User blog:Toa Pozico/They Always Come Back

Hello all, as I mentioned on my userpage (most people probably didn't look at it), I am writing my first story, called They Always Come Back. I will show you my prologue, and you can tell me what you think of my writing.

=Prologue= The dark figure stood, hunched, looking over the platform's edge. The time seemed near. They were almost ready.

The Toa suddenly appeared, out of the shadows, and, if the hunched figure hadn't known this "routine", he might have leapt in fright. "The process is complete, " spoke the Toa. "Good, very good," replied the hunched figure, in a low rasping voice, "then I suppose it is time to go hunting again."

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Thanks everyone, and goodbye for now.