User blog comment:Darkblade9/Guardians Feedback Blog/@comment-25887569-20150303002332

First off: The writing is the only thing I have some issues with. Some of the lines are either awkward or not-believable.But I really loved what you did with Brutaka. The themes or redemption, to kill or not to kill and the dialogue between Axon and Brutaka is very well-written. I also like your art, you manage to convey emotion and action without staying that far from the design of the sets. All in all, a promising start. I eagerly await any future installments. Also, that's one heck of a cliff hanger!