User blog comment:-woo-/Draft of my new story arc Reign of terror book one chapter one/@comment-25983570-20140101174155

I like this, good job! However I would suggest going more into detail with the characters, what do they look like? What masks do they wear? Going into detail with these things will help the reader get to know the characters, also I would like to know alittle more on Scretar's position, where is he? Like I said before I like this, just needs alittle tweaking:)