Talk:Zero Hour: Chapter 6

Stealing the Spotlight
There was no way I could allow you to be in the recent changes for long :P

Jokes aside, you deserve a review for this long-awaited chapter.

What struck me first was the use of a shot showing a lot of landscape, this time a mountain. We also had this at the beginning of the whole story, and it really sets up the right mood as an introduction to your prelude to the final confrontation.

You showed us so many epic nature shots with the characters we know in, each planning and preparing on their own. Jekkai's crawling through his own tunnel shows your skill in photography as it looks simply stunning! Him crawling through his way out of the dark - very nice.

I'm amazed in all those action-shots how poseable you were able to make Jekkai, him being a simple Mata-build! All of these showing him gathering his Kanohi are truly excellent.

The whole scene showing Merra and her assembly of an old Exo-Toa was nicely done as well. I like the concept of using the fallen warrior's armor and "spare parts" to use again against another threat, and like Autolycus said; Better for them to be used than to rot there.

The dialogue between Jekkai and Thode empathizes how much more knowledge and experience the senior Toa has compared to him. He's become Jekkai's new mentor over the past chapters, if intended by him or not.

Him making Jekkai kill the deceased Matoran... it fades away from Thode actually being a hero and shows his more serious and sinister side. I really liked that, altough I felt a little sorry for our Toa of Ice. Then again he changed after killing that Rahkshi, so it's just a step further in his character development.

The there's the preparation for the coming battle. And Jekkai getting to wear girl's clothes :P I know that the armor isn't shaped for each gender, but it's just a thing I can't unsee. Our hero looks a lot tougher with his new equipment. I probably like his old mask better as it's not painted and shows every detail of the helmet, then again the new one looks less innocent which matches his character.

I have the feeling that just hiding the Avohkii somewhere only Thode knows isn't such a good idea. But we'll see.

With all the develpment Jekkai went through, he still catches up with his Matoran friends. It's great to see this, as a transformation to a Toa can seperate them from their former friends.

It's a great setup for the clash of the now prepared warriors that's about to happen. I have no clue on who will survive this and who will not, so I'm excited to see what's about to happen next! -- 18:08, January 26, 2015 (UTC)