Talk:Zero Hour: Chapter 4

This chapter was just incredible. Character deaths and a lot of drama... it's not going to end so well for Marlott's population.

Thode is probably my favorite character in this chapter. I especially liked the scene were he suddenly appeared behind Vancha, the pose was just great!

My other favorite moment was Nordix transformation. Or better, what happened afterwards. For a moment I was sure that he might join the other Matoran and flee with them... until I saw this image. I almost wanted to say "No!" as I knew what was about to happen!

You also made quite the shocking moment when you showed Salu. You spoilered before hat he was going to die, but I've never expected how bad he looked like. The mask and armor, all broken and scratched... one can only imagine what the poor Toa must have endured.

I also liked the shot of the Skakdi's melted face. The scene showed Thode's pure power on that enemy who couldn't stand a chance.

I think you perfectly captured what you tried to achieve. This is definitely the story's most dramatic point.

Now the villager flee, Salu and Salaak are dead, Jekkai is probably going to get himself killed trying to get back.

The next chapter needs to come. -- 14:06, October 2, 2014 (UTC)