User blog:BIONICLEToa/The Chronicles of Fa feedback blog

As many of you know, I currently am rebooting my BIONICLE fan-fiction universe to fit into the Splinters Alternate Universe, an alternate reality in which the Makuta make an empire out of the Matoran Universe. As such, The Chronicles of Fa is the first part of the saga in which we begin our story.

Of course, I made this blog so I can have feedback. In truth, I feel like i'm lacking the support and critiquing in order to write this story, so I really need your guy's help.

So far, we have: And so on and so forth. So I think it would help if you guys participated and gave me support and critiques so I can improve my writing!
 * The Introduction
 * The Prologue
 * Chapter 1
 * Chapter 2
 * Chapter 3 (Currently in progress)

Before you ask: No, I will not make this a comic. As much as I want to, I feel like it would make more sense if this was written in novel format, as Fatorak himself is writing this. I am willing to do such comics with other stories though, especially with untold parts of the saga that I am yet to reveal.

Anyways, I would love your guy's feedback!

May the speed of Pohatu be with you.