User blog comment:Chalk33/Ultimate Updates! September 2013 Part 1/@comment-5174759-20130903174533

Thanks for the shoutout!

Now that I saw those images you uploaded, I would offer you my advice on how to make the pictures more appealing to others. Please don't be offended, but in my opinion there is some space for improvement :) The background is good already, you used two simple and solid colors which don't distract from the creation you're showing. There are two things you should try changing however: The first being the shape of your picture. There is a lot of empty space on those so I would suggest you cut the unnecessary parts away and focus more on the MoC. The second improvement would be the photo quality... it seems a bit blurry, have you tried to set the right focus? You can also easily do it with any smartphone if it's too complicated with your camera.

Now onto the discussion topics:


 * I think introducing all the cast in the first part isn't a great idea. Add new characters as the story evolves, not all at once. Readers get easily confused by too many names.


 * Like I said before, a Toa Hagah would match. I could imagine Iruini, Bomonga or Pouks in that role.


 * Hm, what about changing the size of the banner a bit? It's basically a picture with font on it, a banner is more like a pictographic "headline". Maybe try that!


 * I don't remember Naru's first version that good. Could you link me to his former look, please?

That's all for now :D