User blog comment:BobTheDoctor27/New MOCs: 01/@comment-1221909-20120306082117

Very nice MOCs. Very impressive. I adore your total overhaul/revamp of Tollubo. I can imagine it must be quite hard for him to totally forsake his identity and everything that physically made him "Tollubo - the veteran who went to hell and back". Oh well, at least he's got that amazing gun now XD. Still, his change it can be related in the canon storyline, such as when the Matoran of Karzahni had to give up their masks and identities. Hollian seems like a character who's been forced into a dark world she doesn't deserve to live in. Her MOC is quite impressive (I've always adored these Vortixx MOCs you've made, and how they seem like they can actually work as canon Vortixx). I love Varis, as I've always had attachments to Matoran assassins, and I think the classic Metru Matoran just works so well. He seems like a very interesting character.

Also, I love this dark and gritty direction your storyline is spiraling in. If the canon BIONICLE universe is perceived as a horrendous warzone, then the setting of your storyline is 50% worse. All this referencing to the grotesques and abuses of our world makes your storyline quite believable, especially in your recent works. And the one thing I think makes this aspect work so well is the way you make it relate to the characters, especially the older ones. With the older characters, such as Tollubo you can notice the gradual but noticeable changes in their views, their personalities, and their actions as your stories have pushed them to their limits over and over again. I guess that's because you can progress with these older characters and watch them harden up as they sacrifice everything they can offer for a better world. In simple words, you have great characters. To finalize, this looks like great work and I can't wait to see what you have to offer as things become a little bit darker in the world of your protagonists!