Talk:Zero Hour: Chapter 2

It's time for me to open the discussion about this second chapter, isn't it? Well, let's go.

First off, I'd like to point out the attention to detail in the comic. The background is always filled with characters, creatures and various objects which creates the feel of an much more alive world the story takes place in. The trees I already mentioned on your talk page are taken from Bionicle Heroes and bring back some nice memories of the game!

Secondly, the dialogue in this chapter was probably even better than before, as well as the character development. Jekkai, for example, has his kinda depressing moments at Inika falls with Merra (the whole place makes me wonder... was Jaller the only one being slain there? Did one of the Inika literally fell down the hill once?), and later are many humurous moments with him. I enjoyed the scenes where he tries to balance the stone and just can't get it right since he's always distracted be the discussions of the others :D

This chapter contains much more action than the one before. What stands out to me is your variety of villains... you have Makuta, Skakdi and presumably other warriors, which make the "evil" faction much more interesting.

In the end, you took so many characters-in-water shots... how could I not like it? It looks like this chapter was made for me :P

With all the action going on, I look forward to what happens next. They lenght of them is always right and I can sit back and enjoy another installment for a long time! -- 11:48, August 3, 2014 (UTC)