User blog comment:Vorred/Elegy - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20141118001644/@comment-5174759-20141118144300

I tried to avoid shots of Berwak's head as best as I was able to. It's a sacrifice I made with using the Toa Metru head, which has a lot more poseability but sadly makes it look awkward here and there.

Am I predictable at this point with being not-predictive? We'll see about Range!

If Berwak is able to teach Vorred how to control read, does that make him a master of color? If so, does he know which Pauto's favorite is?

That sentence would be perfect for his possible killer! You give me ideas here!

I'm glad so many parts of the shortest chapter so far were enjoyable to you! You noticed the many details I put here and there, which is nice :)

Thanks for the long review of the short chapter!