User blog comment:Chicken Bond/PLEASE CRITIQUE: The Mentor's Way/@comment-958607-20121120225404

Hmmm, I've read the first paragraph and encountered a grammar error. :S Seeing how close this is to the deadline I'd be happy to proof-read what you've done in my sandbox and highlight any changes I make in a different color font :D I'll get back to you with an opinion once I've read through it but the first paragraph looked very promising indeed! :D