User blog comment:Matoro58/New Storyline Plans/@comment-2026417-20141202063408

I have two suggestions, the fist being possibly coming up with a name for the team other than "Strike X." It doesn't really fit the established tone of the story, sounding something more out of a sci-fi novel than a Bionicle AU.

Secondly, you should keep Vakama as a Toa Hordika. It'd make sense, as he could be a far more threatening villain, and we're not sure if Toa Hordika can become Turaga. Plus, he's got six other Toa to use to awaken the Matoran.

Other than that, this sounds like an interesting concept. I like the idea of having Vakama become the ruler Roodaka said she'd make him (toyed with the concept in my head a couple of times), and there's a lot of ways this could play out. Plus, having the stakes of 2006 with the dark tone of '05 could make for a very cool story. Best of luck with the project!