User blog comment:DeltaStriker/'Rock Bottom' Exclusive Preview/@comment-5898771-20131211214236

Seems pretty nice, aside from a few grammatical things and the like, though I know you've only read this over once so I'm sure you'll catch them with later proofreading. ;)

Also, another thing which you don't necessarily need to change, it just bugs me personally... referring to a Matoran by the mask they wear. Saying "the noble Rau wearer" would be kind of like referring to me as a "green hat wearer" or something. Up to you though. :P