User blog comment:FireDrag1091/''Declaration'' Reveal + Christmas Greetings/@comment-25983570-20141228203937

Alrighty, I finished reading Declaration, and here is my review.

The reader is brought to the island of Destral in it's most darkest of days, trees are beginning to die as life radiply vanishes from the island leaving only death and destruction. The cause of this being a deadly toxin which has engulfed the island, the toxin's master being non other than Makuta Erevayx. This is the world the reader is thrown into and this world is explained to them using descriptive words and conversation bewtween what little life dares walk this island. Honestly, I absolutely love how you opened up the story, you give the reader such a descriptive explanation beginning from the start and just take it from there, you use your excellently made exposition to catch the reader's attention as the main protagonist journeys towards Erevayx.

Even in the beginning the character is given a glimpse at the main protagonist's personality. As the story progresses we learn more of her and her motives. Our hero is Vulf, Toa of psionics who carries a great determination to defeat Makuta Erevayx. As we continue to walk with Vulf we learn more and more about the dire situation at hand. We see more of the toxin's deadly work as Vulf goes deeper into the forests of Destral.

I'll be back later to finish the review.