User blog comment:Chicken Bond/The Story Arrives!/@comment-1221909-20110518101818

ATTENTION!

TDG has offered some really good and very brilliant ideas to upgrade the story and make it darker and more complex. I'm willing to accept all of them into the mixing pot, and blend them altogether to what I already have. Tell me whether you think one of these ideas (or more, or all of them) should be blended into the story.

Idea one: On his last mission (not necessarily his last) Mersery was closer to capturing/defeating Millennium than he thought. Because of this his killer kills him, as he wants Millennium unknowingly to do something that will benefit his evil twisted plot(s).

Idea two: Mersery "retires" and is killed by someone from his past. Someone, up until now, he didn't know was undermining his plans to capture/defeat Millennium.

Idea three: Warlock kills him. Period. I imagine his scenario like the Doctor's and River Song's relationship. Warlock kills Mersery while he is young, and Mersery is old. No idea on Warlock's motive at the moment. Maybe a betrayal? Or he regrets this, but knows the penalties of melding with one's past/future? Perhaps Warlock tells Mersery this, just before they depart for the last time? Mersery accepts his fate, but doesn't expect it to happen so soon, or when/where it did.

Idea four: Mersery, at this point of in his life, killed because of his legacy. If he was killed because of his legacy - what he has done/accomplished - it would make the plot line allot more complex and darker. What I mean is, Mersery will be killed because of what he has become, not what he already was.

What do you guys think?