User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-5072107-20130827193524

I haven't given you any feedback yet, so I'm just gonna lump what I think of the last few Chapters into one, big reply.

Solunus - I don't trust him. He's too aggressive, and he's not concerned about loosing anyone but he teammates. Kinda reminds me of Khan from Star Trek, but less evil.

Tilira - She was locked away by the thrid entity for a reason. I personally don't trust her, despite the fact that she's a powerful Toa of Life. Truthfully, I'm hoping that she won't turn out to be a good guy.

Merall - I saw Merall's reaction to Pirai as a sign that she herself is going down the same path as Theran. Granted, nobody died, but it seemed like Merall was willing to kill to grab the orange guy's gun. It really makes sense though, seeing as Nova was supposedly going to bring Toa that looked like those from another land to help him get his revenge. I've always figured that Theran's team were said Toa, an their increasingly aggressive behavior seems to enforce that.

Nova - Either he's extremely good at manipulating people, or he himself has been manipulated into thinking that he is saving people by infecting them with his virus. So he's either a schemer or a monster; either of which makes him a deadly foe.

I like the division that's been happening between the good guys. It's rather unoriginal plot wise, but still interesting. I fully expect to see the split grow larger as Patriots finishes and the final story begins.

I think that's all for now, but if not, I'll add more later.