User blog comment:Starscream7/BIONICLE: Universe - Chapter 1 (Official)/@comment-1788742-20111201040014/@comment-2221163-20111201210904

Thank you for the review, Varkanax. I can try to answer any of these issues.

The idea that he arrived late was that he was almost watching among the scene, which couldn't really be found out. And for the second statement, I apologize if I answer this incorrectly, that does prove to be a plot hole that I never managed to fill in. Also, the reason that they wanted to resurrect Spherus Magna was mainly because (even though the Toa were the ones working on the Matoran Universe), the interpretation was lightly given that they thought that Spherus Magna would be a much more suitable place to live in other then just a massive robot. For the Iconox setting, an idea that I had while filming Reality was that the location to the left of Iconox was Tesara, and a cancelled plot idea for the second film would've had to have done with a Makuta attempting to combine both arenas and take control of them, furthermore making them into a slaughtering zone.

The motion was actually good at times, but the camera shook several times as well. The dialogue at the point with the meeting with the agent could've been improved slightly as well, I agree. It was rushed. Trust me, stop-motion indoors is much easier then having it outdoors because of the uneven terrain.

Since I will be improving on special effects in the future, would you still prefer me to use Microsoft Paint (I've grown better with it)? Marendar, if he survives to return in any of the future films, is currently planned to have a darker side of himself. A silent killer, and less talking and more killing, but I will get into detail if he survives. I've also managed to improve on more of the MOCs as well, and they should be much better. I was looking back at some pictures of Reality last night, and I thought that many of the MOCs were very, very poor.

But that is one of the reasons that it was slightly inorganized. I find it odd that he left as well, and if you would like to see his final edit to me, I can message it to you. But I'm glad that you liked it. It's my first film, and I'm hoping to aim for major improvements in the future. More of what you've suggested. So thanks, Varkanax. I will put the comments into some ideas.