User talk:FluffySkirmix


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Welcome
Hello, and welcome to this Wiki! Please come to me or any of the other administrators if you need any help.  Jareroden 97  00:09, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome to cb wikia!
We all hope you have a good time,so go on, and help our wiki by editing a page. -onewa2

Re:
Sure, I can see what I can do for it!

Alright, I think I've got it fixed! So, what do you think?

Sure!

Alright, I've got it done!

Whoops. Let me fix that then...  Jareroden 97  23:08, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Welcomes!
Welcome here! if you don't mind me saying so, you have a couple of wicked mocs! ODST! 01:27, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re:
Ah, I see you also have a MOCpages. If you don't mind me saying, you've got some great M.O.C.s on there!  Jareroden 97  02:43, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

I added a period. Collector1

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Sure.

Whoops. Let me fix that right quick. XD

Sure thing.  Jareroden 97  01:07, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hello, welcome back to CBW, despite this might be a visit, hope you stay! ~Jman  98   is   AMAZING! ~ 06:27, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, looks like you took my advice and actualy did decide to actualy do something. Now if only you'd keep it up.... XD  Jare roden  97   06:34, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. And the contest was CBW's Next Top Femmy. Link.  Jare roden  97   06:37, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

This gives you all the info you need on creating one.  Jare roden  97   00:16, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Odd. Try asking.  Jare roden  97   01:00, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

If you want to post Xarana, go here, and click "Carve" (it'll be in the upper right, next to the "Search this Wiki" bar). Once your in the edit screen, you'll see a bar right under "This is a talk page. Please remember to sign your posts using four tildes". You'll see the multiple pictures icon in the bar.  Jare roden  97   01:15, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Erhm, isn't the icon bar when you're editing and creating a new page exactly the same?  Jare roden  97   01:21, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm all out of character backstory ideas. :L  Jare roden  97   20:11, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

You can't vote for your own stuff. If you want to vote fot something else, just place your name under the slideshow. And I don't know why it isn't on the main contest page.  Jare roden  97   00:58, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

If there's no what?  Jare roden  97   02:43, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

You mean you don't know how to put pics in an infobox?  Jare roden  97   02:46, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure. Mabye if you create the page, I can help then....  Jare roden  97   02:51, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, well I'm not sure how I can help you. Sorry. You may want to ask TheSlicer.  Jare roden  97   02:57, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

No, I had trouble when I started too. Don't beat yourself up. XD  Jare roden  97   02:59, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

I am right now.... :D  Jare roden  97   03:33, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sharka? :P  Jare roden  97   04:00, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't got TOO crazy, just moderately crasy. :P And I fixed them.  Jare roden  97   05:07, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

No problem  Jare roden  97   16:32, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Huh?  Jare roden  97   03:09, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Here's a link to the comic series. http://custombionicle.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Jman98/Custom_BIONICLE:_The_Comic_Series Right now it's on hold, and will probably never be completed. :L  Jare roden  97   05:45, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

The illustrator left.  Jare roden  97   06:14, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know. Also, wanna' join a chat me and a few other users are having? http://wbe04.mibbit.com/?settings=d7c4297f8766fd84e6e6b3ce5c0fbc58&server=irc.mibbit.net&channel=%23Wikimetru  Jare roden  97   20:32, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it was a.... random point in the conversation XD  Jare roden  97   21:43, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know.  Jare roden  97   23:02, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorries. :P  Jare roden  97   23:53, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. And which chest design?  Jare roden  97   00:26, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know the opprotunity has not presented itself yet.  Jare roden  97   00:30, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's at the end of April.--Bye y'all... I mean, you all 00:34, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I like them.  Jare roden  97   00:40, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, my mind's a bit to muddled to think about it right now. :P  Jare roden  97   00:43, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yep
Yeah, she's submittable.--Bye y'all... I mean, you all 00:51, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it's a bit difficult to explain how to do it. Unless you know how to use templates.  Jare roden  97   01:11, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, mabye you should upload the pics. Then I can help you from there.  Jare roden  97   04:03, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Huh?  Jare roden  97   04:34, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Who's pics? STARS Tearox and Xarana?  Jare roden  97   05:19, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ah. Alright, but what is your latest page? I don't remember..... xD  Jare roden  97   17:41, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I'll edit it. And I think the final look is good.  Jare roden  97   03:59, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'll finish it after I go to the store. And after I eat my elk BBQ. :P  Jare roden  97   22:21, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

xD  Jare roden  97   22:30, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I was about to tell you, but it seems you just figured it out. XD

Also, I'll finish Blackout's page in a little bit.  Jare roden  97   01:52, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

I mean Breakdown. xD  Jare roden  97   01:54, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Not sure, as I'm already working on The Jareroden Saga, Broken Worlds, and Mission into Darkness. So, I don't know. D:  Jare roden  97   03:17, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sure.  Jare roden  97   00:05, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, what do you owe me... OH. Lear to make templates. :P  Jare roden  97   03:43, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

You should probably ask about that one. He made the story. :P  Jare roden  97   18:48, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I got nothing. And don't worry about asking him. I guarantee he's heard wierder. :P  Jare roden  97   00:42, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blood spatter tips, along with creepy situations involving them. Nice to meet you Fluffy Skirmix! My friend J97 did not lie when he said I could help you out. Now there are several ways that a masacre scene could work out. Say you have a moc causing alot of carnage to alot of people. You would want to emphasize some of the, grosser details of the Massacre, and more than blood blood blood. I mean like organs, muscle attatchments, spatter of blood, also emphasizing the noises of those things ripping, tearing, or spattering is also a good way to go. Be sure also that the person causing all of it gets a blood bath as well. Say blood on his mask, or all over his arms, maybe even in his mouth! Another thing is decribing the scene afterward. Here is an example. A scene from the The Hand of Fear.

"They looked around the main hall. The place was filled with gore; blood was all over the floors, walls, and even a little on the ceiling. Bodies were lying all over the place, and they were all covered with blood. Two bodies were pinned on the walls by a sword sticking through their chests, blood dripping off of them and onto the floor. One of the bodies was hanging from the ceiling by a chain that was wrapped around it's mouth. The jaw of the body broke off from the head and came plummeting down from the high ceiling. It splattered when it hit the floor, and splashed blood onto the two messengers. "

Take into account also for things like how the blood spatter has an effect on other people. Like say your character was killing someone else, the other people could be trying not to fall down in their blood, until they tripped in someones smaller intestine. That kind of gorry gross thing adds to a scene, and in the midst of a battle, it adds a sense of realisticness. And iff the fell down in a puddle of blood, describe them tasting it and spitting it out, or something like that. Or perhapse it getting in their eyes and blinding them. All in all, just attempt to make it sound as if the gore is also effecting the other people involving the massacre, and it should sound realistic. Also noises like popping and snapping of bone, or the wine and crunch of armor, coliding with the small thick spatter of blood. Or the sound like a water balloon when someones guts spill out all over the floor.

If you have any more questions, let me know, but that is just my experience with it. Hope it was helpful, and once again, it was nice to meet you. :)

S1407.

Bloody ratings!
I think I will give it a four out of five. I think you captured well the despair of the situation with the Toa and Matoran. The only thing that may have made it a bit gorrier, would be when he pops the Matorans head, blood spatter, and brain matter were certain to follow. You could have put something like, he shook the brains from his fist, and turned to face the Toa, or something like that. However everything else was very well done! Good work my friend!

Excellent job my friend!!! The gore is well done, and it is a fine thing to read if you are looking to be grossed out. XD Well, I must say that you have alot of creativity where gore is concerned. One more thing though. It is not the deeds that make people freaked out about gore, it is the throrough descriptions of the deeds that make the gore perfected. I must say again, good job!!!!!!

(Torture.) Actually, Serrakaan has tortured someone before. It was Mersery actually. He accessed Merseries dreams, and did some pretty horrible things to him. Bloody things ya know, and since it was a dream, Mersery could not die, and he could feel everything Serrakaan did to him, and he could not wake up. Serrakaan does torture from time to time, but very rarely. However, torture is a very large subject to touch upon, from seering hot spears going up you know what, to being lowerd into boiling water with your feet and legs cut in manny different places, to just taking out body parts and showing it to the victem. There are alot of things to do, but the best way to kreep people out, is to be very descriptive. It can be just one torture, but as long as it is descriptive enough, it will still make the people who read it cringe. :)

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No problem. I can edit it.  J 97   Auditore   14:58, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Confirming
Alright. Bat erra  12  02

Sure.  J 97   Auditore   01:03, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's up to you if you want him to live or not. I just ask that you don't make him look weak unless he's up against a powerful opponent. -The  Copycat  MOCist  Crib.To.Coffin 01:08, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds good to me! :D -The  Copycat  MOCist  Crib.To.Coffin 01:29, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Both. And if you can, let them survive.  J 97   Auditore   01:45, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re:MOC use
My friend you can use absolutely any of them and I don't mind if you kill them off! :D As my story takes place in a parallel reality their fates are your to decide. By the way, it looks like you've mixed 'Iolan' with 'Lola', which is a real life girl's name. XD I hope you enjoy using them and any time you need to borrow a MOC or want a MOC request feel free to ask :D Matoro  1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!

I'd like Harponok to seriously wound someone by impaling them through the shoulder with his javelin, and Struxx to kill someone by using his Struxx Armor to create a spear and chop them in half. Also, some more information about Blettnox: Bat erra  12  02
 * He wears yellow armor.
 * He has a tail, and is very reptillian looking.
 * He carries an axe.
 * He wears an unknown Kanohi.

Harponok can impale Laila, I guess. Struxx can kill whoever. Bat erra  12  02

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What do I think will happen to him me? He I shall die - as he I must!

I am hiring you to design fanon sets for the BIONICLE: Universe Toy Line! Just look at the page and the BIONICLE: Universe article as well and find characters that aren't in the film that are just in the toy line. You can even design new characters, or use your own. Want to help? Just post ideas whenever you want!

Lord Starscream|Transformers: Dark of the Moon|(62 Days!)|Be Afraid Of The Dark 00:07, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Just look through the toy line for the film and the film's main article. Look through the characters section. Any characters in there cannot be created as sets since I've already made them. Any characters only on the toy line can be made however you want by you - and you can create/add new ones as well.

Lord Starscream|Transformers: Dark of the Moon|(62 Days!)|Be Afraid Of The Dark 00:13, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

He actually does have a girlfriend, however he hasn't met her yet in my storyline, so go ahead. -The  Copycat  MOCist  Crib.To.Coffin 00:19, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

They can kill a Makuta. And make out. :P  J 97   Auditore   02:58, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

On my part it will have taken place in an alternate reality. :P Plus, they would all be somewhat canon in any story line, just not mentioned before. Technically, all of the Toa Noma died in the main BIONICLE Universe, Iolan probably would have gotten killed later, and the Makuta all sided with Miserix. You can do anything you want with them. :D Matoro  1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!

Well, anything's possible in fanon. :D Perhaps they could all be dead in the main universe but come from an alternate universe for the story. Perhaps it could take place at a point when they were all still alive. Perhaps the OoMN froze the Toa and the Makuta just went 'unmentioned' in the story until now. Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!

Sure, sounds fine, although - now I think of it - putting them all in Stasis Tubes probably applies better to the Matoran Unvierse. Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!

Well, it's a fanon wiki. If it was to be canon then it would be all official and stuff. It could be a fanon event happening in the canon universe. :P Matoro  1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!