User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130630172655/@comment-958607-20130630212631

Wow... I've planned all the stage directions, angles, positionings, even the time of day for each shot so far. XD

I reread the Prologue and, once again, the whole metaphysical feel of the chapter fascinates me. :P I haven't really commented on the ending yet. Is the survival of this female Toa of Fire going to develop into a story about her and Glonor? :P I notice she was injured in the fall and assume that Glonor is going to help her back to health. I'm also fascinated to hear more about her team's backstory with all the hints that you gave away. Regardless, the next chapter is going to be awesome, I'm sure. I shall be sitting in my room, posting fan theories and feedback non-stop in anticipation. XD