User:Clone Trooper 1000/BIONICLE Origins: Nektann

This is the page for members of the BIONICLE Origins Club to plan out the new comic BIONICLE Origins: Nektann. A premise will be written by leader Clone Trooper 1000, and other members will be asked to write the story in detail. Please write "unfinished" under issues you haven't completed.

Premise
The story takes place before Nektann became a warlord. He is a young warrior under the command of high warlord Malakai and the Zakaz High Council. This comic details Nektann's conquest of Malakai to eventually become a ruling warlord of his newly-created faction: the Piraka. Also in the comic will be detailed Nektann's first encounter with the Makuta that would eventually lead to his alliance with them.

Issue One
Nektann threw his weapon at an opposing Skakdi warrior,killing him.

As he fought,he reflected on what had hapened in the far past...

It all started when an orginisation known as the Brotherhood of Makuta assinged one of it's members to their island,Zakaz.

The Makuta,named Spirah,experimented on the Skakdi,giving them extraordinary powers and abilities.

But,the experiments drove the Skakdi over the edge,plunging them into war.

Nektann became a warrior unde the command of Malakai,a member of the Zakaz High Council.

Though young,Nektann was vicious,and had thoughts of power.

But,he did not have time to reflect any more,as he was locked in combat with an opposing army of Skakdi.

Nektann locked blades with one of the the enimy Skakdi."Die,die,DIE!"

He stabbed the Skakdi,in his chest,and threw the carcass aside.

He looked up,to see Malakai's army slaying the opposing army.

A battered Skakdi walked up to Nektann."Well,we sure showed them."

Nektann nodded."We sure did,Thok."

The Skakdi of Ice looked down,to see an enimy Skakdi still alive."What should we do with him?"

Nektann grabbed the Skakdi,by the neck."Let's take 'im back to Malakai.He could give us some information."

Nektann threw the Skakdi he captured in front of Malakai."I got a prisoner for you."

Malakai leaned forward."Excelent.Tell me,what warlord do you work for?"

The captured Skakdi crawled backwards,gulping."Why would I tell you?"

Malakai brought his blade to the prisoners throat."Tell me,or do want to live without a head."

The Skakdi blurted out."Okay,okay!I work for Lumish!Please,don't kill me!"

Malakai smiled."Good...and now..."

The Skakdi warlord ran the prisoner through,killing him."...You have outlived your usefulness."

Nektann stood there,waiting to be spoken to.

Eventually Malakai noticed him."Hey,what are you gobbing at?Get out of here!"

Nektann clentched his fists,holding back foul curses.

Eventually,he turned away."Yes...sir."

Nektann was walking through the debries of the battles,looking for something he could salvage.

He was then knocked flat,into a ditch.

He opened his eyes,to see four beings standing over him.

One of them spoke to a tall,white one."What should we do with him,Krika."

Another one gave a gahstly suggestion."I say we decapatate him and be done with it."

Yet another one shook his head."Oh Icarax,you always were far too barbaric."

Icarax growled."Yes,that's coming from the one who started all this in the first place!"

Spirah narrowed his eyes."Listen you-"

"Enough!"

They all turned around,to see another one.

Icarax sighed."Teridax..."

Teridax walked over to face Nektann."Tell me,what's your name."

Before Nektann could answer,he felt the strange sensation of his mind being probed.

When it ended,he was looking at Teridax.

Teridax returned the look."Your name is Nektann,am I correct?"

Nektann nodded.

The Makuta continued."And you serve the warlord,Malakai."

Nektann nodded again."Yes."

Teridax looked at his fellows."I say we let him live."

Icarax looked at Teridax."Why?"

Spirah backed him up."Yeah,what if he tells his fellow Skakdi about his encounter."

Krika looked at them."Oh please,if he did,who would believe him?"

The other Makuta nodded in,reluctant,agreement.

Teridax looked down at the form of Nektann."You are lucky,we will spare your life."

Nektann gave a sigh of relief.

When he looked up again,the four Makuta were gone.

The Skakdi got up."I don't know who those guys were,but I'm gonna' find out."

Nektann spent the next several weeks trying to find more information about the Makuta,as his hatred for Malakai grew.

Eventually,the Water Skakdi discovered a scroll,in one of Malakai's secret rooms."Yes!"

He opened it,and read over it.

About halfway through,Malakai walked in."Hey!What are you doing with that?!"

The warlord lept at Nektann,and tried to pry the scroll from his hands."Give that to me!"

The two Skakdi fought tooth and claw over it,Malakai coming out the victor.

He held the scroll above Nektann."Now,you die!"

Nektann grabbed a knife,and stabbed Malakai in his leg.

Malakai fell over."YAIIIIIHHHHHHHHHHH!"

Nektann raced out of the camp.

Issue Two
Nektann held a Skakdi of Iron against a stone wall."Again,where is Lumish!?"

The Skakdi wriggled in Nektanns vice-like grip."I'm not telling."

Nektann brought his scythe up to his face."Tell me,or do you want to aquire a taste for steel?"

The Skakdi wailed out his answer."All right!All right!He is in the western part of the island!Now,LET ME GO!"

Nektann dropped the Skakdi,grinning."Excelent.I will spare your life."

Nektann walked away from the terrorfied Skakdi,with some of the answers he sought.

Nektann sat behind a rock,studying the scroll.

It was in fact quite interesting,and it detailed much of the history of the Brotherhood:

"The Brotherhood of Makuta was formed about 100,000 years ago,and is lead by a Makuta named Miserix.

Many of the Makuta worked solely on creating Rahi to populate the universe.

After a four hundred year long war broke out on the island city of Metru Nui,Miserix assinged most of the Makuta to different islands.

Nektann stopped there,and got up.

But,he was bemused.

How did Malakai get this scroll?

Could it be that he has ties to the Brotherhood?

Temporarily putting this out of his mind,Nektann got up,grabbed his blade,and continued to make his way to the area of the island the Skakdi told him about.

Nektann had Lumish's camp in his sight.

Smileing on the inside,the Skakdi proceded to the entrance.

Four Skakdi blocked Nektann's entrance."Halt."

Nektann walked forward."I want to see Lumish."

The Skakdi raised their weapons."Over our dead bodies."

Nektann grinned."That can be arranged."

Nektann lept at the four Skakdi guards,strangleing one of them.

Another one of the guards ran at Nektann with his spear.

In the last second,Nektann dodged,and the spear-bearing Skakdi ran another Skakdi through.

Nektann kicked the spear-bearing Skakdi in the gut,and slammed his head on a rock,killing him.

Now,only one guard was left,and he was the most skilled of all of them.

He charged at Nektann,knocking him over.

Nektann looked up,to see the guard bearing down on him.

Nektann grabbed his scythe,and slashed the guard across his mid-section.

The Skakdi fell over,bleeding.

Nektann walked over to him,and stomped on his head,slaying him.

He turned around,and started making his way to where Lumish was.

Lumish stood in his tower,looking out on the desert area.

His thoughts were shattered by a voice behind him."Lumish!"

Nektann stood there,his scythe at the ready.

Lumish frowned."Ah,what's your name?Nektann?Yes,your one of Malakai's lackies."

Nektann then lept at Lumish,in a rage.

Lumish grabbed a metal rod,and slammed it into Nektann's face.

Nektann stumbled back,holding his face in his hands.

Lumish pounced,and grabbed Nektann.

Nektann grabbed his scythe,and slashed Lumish's leg.

Lumish dropped Nektann,and the Skakdi of Water fell off the tower,which was at least a hundred feet tall.

Lumish stmbled backwards,from the slash across his leg,and also fell off.

Luckly,Lumish hit a softer part of earth,and wes not seriously injured.

He got up,aided be two Skakdi.

One of them looked at the tower."Do you think he survived?"

Lumish cuffed him across the ears."Of course he didn't,idgit!That tower is a hundred feet tall.No one could survive that!"

But,amazingly,Nektann did survive.

He groaned,and got up.

He was aching all over,but he was alive.

Something then cot his eye.

He inspected it,and saw that it was a dead slug.

He studied it closer,and realised it was a Kraata,that was usually used by the Brotherhood of Makuta.

He dropped the worm,bemused.

What was the Brotherhood doing here?

Something was going on,and Nektann made a silent vow to himself that he would find out.

Issue Three
Nektann walked through the wastes of Zakaz,cradleing an arm that was injured in his battle with Lumish.

He was seeking out his friends,the brothers:Vezok and Vezon.

He wondered what was going on on Zakaz.

So many questions ran through his mind.

How did Malakai get the scroll?

Did he have ties to the Brotherhood,and what was the Brotherhood's intrest on Zakaz?

After all,all his island was good for was to watch barbarians tear each other apart.

He stopped suddenly,as he saw something in the distance.

He sprinted to the area,and came across a gruesome sight:two,brutally slain,Skakdi.

He spun around at a voice behind him."Well,well,well,Nektann."

Vezon stood there,Vezok behind him,wiping blood off his knife.

Nektann loosened his grip on his scythe."Ah,Vezok,Vezon,just the guys I was lookin' for."

Vezok walked in front of Vezon."Look,we need your help,or at least our father does."

Nektann nodded."You mean Sanca?"

Vezon twirled his knife."Correct."

Nektann held out his hand."Alright,fine."

The three Skakdi walked through the desert,heading to Sanca's fortress,which was in the far north of Zakaz.

Eventually,Nektann asked Vezon a question."This would be alot faster with Fenrakk.Where is he,by the way?"

Vezok answered."I lost him."

Vezon muttered under his breath."You lose everything,you lummox."

Vezok appearently heard him."Hey,what did you call me?"

Vezon sighed."You wouldn't understand..."

The rest of their jounery continued uneventful,any Skakdi they saw were dead or close.

Eventually,they reached Sanca's camp,with Skakdi wandering all over the place.

They walked over to where Sanca was.

Vezok and Vezon,the latter reluctant,bowed to him."Father."

Sanca turned."Ah,Vezok,Vezon,I see you brought someone,though it won't do much good."

Nektann walked over to Sanca."Well,how's about you tell us your situation?"

Sanca turned back to the sea."One of my rival warlord,Rork,has launched a two-day assault on more than half my army,further up the coast.Hardly any of them are left."

Nektann clasped his hands behind his back."Well,it just so happens that I'm a skilled tactition,and I might be able to help."

Sanca turned."Excelent,we will set out in the morning."

The three Skakdi walked away.

Nektann stopped,and inspected some complex machinery that two Skakdi engineers were inspecting.

The technology was quite advanced,and Nektann could use something like that.

What if,he could make an army of these things?

But first,he would have to get his hands on the tech,and he might have to get them dirty to get it.

Making sure no one was looking,Nektann unsheathed his scythe,and slit the two engineers throats.

Stuffing the bodies under the table,Nektann grabbed the machinery,and hid it in the sands outside the camp.

He returned to the camp,hoping to get the oprotunity to reverse-engineer the tech.

The next morning,the army of around fifty,marched.

By noon,they could see the smoke of the battle Sanca had described.

Sanca called a rest,as they were only about an hour of marching from the battlefield.

Nektann and Sanca disscussed battle strategies,eventually coming up with an agreement:Sanca,Nektann,Vezok,and Vezon would join the remaining Skakdi from the previous battle,to make it seem like there was only them,while the other fifty would make a pincher formation,and surprise Rork's army.

If it worked,Sanca's army might very well come out the victor.

After the debate,Sanca's army marched once again.

When they were about ten minutes away from the battlefield,the fifty Skakdi broke off,twenty-five going left,twenty-five going right,all of them concealed by a rocky outcropping.

Nektann,Sanca,Vezok,and Vezon joined the remaining Skakdi from the battle,all four of them silently praying that their plan would work.

In all,only thirteen Skakdi were left of Sanca's army,from the previous battle.

Rork marched out in front of his hoard."Well,lookey boys,the coward has shown up,to die!

The enimy Skakdi drew their weapons,as did Sanca's force.

The time for talk had passed,and the battle begun.

Issue Four
Nektann spat into the sand and cried a Skakdi battle cry.

The other water Skakdi followed the example until the air was filled with a wall of sound coming from both sides.

Rork chuckled, thinking the small portion of Sanca's army was the whole thing.

Without hesitation, Nektann ran toward the Stone Skakdi, scythe in hand.

He tore at a few stray soldiers and then found himself face-to-face with Rork.

The warlord was visibly taller than Nektann, but that didn't intimidate the young warrior.

Scythe met club as the two clashed.

Sanca and his sons managed to stay alive, but most of the thirteen others lay slain.

"It's time," he said to Vezok.

Vezok took out a horn and blew with all his might.

Out of the dust came legions of Water Skakdi.

Rork stared in shock at this turn of events. "No, this cannot be!"

Nektann seized this opportunity of distraction to run the warlord through with his scythe.

"Coward," spat Nektann.

At this point, most of Rork's men fled for the hills.

Those who remained were easy targets for the water Skakdi.

Soon, only one brave enemy remained.

Nektann taunted him, "Ha! Fool! Lose your dignity, or your life! Flee from here now!"

"I choose dignity!" he spat back.

The two sprinted for each other, contacting with an adrenaline-fueled blow.

Nektann soon knocked away the Earth Skakdi's weapon.

"Dumb Stone Skakdi," Nektann muttered.

Vezok and Vezon each took an arm of the struggling Skakdi, bringing him back to Sanca's village.

"You lose," said Vezon.

"Not until I die," retorted the Stone Skakdi.

Along the way, Nektann approached the prisoner.

"What is your name, stranger?" he asked.

"Avak," was the reply.

"Avak? Well, Avak, your fighting skills are almost as good as mine, or even Thok's."

"Nice sucking up there, Nektann."

"How do you know my name?"

"You'd be surprised how fast the news of a traitor can spread!"

"What do you speak of?"

"You stole a possession of Malakai's, that's what! He's so angry, that he says he's sending his ice allies after you!"

"Even Thok?"

"I guess so."

"Well, that won't do. I'm gonna have to assemble an army of my own."

"Really? Well count me in. I've always hated that Fire spitter Malakai anyway."

Nektann was pleased that he had finally been able to grasp an ally. "Release Avak at once, Sanca! He's with us now."

Vezon and Vezok untied Avak's bonds.

Once Avak was free, he and Nektann talked about the new alliance.

The brothers immediately pledged themselves to this new group, in hatred of Zakaz's current ruler Malakai.

"What should we call ourselves?" asked Vezok.

Nektann's reply came swiftly: "We are who we are, Vezok. And that's thieves. Thieves and murderers. We are Piraka..."

That night at Sanca's village, Nektann dug up the robot he had stolen earlier.

It was a very brilliant design, though a little rough around the edges.

He transported it to his own hut and set it down on a table.

Two hours later, the Water Skakdi had taken the bot apart and carved its engineering onto a tablet.

Just as he was finishing up, Avak entered the hut.

"Nektann!" said the guest, "What's going on?"

Nektann replied, "It's a new weapon, but quiet, you fool! Sanca must not hear a word of it. Tell Vezok and Vezon to get ready, for tomorrow, we see Fanrah. With any luck, he will pledge himself to our order."

"Good. It will be done."

As Avak was uttering this, he thought to himself: ''YES! Weapons!''

Issue Five
"Goodbye, young ones," said Sanca to the four "Piraka".

Nektann waved to his friend and then quickly caught up to his group.

"I wonder how Fanrah will feel about the alliance," murmured Vezon.

"I heard he disagrees with Malakai, but I doubt he wants to overthrow him," added Vezok.

"Then we'll just have to get out some big guns!" mused Avak.

Nektann shook his head. "They must call you "The Trigger" back where you come from."

Avak growled.

Fanrah seemed indifferent toward the four travellers.

"Ah. The Piraka. I've heard about you traitors," he said

"Join us!" bellowed Nektann. "Overthrow Malakai and his secretive ways! This island needs a new leader, and that leader is me!"

"Malakai manages to keep out of my way, so why should I care?"

"Maybe you'll care when I tear you apart!" roared Vezok.

Fanrah smiled. "Would you tell "The Beast" to shut his mouth before I tear him apart!"

"Listen here, Fanrah!" piped up Vezon.

But before he could continue, Skakdi of Fire and Ice burst into the camp and began slaying Fanrah's warriors.

Nektann smiled at Fanrah.

"So," he said, "you call this keeping out of your way?"

Fanrah shook his head and began fighting a Skakdi of Fire.

Soon after, Nektann spotted Thok fighting Vezok.

"Thok!" shouted Nektann. "Brother, join me! Forget Malakai and his old ways!"

Thok pondered this and remembered his strong friendship with Nektann.

The Skakdi of Ice began slaying his own kind along with Malakai's tribe.

After a few minutes of fighting, Fanrah lay mortally wounded.

One of his warriors named Reidak knelt by his side.

He whispered: "Master, I will avenge you by joining the Piraka."

"You have done well, Reidak," replied Fanrah with the last bit of air he had left.

From the other side of the room, a Fire Skakdi ceased fighting Fanrah's warriors and turned to the fallen Earth Skakdi.

"This is an injustice!" he cried out. "I, Hakann, pledge myself to Nektann and his order!"

"Good!" yelled Nektann. "Now let's finish up here, shall we?"

After the dust had settled, the only survivor of Malakai's army was Skiza.

Nektann stepped up to the Ice Skakdi.

"I would kill you," said the water Skakdi, "but my friend Thok would not allow it. Join me instead, Skiza. Become a Piraka."

"I'd rather die!" screamed Skiza.

Nektann was enraged now.

"Then do it!" he yelled, stabbing the unarmed warlord. "Come Thok, Reidak, Avak, Vezon, and Vezok! Tomorrow, we find Lumish and finish what I started. The Piraka will not rest until either he is dead or assimilated. Now march!"

Premise by CT1000
Nektann and his Piraka, now made up of himself, Hakann, Vezon, Vezok, Reidak, Avak, and Thok head back to Lumish's village to either ally with or destroy him. Lumish must survive this issue. Also, somehow, Zaktan (who is a soldier of Lumish) must ally with the Piraka and for some reason is made second in command under Nektann. At the end of the issue, Nektann must wander to Malakai's village while the other Piraka sleep. There, he finds a telescope of Malakai's that lets him get a glimpse of the Red Star and the beings inside. After this, Nektann notices traces of Antidermis that lead into the forest.

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