User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-7630469-20130721195916

When will Glonor and the female Toa of fire reappear?

I think chapter 3 was a bit bland. Because it is basically like chapter 2, because Andron and Gringat were kidnapped, the undead attacked, and one character got injured. However, I understand why it was like this, but I think chapter 3 should've had more special effects like when Gessik was tossed in the water and how you managed to take a photo of his splash. Maybe you could've made a scene where Vastara landed, making some soil of leaves fly from the forest floor. Overall, the action was nice an it was a good chapter.

Can't wait for chapter 4!