User blog comment:Chalk33/August 2013 Update 2/@comment-5174759-20130830162824/@comment-11429692-20130830163833

I'm planning on having a friend of mine review my chapter before I post them is why I haven't put it up yet.

The story takes place a little while after the death of Teridax. They are on Sphereus Magna although I'm not entirely sure of the exact location. I almost chose Matoro instead of Jaller but I remembered you already used Matoro. Jaller would easily be my 2nd choice anyway. I don't have a Mata Turaga yet so what do you think of changing Solek to Kopaka? I was planning on adding the one of them and changing Solek to Kopaka would be easy. Plus I really like Kopaka :P.

Good idea. A banner would look nice. Maybe Narra holding someones head.....

The Matoran is actually female :P. I pretty much just ignore the element gender restrictions. Do you think I should clean the silver off the mask so it's pure red? It is possible to clean sharpie right?