User blog comment:Chicken Bond/The Story Arrives!/@comment-1777499-20110517110350

Amazing. Definitely amazing.

Though I found something that I think should be changed:

For most of his life, his duties as a member of a secretive circle of warriors and spies had forced him to force down any feelings of regret down.

I'd change "force down" to bury, and remove the "down" at the end.