User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130713230924

Something tells me Pirai won't be back soon.... XD

I have to admit, Chapter 2 was the most visually engaging. :D The bright colors and lush, green setting made for an excellent backdrop and the lighting was amazing. Plus I was very pleased to see the Farside Toa functioning as a full Toa Team, and the banter over the leadership of the group between Range's good judgement, Theran's decisive action, and Merall's criticism of Theran's leadership made some excellent drama and sets the scene for some real character development.

Plus there were many funny moments in this installment, and lots of professionally-taken angles, such as our first look at Gesikk in the long wildgrass, and the establishing shot of the Undead Warriors. :P

Overall, another very strong chapter and I'm glad to see some expansion on Pirai and Andron. :P I saw a lot more focus on Merall but, my single criticism of the chapter (and I'm really nit-picking here because I loved it so much!) would be how small Brorag's role really was. I think it may have helped to give him an extra line or two, but it feels unfair to bring that up. The chapter works exceptionally well and it really did bring some of the smaller characters to the foreground of the story, like you promised. :P I can't wait to see Gesikk, though he strikes me as something of a comedic character, falling into the lake at a very serious moment. I was quite surprised to see how serious a character he was when he was first introduced and it's good to see some rivalry going on amongst the Toa. :P