User blog:-woo-/Draft

Hey guys its me woo and i was bored so i decided to give you guys a prequel of my storyline The twisted game. Here is the first chapter bare in mind that this is only a draft

Setting: spherus magna new metru nui

Prolouge

There was blood.. Matoran screamed for help as the newly rebuilt metru nui burned to ashes Xerredos laughed in amusement as he watched his army terminate the city. Agori ran throughout metru nui killing any matoran they could find. Glatorians fought off the toa allowing the agori to attack. Xerredos had won. His revolution to try and turn the agori against the matoran had suceeded. But.. There was only one problem. Xerredos turned around to see an angry toa tahu staring him right in the eyes. "I see you have defeated the glatorian." Xerredos said smileing "Your other friends werent so lucky huh." Xerredos grinned as he saw the look on tahus face turn from anger to sadness. "Its too late toa" xerredos stated "for i have already won. The matoran are slowly but surely being eleminated. The toa are being defeated as i speak and the turaga have been killed." "Thats where your wrong." Tahu said "Us toa will stop at nothing until the matoran are safe even if that includes all of us dying." Xerredos smirked "foolish toa there are no more matoran and soon there will be no more toa aswell." Tahu looked greif-stricken "no more matoran?" He thought to him self "Youre lying!" Tahu said before charging at the shadow toa. It was no use. xerredos was to powerfull tahu attacked countless times without even fazing the shadow toa. "Now." Xerredos said "its MY turn!" The shadow toa pulled out his axe and lunged at tahu. The toa of fire did what he could but soon he was overwhealmed by the shear power of Xerredos. Xerredos stood there staring at the lifeless body of a once great toa. He turned to hear foot steps. *pant* *pant* "All the matoran have been wiped out master." Said an agori. "What about the toa?" xerredos said "well by the looks of it." The agori turned to see tahus corpse lying still. "The toa have been killed off too." Xerredos smiled "one city down one more to go."

Well that was all im still writing the first chapter. Feel free to critisize my story