User blog comment:Chicken Bond/DR Opinion/@comment-30133540-20110212090130/@comment-1863408-20110212125709

I want to help write too... it would be an honor, and I've actually improved a lot lately. For example, compare these two sentences from the old and new version of Baterra Lair:


 * D-4 shut off due to the impact.


 * The armored Baterra was launched backwards into the metal wall, which buckled and cracked under it's weight. The robot's lights began to fade, and it folded in on itself and slid to the ground, a result of both the impact and the massive explosion.