User blog comment:FireDrag1091/Coldest Day Reviews/@comment-25983570-20131228022928

Sorry for the late responce but my computer crashed and I've had to stick with my phone that keeps going to my home page every time I tried to read your story(It did the same withone of BTD's stories).Now onto the review! I really enjoyed it, all of it. I found it to be entertaining to see Vantelic change into a quiet, bitter person and as stated by other users I Szsag's code of honor. Vahiny was ontop of the world then ended up a broken wreck. All characters developed well and gave the story some extra flair, I'll give character development a 9/10 Suspence was another strong point in this, you had me wondering if Vantelic would overcome his foes, 8/10 The story flowed well in my opinion, everything made since and was well written, 10/10

The story presented situations that I haven't seen before on this wiki like how the Lykos Kinsman wanted to wage war Metru-Nui, or how their weapons were being illegally exported,very original;)8/10 The entire conflict of the story is enough to draw a reader in and the writing and subplots is enough to keep them in,10/10. My total: