User blog comment:ElishuaJansen/My first female MOC/@comment-4774362-20110620175518/@comment-4774362-20110620181139

It's much better, but here's one thing I've learned you can't please everyone just try and please yourself, it's good to take advice every once and a while, but since everybody has different opinions it's best not to try and make them all happy because there's a good chance it won't happen. Just saying, but yeah the third is better.