User blog comment:Starscream7/Sign up to be a voice or write screenplay in BIONICLE: Reality!/@comment-2221163-20100903150055

Okay, guys...FINALLY! Here's the beginning of the film! It is a lot of good stuff to read. The 2nd one is the one with confirmed corrections by Starscream7.


 * 1: In the beginning of the Movie there’s a narrative by Tahu.

“Makuta Teridax is alive and has taken over The Matoran universe and Spherus Magna. We formed A rebellion and split in two groups. One group is in the Archives while the other is on spheres magna, in the ruins of the Arena Magna. The Group in the archives was working on a space ship, and that is where our story begins…”

In the archive. A couple of Toa and Glatorian are Working on the ship. As several Makuta, Rahkshi, and other “bad Guys” enter the room. The crew Quickly get on the ship and it lifts off out threw a hole in the ceiling. Teridax Yells swearing his Revenge. Vakama And Gali look at the Ship, still in view and Whisper “Good luck”

Meanwhile on the ship, the Crew Members are on the Bridge Leaving the Matoran Universe and Spherus Magna. Outside of the ship it’s Reveal that a Makuta ship is chasing them. The ship shoots at them. It goes down on A Nearby planet. Strakk heres some Whispering outside and goes to open the... To be continued. Now for the edits I made, listen closely, Reptor17 and TheSlicer!

“Makuta Teridax is alive and has taken over The Matoran universe and Spherus Magna (Maybe another time because I have a giant Matoran Universe MOC that I am going to save for ‘later’. He will betray his Glatorian and Toa allies.) We formed a rebellion and split in two groups. One group is in the Archives while the other is on spheres magna (Toa/Glatorian and Brotherhood of Makuta) in the ruins of the Arena Magna (Arena Iconox). The group (of five) in the Arena was working on a space ship, (we hope to find the Kanohi Ignika to reunite Bara, Aqua and Bota Magna into Spherus Magna), and that is where our story begins…” (Awesome beginning! I love it!) In the archives (Not the Archives, the Arena Iconox) A couple of Toa and Glatorian are Working on a ship (Yellow). As several Makuta, Rahkshi, and other “bad Guys” enter the arena (Teridax approaches with Corroder, Nektann, Branar, Bitil, A Rahkshi of Heat Vision, Stornius and Vamprah instead). The crew quickly got on the ship and it lifts off out threw a hole in the ceiling (We need a short fight, okay?) Teridax and Tahu’s team battle. In the end, Teridax is stunned and his warriors abandon him. (This time, Corroder yells swearing his Revenge). Corroder claims he is the new leader. The crew gets in the ship and they blast off of the planet, hoping to find the Ignika, The Mask of Life. Meanwhile on the ship, the crew is leaving Bara Magna. Outside of the ship it’s revealed that a Makuta ship is chasing them. (Great job with the Makuta Ship!) The ship shoots at them. It goes down on a Nearby planet (Earth). Strakk hears some Whispering outside and goes to open the rubble above him. (Middle of next sequence) Now here’s my sequence I made. The film continues with Several Toa and Glatorian crash-landing in Detroit after the attack. The ship is shattered by a building called the Comerica Tower at Detroit center. A young high school student comes over to the wrecked ship. He backs away when Strakk's fist pops out of the rubble (That is the scene from above). Disgusted by the man, Strakk lifted his axe and prepared to lay a fatal blow-but Takanuva stopped him at the last moment. Takanuva greated the kid and said "I am Takanuva, Toa of Light". The rest of the team emerges from the rubble and they all make direct eye contact with the kid.
 * 2: In the beginning of the Movie there’s a narrative by Tahu.

Now Reptor17 and TheSlicer can continue from there. The team members are Tahu the Leader, Takanuva the Lieutenant, and Gresh, Kiina, Vastus and Strakk. (Vastus is an old Warrior who walks slowly, but is a strong fighter). We need voice actors for all of them except for Takanuva! But most of all, Great job so far, everyone! I am going to start filming! (This is the longest Blog Comment I have ever seen!)