User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-4873630-20130729172359

Okay, big good/bad list:

GOOD

-I REALLY like the updated versions of Theran and Co., (although they are Inika) it's nice to see Mata forms evolve into Inika forms while remaining close to the original color scheme etc.

-The story gains in complication and becomes deeper. Very nice.

-I somehow like Merall the most. Don't ask why xD.

-Nice and varied camera posing (especially liked the "jumps" and "water" shots and Merall's jump in Chapter 4)

BAD

-While cool, the guys still are Inika. And I don't like Inika. Sorry...

-The Undead seem a little thrown together. (like in Chapter 2) I would try to make their disease more apparent (especially now that some Toa and Matoran characters have black, it is sometimes a bit confusing to distinct good from bad), like adding tails, or a third arm/leg, no head... You get the idea.

-TOTAL GRAMMAR NAZI COMMENT: Still a very few errors in grammar ;P

Get on with it!