User blog comment:Vorred/Elegy - Feedback Blog/@comment-24213217-20141126132834

Vorred, might I ask what camera you are using for taking your photos? They seem really, really clear, and I am currently searching for one.

Btw, huge fan of your work, I like how your MoCs evolves with every one of them, showing your own creative evolution. Keep it up, and maybe we'll have Titan-sized Range or Theran :P

Seriously talking, your story is very linear, but I like it. It makes me feel like the old days of BIONICLE, you know what I'm saying? The days of Quest for the Masks or The Bohrok Swarm, where the Toas had to complete one quest to protect the Matorans. Those were awesome times.

The expression of hands and of the characters are also pretty neat, making them also human. You can almost feel the emotions sparkling from them as they move or talk. For me, it's almost magic.

Lastly, however, your Toa characters are good, showing their personnalities regularly in the comics. It makes them there ; you don't feel like you've forgotten someone two chapters later.

Oh, and the last chapter, Mastery, was truly worth the w8, m8! Good job!