User blog comment:LoganWoerner/A User Who Needs Encouragement/@comment-5918010-20130825234841

I know how hard it is to write good stories, and how hard rewriting stuff can be. When I fist joined, I rushed through writing my first story, and wrote a chapter a day of my second one before scrapping them. I think that if you want to try writing a complete story, you should try Vorred's writing contest. Also, start small, possibly with another short story like Poisonous. That's my two cents on the subject.

Onto the discussion topics: 1. Niha being a robot is a good idea, and it does not break the rule that Toa can't be in the OoMN (Whick many a user has broken). 2. I like the fact that the latest Niha MOC has an articulated torso, which makes the MOC more posable. 3. When in doubt, rewrite.