User blog:1999bug/Wrath of the Infinity (BLOG)

Okay '''so, I know I've already posted this on an actual page (here), but I want to know what I can improve, and I figured comments would be better than a talkpage. And also I want Character Proposals, so see if your characters will fit in! This will be my first story, and definately needs some work. See you around,'''

    1999bug '''  [[User Talk:1999bug|  Talk  ]][[Special:Editcount/1999bug|  Edits! ]] 01:53, May 21, 2011 (UTC)'''

Prologue
Infinity. Nothing, you say, is infinite?

Space isn't Infinite? True. It could easily end.

But what is infinite? What, may you ask.

Time. Yes, time is Infinite. No matter if something ends, time shall always be there. Counting down....down...down...

But, time is not always good, is it? It causes death, it causes manipulation, it causes the wrath of the infinity.

Sharian was a Toa. No, not some regular toa. He was one of a kind. Smart, Agile, Powerful. Yes. Powerful. He had much power, indeed. As a toa of space and time, he could time travel, and, unlike others, could travel back farther than his birth.

But Sharian new that time was dangerous. Very much so. He could accidently alter time, and never have been born. Maybe worse, like maybe, causing the Toa to loose in important battles. But, no matter how careful one may be, defeat may happen. Yes. Defeat, even for confident people. Life always is the same─ even if you take different paths. Life diverges into one. Eventually you'll die. No one is invincible, no one is indomitable. Everyone has an end, and time will prove to tell.

This is Wrath of the Infinity.

Chapter I
"Why worry about the world ending, when it never will? Well, everything has to end at one point. But not for me."

"Sharian, life always ends. Face it, you can die a fight, or die naturally. Just because time travel keeps you alive and well, for I don't know, millennia, doesn't mean you will not die."

"Ounau, I can. It's in my nature. My blood runs with power. I truthfully can live forever."

"Have what you wish, young toa. But nothing can live forever. Not you, nor I."

"You just wish you had my power!"

"I do not want your power. I've had a long life how it is."