Tollubo). I'm also asking for permission of beer drinking (I want the turaga to go insane by getting drunk).

MATORO58

P.S. The turaga will be a turaga of stone.

Zero Hour banner
So I created a banner for the upcoming "Zero Hour". Just wanted come by to hear what you think, in case I should change something. Well... here it is.



Matoro58: Turaga Hewkii
Now, the matoran will produce, not reproduce, more matoran. They'll just be dead souls from the red star that lost their memory.

Now since the Turaga wears a sanok and is a turaga of stone, I basically decide to use Hewkii. He switched places with the turaga. I decided Hewkii to be the first turaga.

MATORO58

P.S. Click the link here to go to Degeneration

Matoro58: World of Hell
Bobby, Matoro58 here. Could you doo me a favor and read Chapter 14 of World of Hell. I just finished it and I think it's epic.

Matoro58: RE: World of Hell
Okay, I'll fill you in about the deal about World of Hell and the Damned desert universe. In the Damned desert universe, Helryx uleashed a water nova blast during the events of that universe's Dwellers in the Darkness. The Toa Hagah, Axonn, and Keetongu escaped while Zaktan, Brutaka, Helryx, Miserix, and Mata Nui die. You see, at the last moment, Teridax, switched minds again with Mata Nui.

The deal about Jiirka, is that, well, during her imprisonment, she was asleep. Part of her was able to influence The remaing Order of Mata Nui members to send Sidorak, Vezok, Radiak, and the Toa Magna to Bara Magna. She also influenced Vezon, as she said, to bring Nektann with him. They were both influenced by her. She also influenced the Sisters of the Skrall and the Skrall to help Vezon and Nektann. Before the Toa Magna and their allies arrived at Rocktus, she revealed her presence to Vezon and Nektann. Plus, she's more evil than Teridax. Instead of taking over, she wants to destroy. Plus, an evil villian in most stories and books I've read reveal their plans because they think they're unstoppable. Same deal with Jiirka, but she wanted the Toa Magna's blood to fuel her to her true form. She's the main antagonist of the series, and evil than any villian of Bionicle combined with the other villians in Bionicle. Certavus stopped her the first time, and I'm currently planning a story about that. She doesn't care about the sunlight or the air. She just wants to see it all destroyed.

If you don't get what I said in the first paragraph, it's easier to read the chapters before chapter 14 of World of Hell.

MATORO58

Zero Hour
Hey, so I decided to go ahead and try to make my own attempt for Zero Hour's images.

Cheers. &mdash; I'm a  Koala  05:24, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

No problem! If you ever need a banner for a story or whatever, just leave me a message! &mdash; I'm a  Koala  21:06, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

New Message :I
Hey Bobby, I've read the message you send me, and I don't think I truly understand. Matoro58 is upset by me not making a new headline? All that talk was never meant, I actually only wanted to note that I liked your picture and saw no reason to make an extra heading for that.

"Hey Vorred, I'm Matoro58. I here to complain because you wrote in one of my messages to BobTheDocter27. It's like spam what you did. Not that I'm complaining or stuff."

Sorry, but I think there is somebody here who misses a definition.

I now sadly have a bad impression of a user I don't even know, because he simply accuses me of something that he calls "spam" which casts a damning light on me.

Oh, and if you like, here is a pic I made today when I was outside taking some photos:



AW SO SAD

Until then! 19:56, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not going to hate Matoro58 now, don't be afraid :D

I never really thought of it before, but of course Aescela isn't able to fight after she lost her leg when Farside Village was attacked.

If you want to make her a friend, be sure to remove some limbs so they're both injured and can lament about that the whole day while the others save the world :P 13:34, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

That would be fun :P If you make a character, be sure to don't make his arms disassembled in combat, otherwise pen-paling would be quite difficult... unless he writes with his feet :D 20:42, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Yo
Hi BobTheDoctor27,

I've been on CBW for years...but I, for whatever reason, don't think I've introduced myself. Anyways, just stopped by to say hello. -- Kopaka mata97  | Has Arrived 03:36, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Oh! Great to see you again, man! LOL. Anyways, want to collab on a story some day? -- Kopaka mata97  | Has Arrived 19:12, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Sure thing! I'm planning on a short story called Seventh Divide. It's going to be a prequel to The Silence of the End. Up to it? -- Kopaka mata97  | Has Arrived 19:30, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Alright! Sounds like a plan! -- Kopaka mata97  | Has Arrived 23:38, April 24, 2013 (UTC) PS. Check out MoC contest - User blog:Kopakamata97/Predaria MoC Contest 1 -- Kopaka  mata97  | Has Arrived 23:38, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Co-writing request
Hey there BTD! I was actually wondering if you would be interested in co-writing 'The Hagahs' with me. It's about a group of Toa/Glatorian mercenaries that fight for justice in the world. (if you want to co-write the novel with me, I will give you more info). I'm going to include myself as a character called Firey Star and I have a question. Do you give me permission to use you as a character? You will be called BTD.

Well hope you reply soon and take care!

Firestar. Fire Alone Can Save Our Clan...  18:37, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: RE: Jollun
Okay, got the deal about your brother. I also want to tell you I joined the Custom Bionicle Reviews Wiki, just for kicks. Now I can say how @#$%! and how AWESOME sets are.

A Proposition For You
Greetings, salutations, bonjour, etc.! If the title of my message hasn't intruiged you yet, then let's hope its content will. Following your lead,I have decided to perform a semi-reboot of my storyline. When I say semi, I mean I am only rebooting JoD and its sequels, rather than anything set beforehand like Punishment. The reason behind this is relievingly simple. When it comes to writing, it is clear I am better at short stories than longer ones. This is basically because I'm not so good at stretching my ideas out for such long periods of time. Effectively, I can plan the long game, but am not so good at actually playing it. This is noticeable in JoD through its infrequent lack of updates; I have dozens of ideas and plot points, but I don't know how to get to them. And that is basically what JoD is at this stage; just filler waiting to be justified by a key plot point.

Tha has resulted in me craving for a fresh start with no baggage, which is what I've decided to do. What this reboot is basically about is me being more organised with my storyline and planning it out more efficiently. This doesn't mean I intend to start from scratch. Most (if not all) of my current plans and ideas will be re-adapted in some way, but from a fresh, new perspective. Many of my plans were oncieved some time ago, and since many of my tastes as a writer have developed or changed, I wish to reevaluate them.

Now you are most likely wondering what all this has to do with you (and bravo if you've read this far). This is the interesting part. In this planned reboot, I would like to have two experienced writers to help me plan out my storyline and help me set it in a particular direction. They would help me develop my ideas and expand upon them whilst also suggesting their own. I've already got Varkanax on my side, but I was wondering if you would like to also step in as a writing consultant. You don't need to write anything for my storyline, simply be part of a creative team who provide feedback and ideas, so it  should not  make you too busy. If you don't want to join or simply don't have the time that is perfectly fine. But it would be great to have you aboard, as I plan a storyline of Moffat-level complexity. --http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 17:56, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Speaking of Moffat, what have you thought of the latest series of Doctor Who? Anyway, the choice is yours.

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Matoro58: Frozen Calling
Hey Bob, Matoro58. Now, I hae a question about the story serial Frozen Calling. Now, it says that you will not include any Main saga characters in it apart from Glonor. Howver, there is a picture showing Tollubo, Betak, and Tourik standing over "Gravition's" body. This confuses me, and I don't know if it's a rewrite, or if it's just for a different story serial.

MATORO58

Hello! Now that I am back with my computer (I've been operating off a touchscreen, which is noticeable in the last major message I sent to you), I shall be able to type as much as I want now. Thank you for that very positive feedback! I've forward it on to TH, since I think it's stuff he'd definitely like to read and take in. I'm glad you caught the whole Jekyll-Hyde aspect of Alxor's character, as that will prove to be a major part of his backstory and plot point further down the line. In regards to Mersery and Herkain, their relationship is going to be a very focal part of the story, especially during Act Two, which will begin with the invasion of Versuva. Whilst I understand your puzzlement on how Mersery and Alxor's paths will intertwine, you don't need to worry. All will be made clear in due time.

Also, in regards to your new role (rank?) as one of my story consultants, I'm wondering if it would be possible to discuss my storyline and my plans for it on the CBW/WMF chatroom on Mibbit whenever you have free time on the weekend. That way I can have a conversational discussion with both you and Varkanax at once and be able to avoid posting my ideas on talk pages here on CBW. If that doesn't quite work for you, I'm sure we can figure something else out. Anyway, time to make my announcement blog! http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 06:20, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Hey bob. im kinda new here but I got brught over by your aesome stories and really cool mocks. You re really awesome and I want to write good stories like yours. :L I think everything about the [fractures universe] is awesome and your characters really deep. I have lots of favorites of yours. I think [kyros] is funny and [tollubo] is best hero ever! I love frozen calling and I reaally cantMwait for zero our.

You re my idol and I think that you re awesome! Please don't ever leave because you bionicles are really special and all my friends at school are reading your story. :d

Bah, I don't think you really need to worry about creating an account. I never did. You just need to pick a username and join the chatroom. Speaking of which, is now a good time for you to join the chatroom so I can just start filling you in on some of my ideas? I'll just leave the chatroom link here if you'd like to enter. I promise DW talk as well. :P

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Bah, it's perfectly fine! :P http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 09:08, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: Tourik's guide to the Fractures Alternate Universe
Hey bobby, it's me Matoro58. So I read your March 2013 post, and yep. You were right. You'll be switching to Tollubo in the middle of the Frozen Calling. However, I noticed something at the end of it: Tourik's guide to the Fractures Alternate Universe, which I'm guessing is the story from Tourik's perspective. I like the title, because it sounds like Makuta's guide to the Matoran Universe.

However, you posted it on your stories list, and I clicked on it, but you haven't made the page yet. Also, you accidentally titled Before the Dawn's Infobox "Vendetta". So I have a question? When will you post Tourik's guide to the Fractures Alternate universe? I can't wait for it, and I guess some other people are waiting, too.

MATORO58

Matoro58: Blazrox
Hey Bobby, it's me Matoro. So I recently published another part of Degeneration, and I mentioned Makuta Blazrox but not by name. Is that okay with you?

MATORO58

Matoro58: Frozen calling Humor
Thanks for reading Degeration. I'm glad you told me it's going good. So anyways, I was readig Frozen Calling, and I noticed you were using Reidak as a prison guard, which was humorous, considoring his destructive nature.

Keep up the good work! :D

MATORO58

Matoro58: Story Serial
Hey bobby, Matoro here. Now, I need your advice on something. Now see, if you read one of my pages called Esnidar, you'll see that I didn't do a good job of making his past. I would just post his past on his page, but he's one of the Major-Bigtime characters in my stories. So I was thinking of doing a story serial for him, but I'm caught up with finishing "This is Bara Magna, Serbinius' blog, Degeneration, and Legends of Anarchy." Now I was thinking of deleting this is Bara Magna, because it's the weakest of all of them, but I still feel like I need to include Santis in a story.

However, if I delete This is Bara Magna, I will probably make Santis appear in Legends of Anarchy and The Last Stand, the Story Serial after LoA.

So tell me what I should do in order to make Esndar's story serial, and if I m allowed to have Santis included in Legends of Anarchy.

MATORO58

Would now be a better time to try that meet-up again? XD http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 09:12, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: RE: Story Serial
OK, about the Esnidar crime thing, the Order planned for him to be imprisoned forever, but they freed him just to give a second chance...not to drink up and waste himself. However, as I told you, I'd like to detail Esnidar's matoran past in a story that describes his violent nature, because he used to be part of the Toa Mangai, and they all came from different islands. In Esnidar's case, an island similar to Zakaz, except it smells better and there no Tahtorak, but lot's of Rahi and Conditions similar to Xia. Jiirka's the Makuta of the Island. At least, until she got defeated on Bara Magna. Then an unknown male Makuta got the island. The island is called Jara-Nui. Is that good for a story serial?

Now about Santis' mask, I think it would be better if he wore a mask of undeath, then in The Last Stand, trade it for a Danju.

I hope this works.

MATORO58

Ah, okay. Don't worry about it then. Also, the wait for The Name of the Doctor (even if its only broadcasted a day later for you guys in the UK) is murdering me! D: http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 22:04, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

MOFFAT!!! XD

But in all seriousness, I'm now really looking forward to it. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 23:00, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Well, DW in itself is rather implausible, so I should be able to let that slide. As for the ending (or the "moment of moments" as Matt Smith described it), I'm not surprised that it has a cliffhanger so unbearable. As a fan of Moffat's Sherlock, I know that any cliffhanger whipped up him will have excruciating an wait for a resolution. I'm primarily interested in knowing whether it lived up to Moffat's very bold claim of it changing the course of Who history. Still, I'm especially keen to see it now. From the BBC promo clips, Strax is as funny as ever. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 23:35, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: RE: Story Serial
Well, I'm planning an adult side to this story about Esnidar. Basically, this is to detail his life as a matoran, how he became a toa, and his revenge against the Makuta, who is giong to be called Girdis. I already made a Makuta MOC, so I think Girdis would be a good Makuta. Girdis is arrogant, power-hungry, deeply corrupt, more than insane, and hates The Plan. He was the Makuta responsible for killing all those Toa of Iron and Magnetism. He drove Karzahni insane, and caused the Great Disruption by disguising himself as a Po-Matoran and spreading a rumor that the Ta-Matoran were spreading their borders. He absolutely hates any Toa on Jovan's team (Yes, he hates Tourik), and any toa he hates more is Esnidar.

Anyways, I was thnking that Jara-Nui could be the home island of Thode's team, to describe Thode's violent nature, and also because I made a Toa of lightning that has a similar build to him.

MATORO58

Matoro58: RE: Story Serial
Well, the Toa of Lightning's page won't be made for some time. But until then, I'll try and make sure credit goes to you for Thode existing.

The deal is with Girdis, is that he was evil from the moment he was created. He kept killing off Matoran until Miserix condemned him to die at the hands of Teridax. But, as evil as he his, Teridax sent Girdis in hiding on Metru Nui as a Po-Matoran called Deik. However, he started the Matoran civil war on Metru Nui just for his own amusment. Then, when Teridax overthrew Miserix, Girdis came out of hiding, and to prove his loyalty, kill off the Makuta of Tren Krom's island. He kept killing Makuta, and was responsible for Jiirka being sent to Bara Magna. Then he plotted to kill Teridax on the Southern continent, but when Teridax found out, they battled, and Teridax left Girdis for the dead. However, a "fixed" Onu Matoran found him and nursed him back to health, and Girdis, seeing potential value in it, he turned the Onu-Matoran into a slave by putting antidermis in the Onu-Matoran's systems.

Now, when Girdis and the Onu-Matoran traveled to Jara-Nui, they transformed into Matoran as disguises. They met Esnidar, and Girdis thought that Esndar would make a valuable Pawn. However, Esnidar was captured with other other matoran by Skakdi Pirates.

So does the events in the third paragraph fit in a story? Let me know what you think of this.

MATORO58

Just saw the finale! Oh Moffat, that beautiful man! I'd personally say that's the best series finale I've seen in a long time! That cliffhanger! Absolutely loved it. SO MANY QUESTIONS! How will we survive until November!? I need answers! D: http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 11:36, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

The Paternoster Gang were great as well! :D http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 12:11, May 19, 2013 (UTC)