User blog comment:Max the paranoid android/New story idea/@comment-4767722-20150210154854

I would mention how this is a simple zombie story/movie plot with an alchemy twist to it. But this is also only the pitch, so the full story hasn't shown its full colors yet. If you want to bring it to fruition, I say just do it and wait to see what people think. Then edit things accordingly to genuine criticisms.