User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130710011048/@comment-5174759-20130710120651

You're really into Shakespeare, right? :D

I just never saw somebody making a comic and looking out for the stuff that always was in the movies (except the 4th); the storie began to be told with Toa Stones and most of the time with Makuta and Mata Nui. I just had to tell my legend this way!

The Skakdi was one of my last-minute-characters, but I just needed somebody for that role and as a prisoner I thought it would match to take that species. I think I really got inspired by the Skakdi you made; it made me remember there are more species than Toa and Matoran :P

What was hard to understand? I'm just asking to get it improved in the next chapters. I could also re-write this, so just tell me what was a bit complicated.

A user at MOCpages already guessed what was up with those three mystical Toa and the Kanohi mask that they got from Farside Village. He was pretty close already, and what would you think?

There is more to see of the characters, but Falecía, Pirai and Andron are more like side-characters who don't get a big role as Brorag and Merall (since I want the focus on the whole team and not just Theran and Range).