User blog comment:Lalajujunini/MOC Blog 1/@comment-25824421-20150810181452/@comment-1372439-20150810190542

To be fair, I really like the Nikila MOC even for its simple design, and I just love that ship you're building. The Rovex prototype is also really interesting and spider-like. Would be good for use as a mutated being or as a Rahi? Not too big a fan of the Onua, even though it's got a nice design. Khrodak's design is nice, too, but I'm not really into the brown and blue thing. If you think it's great, though, I say go for it.

I'd also give a tip for Khrodak: any character is as important or unimportant to a storyline as you want him/her to be. A storyline with more rounded characters is likely to be more interesting, at least in my eyes.

Still, keep going and I'm sure you'll get better. Only the worst, most hopeless MOC-ists won't improve their skill with time.