User blog comment:Gahlok va98/Zina's tale is out!/@comment-2215631-20130424111254

I've read a bit of Zina's Tale, and I've figured one thing out: you must love to write. You've got a bunch on there already, and I admire that.

The problems have already been stated by Echo,  so I don't feel the need to enforce it, but I can give you a tip. Read the Manual of Style. It teaches you some formatting tips.

Good luck!