User blog:D3F14NTG4M3R5/Boundaries Snippet

This snippet is from a story called Boundaries: Origins which I'm making on Microsoft Word. I know that due to safety reasons, some of the content (swearing, gore or anything else considered offensive) will be taken out. In no way does it display political matters as of now, but political matters in the future, so this isn't to support one group and disobey the other. Instead, it's a story I've been dying to put up on here since I want people to see it, and I have MoC's that can be used in the characters place. So here it is:

I took my helmet off to give myself some breathing space. I was exhausted. The Sigma were charging towards the Dreadnought on Nexus, and I barely escaped. I had a look through my video messages and viewed one of them. It was my brother Dom's last message.

"Jack, I know we're brothers and we wouldn't leave each other behind, but I need to go. For the sake of our people on Earth, for the people on Qiriqo, and most importantly... for you. I'm sorry I couldn't say goodbye, so hopefully this will make up for it... Goodbye Jack... I'll miss you..."

As the video ended, a tear ran down my eye. I missed him, my brother was killed by Sigma soldiers, and that was one more reason for me to kill me dad. My dad has caused all of this. If he didn't make that drug, and infected himself and my mother, then things wouldn't be like this... I wouldn't be like this... I've tried to live a happy life. I tried to make friends in the Children's Refuge on Pi Rho Tau, and even then, that was hard. My only friend died in a Qiriq Rebellion attack. Me, Dom and 5 others were the only survivors. When I signed up to the Dreadnought... my brother got killed... because of me. It's my fault for all of this. If I didn't have revenge in my head for how my dad gave me and Dom scars when we were only 2, then maybe this wouldn't have happened... but I'm not letting my Dad win. I stared into empty space and saw asteroids pass by, occasionally hitting against the window. As I turned around, I saw a bloody figure, which unleashed an ear-piercing sound. Dom pranced towards me and attacked me.

So that's the snippet of Boundaries: Origins. Will it be allowed, or is it to frightening and gory?