User blog comment:LoganWoerner/LoganWoerner's April 2013 Update/@comment-1524575-20130420194348

Poisonous while short, was a rather interesting story to say the least. Seeing Erevayx written from your perspective gave wonderful insight, and will help me develop him more as a character in my own stories.

While the fighting portion was spectacular, I would have liked a better resolve to the battle--rather than just going in and poking at his lifeforce; I'm not saying it was terrible, it just seemed a little too rushed... but I guess it worked with the situation Niha was in...

The ending was a rather good one, though it seemed a little short as well; a lot of dialogue was exchanged--which was great, but it left a short impression and the only part I remember well was when Niha told Mersery and Tanreaa and their reaction. But as I said before, it was a good ending.

Very impressed with the outcome, is there things you could improve on? Most definitely. Is it a good story with a few problems? Yes. Really, I recommend anyone to read Poisonous--and I eagerly await the next 'chapter' in the story.

Rating: 8.5/10, B+ or A-