User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130713230924/@comment-958607-20130721201018

That's great to hear. :D This chapter showed the Toa functioning as a far more fluent and naturally-united Toa team than what I've seen in most other fan fictions, and I really got the feeling that there was some history between the characters.

How rude of them! They should be thankful that you don't want their characters just to kill them off for dramatic effect. All of the characters that you've borrowed thus far, you've put to good use and even gone to great effort to add personal details, like Callan's shoulderpads and Gringat's odd socks. :P

Well, the first impression I got of Gresikk was the picture of him falling into the lake that you showed me, so he struck me as something of a goofy, clumsy character, especially with those larger feet. But I was pleasantly surprised to see him being depicted as a far more mature, independent Toa than the novice I was expecting. :P