User blog comment:Vorred/Elegy - Feedback Blog/@comment-11429692-20150416233313/@comment-5174759-20150417100545

The first sentences you said were final battle-y really took me a while to get right. I didn't want chliché or something unfitting. It seems that the extra work payed off.

That Skakdi was a nice change in writing. His name was Kalvost, but I don't think it ever gets mentioned anywhere.

The shockwave and the sleep powder weren't learned in a magician's school. We've never seen Nuva use his full potential in a battle yet, haven't we?

Khyae didn't die here, but you certainly wouldn't have liked if I left the cut content regarding her in the story.

Are the final scenes really that classic? I've only seen some of them once so far in other media.

Thank you for reading and your reaction review. It's different to read, but this way I can see what you thought about almost each scene when it happened.