User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130811222901/@comment-958607-20130812195814

Not a MOC.... just Glonor torturing Theran in various different scenarios. XD

Yes, I can definitely see the interesting division coming up between Range and Theran. Theran does indeed seem a lot more battle-hardened and ruthless while Range comes across as the free-spirited, youthful hero. But, seeing this divide get placed between them is a huge point in your character development. :P I think it's great how you got in there and ruffled some feathers, spicing things up and changing how we see these two friends. :P It really reflects the highs and lows of any friendship... not that many of my friends killed anyone. XD

I'll do a review for Chapter 6 but I thought it was nice how Nuva mentioned Chaeus having been lost. It really links his death with how Theran is feeling, which is something strong to build on. :P

I assume that much of this angst and misery he is suffering was seen in the gap between Uprising and Patriots, which is very nice. In many cases we don't get to see the important parts and it really draws emphasis onto how he has been molded into this angry, gritty, barbaric leader who will do anything to stop this Undead contagion. :P

It really redefines the concept of heroism. The other Farside Toa are, although unconventional, quite mollified. Even Merall looks down on Theran's act of murder. Although they are warriors, they have morals and limitations, whereas Theran doesn't and that really sets him apart. I might give him a rough backstory when I write his page. XD