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Sprite
Sorry, I can't do the Jareroden sprite yet. I'll be inactive tomorrow.

The  Slicer  02:16, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Duuude
What happened to the storyline structure of Mission into Darkness? It's changed soo much since I wrote Chapter Two. I need your help, so you can clear things up a bit for me. Things like: What the heck do I write about? Do I kill someone? Who?

That Devil  Guy TDC

Origins
So, I was just wondering this: will you write issue six of Origins and then I write issue seven, or will I write #6 and you write #7? I was wondering because I'd rather not write #6, because I might risk just repeating the previous issues.

CT1000

Issue 6
Great, thanks for that, I really needed something to give me more inspiration for issue seven. I'll write #7, and maybe you could write #8?

By the way, I think, by the looks of the story, there'll be about fourteen issues. And about the Alpha War comics: after Origins #7 is written, I'll start collaborating on what exactly is going on in the comic. I could use your input!

CT1000

Re:
I am starting the chapter now. I find the storyline confusing when mulitply users write it, each putting in something they want...

That Devil  Guy TDC 06:49, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Done #7
So, what do you think of issue 7?

CT1000

Alpha War
Thanks for the feedback on issue 7. Now, since we're halfway through Origins: Nektann, we need to work on the Alpha War comics, since they'll be released at the same time. On the talk page of the Alpha War Club, I'll post my idea for the comic in about 5 minutes, and then you can add ideas and give feedback. Sound good?

PS: The Witch-King can be in the comic!

CT1000

6000
Thanks man! I didn't even know i had got that many edits! -- Ids  5621  17:54, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ok then
Alright, I'm done writing out my ideas on this page. You can now give your ideas and input, etc.

CT1000

Random Videos
What is the video about?


 * Baterra1202******

Update
Well, now, about Alpha War, we can't start written drafts yet, since the events of the war should be planned out first. Also, you can start writing Origins #8 now, here's the premise: Nektann's new army needs to march to Malakai's camp, where Nektann and Malakai negociate. Nektann also has to mention to Malakai that the latter is the only surviving warlord and that the others were killed. When the battle begins, Makuta start fighting for Malakai, since it's their job to protect the residents (the Piraka are rebels, Malakai's not). The Piraka must retreat. In the end, they begin construction of Nektann robots and begin developing technology to combine Vezok, Thok, and Reidak into Irnakk.

CT1000

Re:Issue 8
Great! I'll probably write the next one, but then I need to write out Day 1 of the Alpha War (like I said, the war needs to be planned out before the Alpha War comic drafts are). By the way, I'm working on an introduction comic for The Ultimate Duology 2010 (which is Origins: Nektann and Alpha War). I'll release the intro along with the comics.

CT1000

Re:Video
Well, I watched the video. It showed the baterra and the (fail) element lords. Personally, I don't think they're fails, but THAT guy did. I will soon make a MOC of that. Thanks for sharing!


 * Baterra1202

Re:Video
Well, I watched the video. It showed the baterra and the (fail) element lords. Personally, I don't think they're fails, but THAT guy did. I will soon make a MOC of that. Thanks for sharing!


 * Baterra1202

Jareroden
I need a full-body pic before I can make him in sprite form.

The  Slicer  04:28, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE:Hi
Thanks, in bussy upgrading them with newbought parts, so most will even be better! Also, the MOC's shown on this wiki are only a third of my collection, I personally like the second part best, but everybody seems to have diffrent opionios about them. Eeneend 19:50, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Lein Contest
Can you please enter the Lein Contest? --

Rahkshi
I am happy for you to use the mechanical rahkshi, and even happier that you gave credit to me, but please ask before making version of my characters. I am very strict about moc ownership on the wiki as you may have noticed with other users.

Thank you for your consideration.

-- Ids  5621  15:18, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks
thanks for understanding :)

-- Ids  5621  15:18, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE:re:Contest
Thanks! I knew that I was near 3.000, but I didn't notice that I had arrived to that. Thanks for remembering me! --

Temporary Leader
Hey, J97, I'm here to tell you that I'll be away for July, so starting July 2nd, can you take over as temporary leader of the Origins and Alpha War Clubs? If you choose to accept, then this is my instruction: we need to finish up Origins written drafts by the end of this month. When I'm gone, I don't want work on the actual comic to start until I come back at the end of July. So, when I'm gone, I need you and the other members to work on promoting the comics (both Alpha War and Origins: Nektann). You can make promotional posters, ads, and other stuff to go on this wiki, and maybe you can ask TheSlicer to help promote it too! When I come back, we'll start drawing out the panels for the comics!

Clone Trooper 1000 23:13, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ur making Maserix an "Immortal" Character?-Creator613

About the Promotional Stuff
You know how I mentioned creating posters and stuff for Origins: Nektann and Alpha War? Well, do you know of someone on this wiki who's good at making that kind of stuff? You know, sort of a tech nerd (with all the respect in the universe, I'm a nerd too). If you do know of somebody, you can recruit them into both Origins and Alpha War Clubs, unless that person is already a member, of course. Also, for one of the Alpha War promotions, I need somebody who can do a better version of this. It's all good if you don't know of somebody :)

Clone Trooper 1000 03:57, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Poster
SWEET! We'll be needing them at the end of July when I get back from my vacation, because that's when we start the actual comic! I'm very excited. We need to scout out some users on this wiki who can add to the promotions. Right now, I'm doing research to find some of those "nerds" I mentioned earlier. By the way, I'll have the next issue written tomorrow. PS: Thanks for all the help so far, you've helped make this project a reality!

Clone Trooper 1000 04:41, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thats why I put Quotes around immortal.-Creator613

Re:Malakai MOC
That's pretty much exactly what I had in mind for my set vision of Malakai!

Clone Trooper 1000 22:03, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, it's awesome!

Clone Trooper 1000 22:08, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Great!

Clone Trooper 1000 22:14, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Done #9
Well, I'm finished issue 9. I know this is Origins: Nektann, but this issue is about Vezon. I just needed this, so it could explain how he wasn't a Piraka in the movie BIONICLE: The Quest for the Mask of Life. This issue was meant to be a little more heartwarming than the others. So, should I write the next issue, or should you?

Clone Trooper 1000 22:45, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

MOCs
Super! You stayed true to the concept art too, which is a bonus! By the way, I'm going to write the next issue now.

Clone Trooper 1000 00:11, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Did Varkanax fight Benjarmin I CoD? I couldn't find that part anywhere.

Thanks for Promos
Wow, thanks for making those promos, they're great. I'd like to add that you have been the most actively involved member of this group, maybe even more so than me. So thanks for everything, you've been a great help.

Clone Trooper 1000 22:37, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Issues 10 and 11
I'm done #10 and I wrote the premise for #11, so you can start at any time. Once we've reached issue 14, we'll be done, so we'll move on to planning out the Alpha War. Sound good?

CT1000

Issue 11
Alright, good! Now, you can choose where to go from here: you could make this the final issue you write, or you could write issue 13 (because I'm writing issue 12 and 14). Either way, you'll still get a chance to write for Alpha War after we're finished #14 (because that's the last BON issue).

CT1000

Re: H
Thanks --Chicken Bond 04:14, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Arrrrg!
Sorry! I completely forgot! I have been doing three assignments. I will do it later today, and post it for you. Really sorry.

ThatDevilGuy (Talk) PollBlog

Mission Into Darkness
I am writing the chapter now!! :D

ThatDevilGuy (Talk) PollBlog

Can I use Jareroden in Mission Into Darkness? I was going to make him save Sikle, Dalgev and the Toa Eulalia from the prison.

ThatDevilGuy (Talk) PollBlog

Do you want me to write about him saving them? or do you want to?

ThatDevilGuy (Talk) PollBlog

Done. (:
I posted the chapter. I know it's short, but I tried to put in as much tension as I could.

ThatDevilGuy (Talk) PollBlog

Corz
I think you won. I'll post it up. Collector1

My Contest
Could you enter my new contest?

Varkanax  39  00:21, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sprites
I got them here and here (copy and paste onto paint).

P.S. I didn't make the kits. I just use them.

I AM IRON MAN!

Chapter..
Thanks. What did you like about it?

ThatDevilGuy (Talk) PollBlog

Aww thanks.
You should read my stories then. The Darkness in Life isn't as good, cause I have majorly changed my stroy writing since starting that story.

ThatDevilGuy (Talk) PollBlog

WOW.
Did you like it? Especially the last chapter? I shall read your stories.

ThatDevilGuy (Talk) PollBlog

Thank you soo much!
Glad someone is liking my stories. The Jareroden Saga is amazing!! I read the prologue, well check the talk page to see my responce. =P

You are a great writer.

ThatDevilGuy (Talk) PollBlog

The Forever Wars!
 The Forever Wars  fight to the death contest is now open! Enter now!


 * Baterra1202

championship
hey can i edit cod includin pre-existing chapters? people got the thoughts and personalities of me and my characters wrong- DCC

Random
Wow, you read Redwall? That's awesome! I love those books! By the way, I'm writing the next chapter of Mission Into Darkness now!

Clone Trooper 1000 23:20, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I've gotten to Marlfox, which I'm reading right now. (Well, not right now, I'm writing a chapter of Mission Into Darkness now.)

Clone Trooper 1000 23:48, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

About Stuff
Just so I know what exactly I'm doing, what exactly is Mission Into Darkness (I haven't read the story, so I want to know what it's basically about so I know what I'm writing about, plus I feel too lazy to just read it. I have other things occupying my mind)?

Maserix
you put the maserix guy on your no kill list but earlier on, Demian busted a huge hole in his armor with a sonic arrow to save Galika, so might he be dead already? no one seen him since and i dont know if thats fixable-DCC

ok, in fact i was thinking of him appearing soon as well. what do you think about "makuta\greatbeing vs. makuta vs. makuta vs. sovnoron vs. 5 toa" -DCC

just a note, i intended for a round 2 between maserix adn demian and since he has no current enemy, would you be good with the idea?-dcc

Championship of Death
In case you haven't read it yet, I've just put Iruka and Merodos in the same area. And since their both characters you don't want killed without your consent, I leave the rest up to you, (normally, I'd write what happens to my characters, But this is a special occasion) unless, of course, you want the person who entered Iruka to decide the outcome. Either choice is fine with me.

I AM IRON MAN!

WOW
Jareroden's Saga is amazing!!! I've only read up to chapter four, cause of school work and studying, and I loove it! Keep up the good work.

That Devil  Guy TDC

SPEAR?
just a note, during my fight with Sovnoron i droppped all my weapons, and in fact this isnt even the toa form you see ont that page this is the newer form i designed (check the moc battle wiki) so not only did i never actually have a spear, i had no weapons when i arrived at the dark lords room. so i hope you dont mind but im gunna change it a bit.- DCC

Death Championship
If you read some of the newer chapters, you'll see Shadowhawk has killed off a few more characters. You might want to update the list a little more.

I AM IRON MAN!

Championship of Death (why do I keep making comments about this)
Write about Merodos and Iruka's encounter (mainly because they're both on the "don't kill without asking" list).

So..........when's it gonna be up? Not to rush you or anything, but I'm just wondering.

I AM IRON MAN!

Details
well wat happened was that i had found the device the dark lord was using to teleport his fortress adn all the warriors and used it to assemble everyone in the fortress as a distraction. then i teleported us all to the universe i had been taken from, armored up (ill show u a pic as soon as i upload it), teleported inside the fortress since in that universe i have seriously amazing powers, and then i left sintaro in that universe where i could revive him if i survived. i didnt revive him in the fortress cause i thought you would dislike that. anyway, then the dark lords soldiers teleported us back to his world and i swung at the crowd adn started running for the dark lord himself. -DCC

DANG i really wanted to use my super armor, oh well -DCC

part of me is saying "its just not right" but ok, my only concern is that people will question why MY armor is in HIS fortress ._. -DCC

well then, i hope all your guys or guys you support find that room. -DCC

and thats without the super armor -DCC

just wait till i find my camera! ^^ -DCC

how'd you enjoy my battle with Dark Lord? -DCC

one thing ive been thinking about for a while, wats your plans for maserix? cause mine involve a fight between him adn Demian & Galika, or more the end of that fight.-DCC

AWESOME, can't wait to see that fight, although if Demian hits him dead on with one of those arrows, just like any other makuta, he is DONE. those things shatter the armor adn scattr the antidermis-DCC

I would love it if you uploaded it...

The  Slicer  04:37, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I see it now. Perfect!

The  Slicer  04:42, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

thanks for putting my status as "UNKNOWN" cause the truth is, no one said i was dead ^^ -DCC

Contest
Enter Toa 95's first contest!

Spread the word (copy this message and tell anyone you can)!

Okay, You're gonna wanna tell some other users about it. I trust you with this mission. This message will self-destruct in 5, 4, 3, 2....wait, what am I thinking? I watch too many spy movies (not really).

I AM IRON MAN!

Drex
He's probably my self moc and my best toa moc! (Move over Ganon!) I have plans for a page about him, but probably won't make make a page for him until he appears in the Tehktra Nui Saga.

RE:
I'll enter.

And in the Twilight Void MOC Contest, could you enter under Vatra or Xorn? t can be anything you like.

Please don't move entries from one category to another. Leave Strinaz in Other MOCs.

You can enter other MOCs under Vatra or Xorn. Varkanax  39  16:44, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

return
i hope you dont mind but id like to, for the moment, stay out of the picture, when i do return i'll explain it most likely but i want to make a dramatic finale appearance -DCC

why?-DCC id beg to differ, Demian can kill anyone who is makuta at all with his arrows and if you use your psionics powers on him i think he'd go down like a chump -DCC

sorry to argue but a large sonic arrow can split an army in two, any survivors in the area of its effects wont be able to even deal any damage and their ears will bleed... if they're still on XD -DCC

well then we might have to see, maybe Demian will need some help, MAYBE ^^ -DCC

Hey
Want to be allies in the User:Baterra1202/The Glory Wars contest?

And I noticed you read the Redwall series! I've read up to The Sable Quaen

Varkanax  39  15:16, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Mission Into Darkness
Sorry that it took so long for me to write my chapter, it's just that I've had a lot of exams, but now I'm out for the summer, so I'll be available for anything from now to July 3rd. Then you'll be temporary leader of Origins until August! PS: I'm gonna write the next issue of Origins now.

Clone Trooper 1000 02:01, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Glory Wars
Do you want to form an alliance in the contest? The combined powers of our MOCs will decimate the competition.- Scorpion   665

Ok then dude.

Origins Nektann
You can write the next issue now.

Clone Trooper 1000 15:32, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re
Nice, I like how you set up the issue so I could continue it in #14. By the way, I'm done #14 now, so we can move on to planning out the Alpha War. I'll write Day One of the war, and we'll see what happens from there. After the Days are written, the issues will be.

Clone Trooper 1000 21:02, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

MOC Deaths
I have recently read your "Championship of Death" contest, right up till the end. I'm not whining, like you said not to do, but just because I wasn't on this wiki yet does not give you an excuse to blatantly kill off my 3 self MOCs (Speewaa, Spaunauh, Jorbyy). I have also heard from my friend Baterra1202 that his MOCs have been treated the same. (Harponok, Element Lord Of Robotics, N4-11.) I honestly cannot see why Merodos won also. All I'm asking for is to know how each and every one of the above-mentioned MOCs were killed.


 * Speewaa48

Re:
Well can you tell me how the three of them died? I'd appreciate it.

$$$$$__Speewaa48__$$$$$ This message will self destruct in five seconds!

my death
i NEED to edit the championship, for starters, my armor is designed for armies in excess off 100,000 and i have enough energy to fight a losing battle for 4 straigth hours before getting anywhere near exhausted. and also my nova blast has never been and never will be an option, in all honesty, with his power, a nova blast would be larger than a nuke. if i ever found my self in the need to escape, id make a huge lake of lava and run -DCC

RoK
Can you help me write Return of Kolrahk? I'd really appreciate it.

ZarkaRaiden 02:40, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!
Thanks for the help man!

ZarkaRaiden 02:42, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

RoK
I would like you to write chapter three.

In the chapter quite a few things happen.

1. Kolrahk 2's factory is completed

2. the Identity of the small being is revealed.

3. Toa Hau and Toa Miru(Red and green beings from the LoTK) arrive in Cortaka Nui

4. Protox's pod lands on Aqua Magna

5. Giza discovers the Xiratak in the Onu-Matoran mines

ZarkaRaiden 02:55, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

RoK
Wokamei, the evil alternate of Tokamei.

I will make a page for him now...

ZarkaRaiden 03:00, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

RoK
Nice chapter.

championship sequel?
that epilouge was hinting at a plan for a sequel, so would you be willing to rack up a few more characters and throwthem into the fray? i'd love to have a part in writing an interesting second round where winner has to fight merodos. -DCC

ok, i intend to participate, and i also wanna put a little twist on the story and when i do, please dont delete it. -DCC

RoK
Would you like to write another chapter of the story? If so, please reply to this message.

ZarkaRaiden 22:23, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Funny...
The chapter I going to ask you to write was chapter 5...

Anyway, time for the premise. ZarkaRaiden 22:42, June 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Protax finds his way to the city
 * 2) Hau and Miru arrive at the city of Cortaka Nui
 * 3) The factory makes itself known all over the island
 * 4) Hau and Miru Meet Keos

Thanks.
Thanks. =]

Check out my new sig!:

-- http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100625072543/custombionicle/images/5/50/TDG.jpg   (Talk)    23:44, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

New Story
Hello, Jareroden97,

I, along with Varkanax39, are planning to write a new serial set in an alternate reality where my MOC Millennium and his Shadow of Ages have allied with Eostra Nihiltian and her Shadowy Ones, and conquered Spherus Magna shortly after Mata Nui reformed it and killed Teridax. There will be a resistance fighting their rule, which is where this story will start, when a group of new recruits join the resistance, (essentially when the entries of other users for this contest/series are introduced), whilst Millennium and Eostra use the remains of Mata Nui's and Teridax's robotic bodies to construct a new, larger, and more powerful robot for which they can conquer the worlds beyond Spherus Magna.

Since Millennium and Eostra rule the world alongside another unknown powerful being and his army, I was wondering, if you accept the offer to be one of the writers of this serial, if you would like to establish your "Dark Lord" and his Empire of Shadows as one of the three powers ruling the planet, alongside the Shadow of Ages and the Shadowy Ones.

The prototype name for this series is "Dark Realities", though do you have any better ideas?

So what do you say, would you like to be part of this series under construction?

Regards, --Chicken Bond 00:26, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Excellent! Thanks! --Chicken Bond 02:21, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

If you could, that would be awesome! Also, the prologue for the story Dark Realities is up, (which focuses on the founding of the alliance between the "Dark Lord," Millennium, and Eostra Nihiltian) take a look and tell me what you think. Since you've agreed to be part of the story-making, enter the MOCs of your choice on the page here. --Chicken Bond 05:32, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, man. --Chicken Bond 05:39, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

O.K, though your contribution is highly appreciated. --Chicken Bond 05:41, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, could you give a rough description of the "Dark Lord"? I may need it for future referencing in the series when its required. --Chicken Bond 10:36, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I see. Was my basic description of the "Dark Lord" in the prologue accurate? --Chicken Bond 22:17, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

In my chapters for Mission Into Darkness, can I decide what element Rasek is?

04:29, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

That's what I was thinking.

That Devil  Guy  TDC

That premise for chapters 13 and 14, was that for both or just 13?

That Devil  Guy  TDC 08:04, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Deciding sides
Alright, since entry time for Dark Realities is closing, it is time we decide the allegiances of the characters so far. I've done the maths, and once we reach 14 users, you, me, and Varkanax will decide the sides of the characters of 3 users of our choice, each (Not including ourselves, though decide what sides your characters will be on)

I've chosen 3 users already to assign sides. Other than my own characters, I've chosen the sides of TheSlicer, Toa Hydros, and RandoMaster07's characters, so you can't choose their sides. when you do assign a character's side just follow the example I've put below.


 * Ixtil (With the resistance)

or:


 * Sovnoron (allied with the Eostra/Millennium/"Dark Lord")

Also, judge the entry's by their character, and decide which side they should be on. However, that doesn't mean that every bad guy has to be on the Eostra/Millennium/Dark Lord's side, we can have some evil guys on the side of the resistance. In one such case, Toa Hydros requested I place his MOC Zevrahk on the resistance side, since I've agreed with him that during Millennium/Eostra/Dark Lord's rule, Verahk and Kylla mysteriously disappeared without a trace of evidence to say they were alive or dead. Zevrahk, as requested by Scotttjt, is now serving the main resistance out of self-interest.

I'll finish off this remarkably long message by saying that since the maximum amount of users allowed to enter is 14, and we have 12 so far, you and Varkanax will choose which sides the characters of the last 2 users allowed to enter will be on.

Regards, --Chicken Bond 00:14, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

It starts now!
Entering time is over (Well... technically its over once Varkanax assigns the allegiances of the last few user's characters) it now starts! Since Varkanax is writing chapter 1, would you like to write chapter 2? Also, since I generally write my stories using information and facts that are considered canon, is it alright if we can leave out stuff like blood and bone, though you can still included the violence used to kill the characters. --Chicken Bond 08:31, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Chapter 2
Sure O.K, i'll arrange it with Varkanax. We still can't start until he's decided the allegiances of the remaining users' characters (he only determined his own characters) and then write chapter 1, though I'll ask him to leave a premise for you. --Chicken Bond 21:27, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Um... Sorry, but I'm not very good at advertising, no.

The  Slicer

Goodbye!
Hey, this is Clone Trooper 1000 saying goodbye for the summer! I won't be here after today, so your duties as temporary leader of the Origins Club and Alpha War Club start now! I'll be back in late August. While I'm gone, I need you to get members to create promotions for BO:N and Alpha War. PS: I'm looking for a member who really knows his way around image manipulation and computers to make some of the promotions!

CT1000 out!

They will appear soon
Thanks. I`ll let them appear in ch. 4, or 5. For a little outline on how they appear:

Re: Yona
Well, he after he was presumed dead I guess he "left" the government, so Citizens. Ihu  rules!  18:59, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Stories
I'd be happy to, though don't you already have reserved users for the next few chapters. And, forgive me, but I don't really have an idea about what the story's about, other than its set in an alternate universe I think controlled by the Empire of Shadows could you give me a rough overview as to what its about?

Also, what would I have to write about, the entry of the bounty hunters? Also, are my own few characters allowed to be included in this story, or is that beyond my power XD?

Also, seeing as Varkanax is unable to write chapter 1 of Dark Realities due to holidays, could you write it instead? --Chicken Bond 02:55, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Very well, but which chapter should I write, seeing as you have reserves. Also, do you want to write chapter 1 of Dark Realities? --Chicken Bond 03:26, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

You should..
You should join Bionicle MOC Battle Wiki. You should copy a few (lets start with two) of your characters over to it. You could start the first contest there and host it if you want. We need more users. And, don't ask to be admin. We have four already.

Thanks -- That Devil  Guy  TDC

RE:
Thanks. -- That Devil  Guy  TDC 03:32, July 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * There's a link on my userpage. -- That Devil  Guy  TDC 03:39, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Re: Stories
Excellent! Thanks for that! Also, would you like to write chapter 1 now or later? --Chicken Bond 03:34, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Just a quick question,

That Devil  Guy  TDC

Re: Chapter 1
Well, seeing as this is the first chapter, there's not much of a premise I can give you. I can only give you information where the series will start in the chapter. O.K, it's set 100 years after the prologue, the chapter is set in Atero and the Arena Magna (or at least what's left of it following the Skrall attack on it) and it features the leaders of the resistance (Jareoden, Freztrak, Shardak, Conqueror, Ixtil, and Leviathos) discussing the arrival of new members (not every entry has to be a new recruit, and some can already be members), they are discussing matters such as how much territory they've claimed, recent deaths, and strategies etc. The rest is open for your imagination. --Chicken Bond 04:22, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reason for Korzor's naming
I've thought of a reason why your Skrall MOC Korzor was named. How about Korzor was named for almost single-handedly defending a Rock Tribe fortress from a siege at the hands of the Water Tribe, during which he clashed with Botax, the commander of the platoon attacking (the attack being the reason that sparked their hatred). Korzor and his forces, managed to kill off many of Botax's warriors, and force the survivors to retreat. As a result he was named by Tuma for such a successful defense. What do you think --Chicken Bond 06:23, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Adding to Chapter 1
I added a bit to chapter 1, though didn't finish it. I added a bit to what you originally wrote then added some new lines where you left off. The chapter isn't finished, so you can add on from where I left off for you, a premise for you so you can continue and complete the chapter. --Chicken Bond 07:04, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

You can write a bit more if you wish, you can add as much as you want to. Though if your busy, I could write the extra part for you. --Chicken Bond 21:36, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Kanohi Fexan
Do you have any ideas for it's super awesome power? If you can't think of anything I'd really like, I'll probably just live with Chaos Control, like in the Sonic the Hedgehog franchise.

'''I AM IRON MAN! You are the only one who can bring balance to a world at war. '''

Are you just saying that to force me to use my brain for once in my life? I already tried doing that, but I can't think of anything else that meets my standards. Actually, I can't think of anything.

'''I AM IRON MAN! You are the only one who can bring balance to a world at war. '''

DR
Nice conclusion to Dark Realities. I'll do some spelling corrections and add one more section. --Chicken Bond 22:18, July 4, 2010 (UTC)