User blog comment:Varkanax39/Opinions on Shattering/@comment-1221909-20111012204746

So far, Shattering has proven to be an excellent story. It is interesting to look at the story of a resistance group that appears to be heavily losing in their war with their dictators, compared to other such scenario cases where the resistance is either winning or on even terms with their foes. The writing is very well done and gracefully executed. Whilst there is the very rare mistake or typo here and there (but that should not even be considered problem, because all writers do the same in their stories here on CBW), they do not even remotely affect the paced, engaging, and tense writing style you incorporate into the Shattering.

The plot is very well-devised, and is not rushed in the remotest. I am particularly glad with the focus on key characters, and the spacing out the appearance of new ones. In previous installments (primarily TEG) it was an exceptionally large stretch to keep track of all these new characters at once, but you've been taking a much more steady pace when performing the introductions of new characters.

Overall, this story is excellent.