User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130811222901/@comment-5174759-20130812151016

Chapter 5 was set to be a shocking one which should end with a cliffhanger, and is one of the climatic moments, if not the last. I know how Theran now must look like to you; but was there really another way? Is it his role perhaps to do the things nobody else can or will? And remeber that Theran's sudden attack was also by surpise, so Glonor had an even lesser chance :D

And yes, this chapter mainly revolved around Theran. Since he is the inofficial leader of the group (besides Solunus) he has to do all the hard descisions while Range is more the "hero" who does everything right and tries to always see the good. I personally like the conflict between the two friends very much :)

As I mentioned before, the one who has to do the unliked actions is rarely liked... but who else should've done it? And yes, Chaeus' loss was pretty much under Theran's command since he "decided" they should split up what let to the incident. Dorvan again wasn't directly commanded by him, but it was the same mission. It can't be easy for someone to loose two teammates!

The distress letter wasn't sent out, it was more "smuggled" to the place by Glonor when he sneaked behind the Forgotten Warrior's lines to get word out. But I understand the confusion.

Khyae will be a member of the new team, even when you didn't see her yet. Her role won't be that big at the beginning however. And GloBoh... we'll see in the future ;)

Panels like the ones with Range are something I miss not only in my story but in many others as well. I saw myself just showing moments which put forward the plot... a bit of "life" and how the characters act didn't show up at all. Small things like that important part to your story!

Uh, do I sense a new MoC coming? Probably with a huge amount of pictures with stabbing :D