User blog comment:LoganWoerner/Niha Storyline Character Applications/@comment-5174759-20131021165914

Hmm... I would've liked to see my character Merall in your story as the mentor/love interest/order member, but all of these roles require male characters.

Instead I chose Range as a possible love interest for her!

Name: Range

Species: Toa

Gender: male

Abilities: one-handed sword fighting, usage of his elemental powers of water and his great Nuva mask of shielding

Bio: What exactly do you mean with that? Since he's a character which is only new in your story the only biography he has is the one in my comic series. Should I add another fictional background?

Core beliefs: -Range always keeps his actions as close to the Toa-Code as possible - He always tries to do the best in his power for others in need - Acts as a role model for many Matoran

Now onto your discussion points:


 * Making Niha an artificial Toa was and still is a great idea. It will be a completely different reading experience; I'm sure she'll discover what it means to be "alive"... and I'm also excited for how the others will react to her.


 * Maybe you should add some kind of "discrimination" against her with others seeing her as strange or even weird being a robot. It is probably harder for her to build up relationships with others this way.


 * I can't give you an exact name, but maybe an idea on how to find one: I always search for one word which describes the whole action in the installment the best... you could try that.