User blog:Toa Tasorin/Blog post 3: Stuff and more Stuff

So despite my best efforts, I'm still yet to get the rest of my pages up on the wiki.

And I'm still not certain if my story thus far is any good, and I don't want to continue with a trash story.

So before I continue, I'd like someone to go over and review the first chapter of Book 1: Spherus Magna and give me some feedback on how I can improve it further.

I'm aslo currently working on some concepts for some new characters, the most prominent so far is a Makuta who, in addition to a Makuta's normal powers, can not only has control over plantlife beyond any toa, but whose armor is made of it and can regenrate it instantly.

Any takers are appriciated, and I look forward to working with you as time goes on.

-- Toa Tasorin (talk) 22:14, October 4, 2016 (UTC)