User blog comment:FireDrag1091/February End Update 2014/@comment-2026417-20140227043725

Welcome back! Glad to hear you're okay.

I like some of the concepts you've suggested, although you should definitely nerf Szsag's abilities, as a superpowerful being does not a good character make. Definitely make sure he can't easily get out of the story's conflict.

The prologue could use a little work, but I think it's good overall. Best of luck for your plans!