User blog comment:ThatDevilGuy/The Imperfect MOCs 2/@comment-5174759-20130618132201

Just saw this was posted a while ago and not many people have commented.

Ugh, it's always hard for a MoCist like me to comment on other people's creations when those are simple. But I hope you'll take this as a constructive critisism!

I see you like useing the standart Inika body build as well with the normal limbs. While you made new color shemes, it's still basic overall. This doesn't mean that there has to be customness; It's always a matter on how everything works together and looks at a whole.

But first to the things you did good already: I see all the effort of work that has been put into Vicoran, and it's great how you covered up that Makuta torso. The leg parts on his upper legs also work nicely and fit as armor parts.

Also, the different combinations to design new armor for legs and arms look interesting.

Now the things that can need some improvement in my opinion: Basically the weapons. While custom made swords and other tools may look cool, try to not make them look fat. When you add more of little claws and stuff to it, it gets wider, and doesn't match a rather skin character like Keihan. Sometimes you made some spears with nice upper parts, but the hilt is so thin taht it almost look like it could break anytime.

I see that you tried making new armor on some of these guys, but always be sure it matches the whole; while a foot as a torso piece looks refreshing, it doesn't really match the body shape and make him look a bit off.

Be sure to make any kind of armor to look complex. Too many spiky pieces that stick out aren't that pleasing for the eye as a smooth armor plate, even when the latter is more simple.

I hope some of my tips can help you to improve your MoCing skills :)