User blog:Valentin 98/Toa of Time BIONICLE Comic Issues

I decided to make a comic version of my BIONICLE Chronicles series, starting with Toa of Time, and I made the cover of the first issue (yes, I drew the original picture myself). Here it is below, along with with a textless version of it!

I don't know if I'll color it or not, though I might as well should sometime. So what do you all think? Any suggestions or tips?