User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130713230924/@comment-5174759-20130721134136

Nah, don't a character out unless you saw him/her dying :P

I'm glad you see the character developement here, I really tried to give each of them a real personality which lacks in Uprising in my opinion.

I actually did these pictures at a friend's garden, and he sometimes had some useful tips how to place the characters and from which angles I should shoot the images. That was certainly a great help and improved the pictures a lot. It's always a good idea to let somebody else look at your work :)

I see your point in Brorag's appearance, and just like the others he will get more lines and appearances in the whole story. However I had to put so many characters in this chapter (due to the greeeat idea to include self-MoCs) that I couldn't give everybody a huge role in this. It's a bit sad to read the comments over at MOCpages where the people who's MoCs I try to include somehow don't get the attention they want and they just complain about how few shots/lines they had. After all it's my story and not theirs. I will never do a sign-up ever again, it limits your creativity and the people are just ungrateful.

I still don't fully understand why that image of Gesikk's fall inte to swamp was so funny, I just wanted to make some natural special effects :P

If you're interested, Gesikk is quite the old guy. He was the protagonist of my first Bionicle story I wrote back in 2009 some months before the Glatorian were released in my country.