User blog comment:Darkblade9/Guardians Feedback Blog/@comment-4767722-20150303023652

The good: The art is pretty good. The posing you do is very superb and the characters' emoting is well done. You actually explored something that wasn't addressed in-canon as far as I know and I like fanfiction that does that. I also really enjoyed the design of Teridax at the end.

The not-so-good: While the drawing is great, sometimes the proportions become awkward and I think the main obstacle here is indeed the panel sizes. I've seen your full page drawings and these small panels kind of limit your ability. I also hope something major is happening with Teridax's appearance because something about fanfiction chapters ending with the appearance of the canon's main villain makes me cautious. Also Matoro is spelled as "Mataro".

However, this is still the first issue, so these problems I have with this chapter might be mended. Best of luck to your efforts in the next chapter.