Talk:Adrift

Adrift follows the Toa of Water, Amea as she struggles to stave off the Lykos invasion of her homeland. Wounded and lost, the Toa of Water must work against the Lykos Commander Verkatis in both a battle for honour, and a struggle to keep the Matoran free. Wounded, it is evident that Amea must not rely on her strength and her speed to defeat Verkatis, but her mind and skill to overcome him.

Adrift shows us that there a conflicts all around the V Osade alternate universe, as people struggle to stay alive and remain free from the destruction the Lykos threaten them with.

Adrift is a well done entry, and shows us the will of a Toa trying to protect her Matoran.


 * Originality: While Adrift shows us the struggle a Toa of Water has to go through to defeat a Lykos Commander like Verkatis, it has been a story I have seen. A Toa goes against a greater darkness to protect the Matoran. However, instead of beating the Lykos in a battle of strength, Amea defeats them through wit and cleverness. (6 out of 10)
 * Following Existing Plot: Adrift manages to follow the existing plot very well, continuing after the Battle of Daxia near the Southern Continent. (5 out of 5)
 * Character Development: Amea as a main character showed weakness and was eventually able to overcome it, however she seemed to be static in the sense that it was just her duty to protect the Matoran. She did show bravery, and eventually used her options to overcome a greater foe despite the odds although, rather than just use her strength and speed as said before. (4 out of 5)

Entry Score: (15 out of 20)

- Representative  of the    Union  01:13, August 23, 2015 (UTC)