User blog comment:BIONICLEToa/Attack of the TITAN! (June MOC Bonus!)/@comment-5900628-20140615191523

And now, presenting, the official STORMJAY's CRITIQUE SHOW! The show where we take MOCs, point out what we like, and then totally incinerate everything else on it. Today, our victims MOCs to be reviewed are Quarix, by BIONICLEToa and King Vahi, by ToaKylerak! Please give them a hand!


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The first thing that strikes me about Quarix is that his simple lower limbs don't complement the bulkier size of the torso and upper legs very well. Add some armor to them (like, Inika-foot size) or use totally custom limbs. The upper limbs are better with bulk, but the large hole near the knee throws it off. The feet look okay, but the two nails on the side seem too big. The liftarms on the torso which I presume are there to add bulk end up merely causing large gaps in his sides -- maybe you should use a different technique with Hero Factory armors, which work nicely for adding bulk to a torso. The arms are okay, and the head is nice (I'm not sure whether the oversized fangs detract from the MOC or not.)

As for King Vahi -- meh, the only part of him that seems good is the torso -- kudos to ToaKylerak on that. The limbs seem too lazy and don't work with the bulk of the torso, and the helmet just looks awkward.


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