User blog comment:Darker511/A Vast World- It begins!/@comment-4899022-20141203015829/@comment-25983570-20141203023137

Very well. Most of them reside in the last few sentences of chapter 1.

He found that it seemed to happen from a blast of some kind, but he could figure out where it was from… Other than himself. The blast seemed to origin from the clearing he had lay in, but he didn't believe he had done it.

In the first sentence of them above paragraph it says he could figure out where the blast came from, I should be '''couldn't. '''And then there's the last sentence that says the blast came from the clearing Adert was in. The word had feels kinda out of place, I'd suggest taking it out.