User blog comment:BionicleChicken/Pirates: The Regathering - Feedback Blog/@comment-4899022-20150202004654

Kk, you wanted someone to rip it apart, right?

First, I wish you would have kept drawing it the same way. It looked better, and considering how long you're taking with these, you could have kept it the same.

In the twentieth panel, the background's white, when it was black just a moment before.

Not much else in the first chapter, same with the second. I do wish you would have kept the written version, because I forget what happens.