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Truly wonderful stuff. A fantastic way to kick off the G2 continuity on the wiki.

There's some astounding descriptive language in this story along with some interesting quirks and mannerisms for our little-known Protector of Jungle character. Considering just how little is known about day-to-day life in the other villages, the following extract rings very true, both within the diegesis of the story and in describing the second generation's potential:

"I feel as though I am on the threshold of something grand. I do not know what the future will bring, but I know today is the beginning."

- Protector of Jungle's thoughts.

Another feature I admired was the inclusion of spirit stars to mark the coming of the Toa. While the Protector's decision that this was evidence of the prophecy of heroes seemed to come to him a little anti-climatically, I feel it was worth it in order to make that spirit star reference.

I also loved the tribal quirks of the Okotan village community. The fact that so many of them were hunters and farmers, the mentioning of meteorites four summers ago, and even the implication of Kongu one day going on to inherit the mantle of Protector. Not only is it reminiscent of the original Mata Nui storyline, but it also