User talk:Toa Roden


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Hey, welcome Roden
Hey, welcome Roden! I don`t know why no one has actually welcomed you, it is always fun to do. Badly enough, I often can`t make time for it. Yet, when i have time, I always try doing it. You can, at this moment, imagine me as a nice guy of fair age, who sounds excited at this moment. (and a leetle bit hyperactive...)

Well, I see you did already learned the ropes, you probs also met Slice and the gang once or twice, I don`t know. At least, you know how it works. And, when I revise your story, I can see you are pretty talented. You would maybe have the skills to equal Varkanax or our mighty Slice, or our resident Bond, and these are all names you would not recognize as of now, but is you read TEG, DR and TFC, you would know enough. Yet, after basically (not very precisely) reading your story The Ways Entwine, I could not find any fight scenes. Your style highly grows on me, and when I missed it, please tell me, I was quite rushed. If there isn`t include any, I would like seeing one soon.

Well, seeing I told about everything a newbie to only this wiki should know in the beginning, I would close this message. VNT ~ Talk to me! Zwardmorder is epic! 16:06, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you give me little piece of battlewriting from your hand? PLZ?

I seriously am liking your writing, I feel like I have to read it when I get in a good mood. Try read one of my most recent ones, Deep Sea Ambush. It is part of a huge setup of short stories, that one was the first, yet I currently am working on a piece of excellent work seeing my style. I turn somewhat different way with it, and I`ll see how it`ll turn out. VNT ~ Talk to me! Zwardmorder is epic! 19:09, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome to the wiki! Hope you enjoy your stay! ~Jman  98 ~ 03:00, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wellcome to CB. Collector1

The tournament will go on. Be assured that a closed blog won't stop me from continuing the fights. Oh, your opponent has been changed to Heehvan.

 The  Copycat   MOCcist  Crib to coffin 01:31, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! I really appreciate it!

 The  Copycat   MOCcist  Crib to coffin 01:43, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I could use him. Sli cer   Out  23:54, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Roden. :3 -- That Devil  Guy (Bionicle MOC Battle Wiki) 06:04, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Exactly. I see forward to read your entry. VNT ~ Talk to me! Zwardmorder is epic! 14:34, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Here's a page (currentlt unofficial name) that I made for it, containing all the summaries from begining to end.  Jare roden  97   14:50, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

We're doing a sequel to the RP right now... Shadowmaster 01:11, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the main plot of your chapter is really great, but I'm going to add details. Not anything big, but I;m just going to add stuff like "lush plants and tall trees covered the area." Little stuff like that.

Re:
Thanks, the award you made was extremely epic. I'm glad you consider TEG to be an excellent story. (If you have time, could you review here)? Also, I'd like to take the time to say hello. Apart from a few minutes on the IRC and a few interactions on blogs, I don't think we've properly met, though I know you're active on other WikiMetru sites as well.

BTW, have you read the sequel, TSC? I'm still working on a short story that takes place between the two, Into the Darkness (Varkanax39), before I continue, but I've already written three chapters... Vark anax  39  23:10, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

We are doing another RP.... Shadowmaster 01:58, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

No, you just have a better chance of winning if you do. Vark anax  39  18:27, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Her's a page we made, telling everything that we did yesterday. LINKAGE. Also, we're gonna' continue in a little bit. Wanna' join in?  Jare roden  97   19:51, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want to do a one-on-one RP battle on Mibbit? Shadowmaster 01:26, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, wanna join an RP on mibbit--Evilkitteh 02:55, March 27, 2011 (UTC) Hey Roden. Would you like to continue the RP, Deadly Alliances? Jareroden97 is on Mibbit with me with now. We're currently waiting for Shadowmaster, but we may start without him.Linkage!

Crib.To.Coffin 01:09, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

TEG
None of those are in any way relevant to the content. I suggest you put your award on Varkanax's page instead. Sli cer   Out  03:04, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

In 23 1/2 hours... Sli cer   Out  01:46, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Greetings
Hello Roden, I don't think we've ever formally spoken Typed before and I wanted to introduce myself. Also after reading your blog about law of the jungle I began reading it and while I am only on part one I have found it enjoyable. well any way see ya. Bio  Gecko

Roden
TW~ Hey, I posted my Roden image in my first blog post.

TDS
Hey, Roden, you can edit TDS again. Just edit the same chapter, okay?--Bye y'all... I mean, you all 20:17, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, Roden. Come to Mibbit, we're chatting and we need some people. Shadowmaster 00:34, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

TDS
Sorry about the wait |:)

I meant to add to chapter nine.--Bye y'all... I mean, you all 19:18, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Pain...agony...my hatred burns 21:32, April 14, 2011 (UTC)Hey ToaRoden I got your message and I would love to enter the contest, but sadly I don't know if I have enough peices to make the moc. If I do somehow come up with the parts I decide to enter I'll let you know thanks for the offer.

Pain...agony...my hatred burns 04:00, April 15, 2011 (UTC)Hey Toa Roden, as I said in my last message I was not able to make a moc for the Tritax contest, but thankfully I fell into some peices and was able to make a Skrall heres the pic.

Hope he works.

Pain...agony...my hatred burns 05:54, April 16, 2011 (UTC)Hey ToaRoden, I just wanted to know when you will be closing the Tritax contest? I don't mean to sound impateint and im not expecting my moc to win infact in a way I kind of hope I don't that way I can take apart the moc so I can use the parts...heck I may do that eitherway...anyways it's just you've had the conest open for a long time and just wanted to know when you will end it?

Pain...agony...my hatred burns 17:36, April 16, 2011 (UTC)Hey Toa Roden, I got your message and I wasn't to sure what you meant about "better picture" so I took one of him in an action poze. If this one dosen't work tell me what you would like to see and I'll try my hardest to make it happen. Here's the pic:

Above. Sli cer   Out  21:38, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

TDC Member template
I could give it a border myself, but I have not got around to updating it. Go ahead and add one, if I like it, you'll be notified and given credit. If not, I'll probably adjust it and still give you credit anyways. :) By the way:

Accept the invite? :D -- That Devil  Guy (Skulpedia) 03:22, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

TDC Stuff
Wow. Thank you. There's three more templates you could change. I'd like the same as the member template,but with the test that's on there. Ask what font is on the logo, as he made it. And don't change any coding on the club page or main page. :) And I saw what you did to the member list. -- That Devil  Guy (Skulpedia) 22:57, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you for updating the stuff! I'll give you credit on the club page and on the main page.

Hey, Toa Roden, I made a drawing of your Roden MOC for you.

WELL? Do you like it? Nuju of Ice 14:14, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I really don't think I should have to say this, but we do not delete pages just because they are poorly-written. If they are poorly-written, then you revise them. You do not delete them unless they are too short to provide any relevant information. Sli cer   Out  00:39, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll see if I can enter.  Jare roden  97   17:59, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

How do ya doit?
Hey Toa Roden, how do you make a custom signature thing? Oh! And did you see my cool quotes fron Lukaraan?

I'll post more and from different dudes and creepies! Thanks for thehelp and stuff you're giving me! Piraka king 17:29, April 27, 2011 (UTC)Piraka king.

Oh. And the signature button isreallyconfuseing me: On the talk page, it has that thing that says use signature button, and its kind of confuseing and annoying because I keep on clicking it. Piraka king 17:29, April 27, 2011 (UTC)Piraka king

The skin may not be up to par because you can't see it all yet. If you're still seeing the Metru Nui pic as the background, you should clear your cache. Sli cer   Out  00:22, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. There seems to be trouble with the file. It'll remain at the old version for a little while, so we'll just have to deal with it as it is. Sli cer   Out  00:30, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

RPG
Do it on the Wiki Metru Forums, please. Sli cer   Out  22:07, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I really don't think RPing on here would do much. While it is Slice's decision, I disagree with RPing on here. It would get extremely messy and end with a page, half good grammar, half terrible. Shadowmaster 00:02, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Then it would make a good initiative for people to come to WMF. The fact is, this site isn't for roleplaying. Sli cer   Out  01:18, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Then RP on the IRC chat. CBW is not for roleplaying. Shadowmaster 02:08, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't you wanna make a WMF account?--66.90.252.14 02:21, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

The Dark Side
Can you give an over view of the story? I won't mess around with stuff you'ar gonna put in. Collector1

I like the green better, but ask him if he can change the middle of the page to another color. I don't like white.

Uh, my chapter is about Benjarmin. I'll update when I have time. Collector1

Re:Tritax Contest
Thank you, I am flattered! :D Yes, I will definately try to enter but my schedule's a bit messed up at the moment. I have exams until the 27th but I'll try and throw something together tomorrow. :P Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!

Why thank you! :D I'm in the proccess of writing the third chapter now. (In other words it's going to be a long night of writing :P) Have you checked out Whispers in the Dark too? They both take place at around the same time. Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!

Go to the Duncannuva Wiki NOW. You need to see what's happening. Bat erra  12  02

I just sent Sannse a message on TBW; I just wanted to inform you. Luckily, Kopeke and I are working on tracking Tuma's IP. Mata Nui seems to think this could wind up in court, considering Tuma's been sending Kopeke death threats. Bat erra  12  02

Hey, do you think you could spread the word on TBW that I'm not going to be active there any longer? And perhaps tell DaNASCAT he's caused the loss of a community member? I guess silly me just didn't seem to understand that death threats are nothing to be taken seriously... oh well. Please pass on the message.



Plz Join! Talk 01:57, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Now that ITD's done, could you post a review on the talk page?



Could you do the ITD review now? (Sorry if I'm bothering you about it).



OK, that's fine. BTW, have you read TSC? It's the real sequal to TEG, and Fairon returns as one of the three protagonists.



I really didn't have much time, so I slopped together a really quick design for Tritax.

But I guess it's fine, as I have no hopes of winning anyway. I didn't even put lime on the legs, which I totally reused from Ultimatrum.

You see, my original design had no legs. I'll tell you what I mean later.

 1999bug  [[User Talk:1999bug|  Talk  ]][[Special:Editcount/1999bug|  Edits! ]] 02:39, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Here's this one too. Hope you like it even though I think it sucks stinks. No it doesn't suck. That would be akward. Besides, the torso isn't that bad.

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Here's mine. :) -

M.T. "When you see the Darkness within, look to the light for guidance, and you shall be free!" 19:14, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re:
Thanks for the review! I do realize it was slightly rushed, but I was anxious to begin TSC. And sure, I'll do a review for your stories! Which one do you want me to review?

moc
I'll try and find some time. No promises though.



-- Ids  5621  16:01, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm afraid I had completely forgotten about that... Dang... I'll see what I can put together this weekend, and I'll make sure it's at the top of my to do list. Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!

is it too late to enter
here he is i guess i posted him on a blog of mine a couple of days ago

but i still havent used him in my story and i dont know if i will, so yeah

there ya go cropped em' up

Sorry I took so long to upload these. I'm afraid I didn't have the time to create a custom MOC this weekend, so I just ended up sticking a Stronius head on Terminator. Still, I think the end result looks decent enough.

Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!

At least winning? XD Sounds good, although I'm liking a lot of the other entries. Have you seen Cobarox and Mudro? (Two of my most recent MOCs which I'm quite proud of.) Matoro  1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!

Ah, that would make more sense. :D I know, I tried doing a MOC contest once. I left it open for about three months and I didn't get a single entry. D: Of course, that was back when I had only just joined. Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium!

RE:
Well, it's a Halo based joke. But it means that, if you find out my location, you could possibly be imprisoned for life. It also uses the USERNAME template. The Halo part is because it's based on a line from the book, Ghosts of Onyx.

--Sincerely, Cprl. Echo 1   High Resolution,   Poor Quality  17:53, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

It happened to me on Halo Fanon once. They would put the USERNAME template with "is the cancer of Halo Fanon" at the end. They had me going for a month until I was helping a friend set up a profile. --Sincerely, Cprl. Echo 1   High Resolution,   Poor Quality  19:10, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Combat forms
Absolutely. KHA AAA  AN!  19:00, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I've already said Baterra can write Ch. 11.. maybe you can write Ch. 12, or ask Bat to let you do Ch. 11.-- Bionicle Kid  14:49, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Okie dokie then.-- Bionicle Kid  14:55, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll make sure not to write anything that group then. Bat erra  12  02

Edit Conflict
Hey, perhaps you didn't know, but I was editing The Dark Side while you were adding two little ='s to the chapter heading. Don't you think maybe it would have been just a LITTLE more important for me to finish the battle between ELT, Millennium, and Sarkanian? Sorry if I seem ticked off, but I guess I am, considering I just lost about a page worth of writing that I hadn't saved. Bat erra  12  02

It's OK, you don't have to do anything in return. I'm sorry for the angry message by the way. Me, Speewaa48, and my parents were in the hospital with my great-grandmother; I writing on my laptop from the waiting room, and I was under a lot of stress. Thanks for the offer, though. Bat erra  12  02

Invited
&mdash; Jamn  liciousness  10:03, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry, CB's gonna do that one, but you can do the kickoff chapter of Part 3. That's Chapter thirteen.

BTW, have you read the An Age of War prologue? Do you like it? Give a review on the talk page, please! Bionicle Kid  (blog) 00:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. I feel like I have been improving somewhat.

Oh, and I think it would be best if you put the link to your talk page in the second part of your signature. Most people do that, and it will prevent others from losing their way to your talk. Bionicle Kid  (blog) 01:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for taking the time to write the review! I really enjoy gaining both positive and critical feedback. You sell yourself short, though, that was an excellently written review! Thank you for reading it, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

And I will review Rain and The Ways Entwine, but I've been very busy recently with TSC's sequel, The Darkest Light. I'll get to them as soon as I can. <font color=#FF4F00>Vark anax  39  15:41, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I died, but I came back to life...
I have returned from the realm of nonexistence with many thoughts, memories, and improvemrnts. I will shortly continue to write the Piraka Empire: Kuulanahk Story.

Also, I will have no more useless chatter anymore. I also thought a little about a lot of other topics and I am glad to be back on the "still alive" list. Piraka king 18:30, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome back!
Would you like to join the NRC? You have excellent reviewing talent, and I need more people to help me with the reviews. (I have about 16 reviews to do at the moment).

Oh, and I've finished TDL. Have you read it? if so, what do you think? <font color=#FF4F00>Vark anax  39  15:06, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. And the NRC reviewing isn't much different from a standard review (Only Slice's standards are quite a bit stricter, see the NRC page). Anyway, glad to hear you're enjoying TDL! <font color=#FF4F00>Vark anax  39  18:03, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's a very good idea, and I'll certainly help, though I may not be able to do updates as regularly as I'd like to (as I'm quite busy at the moment). But I think it's a very good idea, provided BionicleKid says yes, and you should ask him. <font color=#FF4F00>Vark anax  39  00:54, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so you'll be working on ''Shadowfell. ''Thanks for deciding to work on this project. Just one question, though: do you have an email address that I can send the plans to? Or should I send them using wikia? <font color=#FF4F00>Vark anax  39  17:12, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sure, I'd love that! Thanks! I'll formulate the outline as soon as I can! Bionicle Kid  ( Blog 19:10, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Please vote here! Bionicle Kid  ( Blog 01:13, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Rain
Okay, I gave Rain an offical NRC review. I will do The Ways Entwine and Law of the Jungle as well (I believe they're both on the waiting list) when I get to them on the list.

And, if you have the time, could you review TDL? <font color=#FF4F00>Vark anax  39  00:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Slice has taken all my stories to do NRC reviews for already. It should be your official review. And I like the Protosteel Saga better, but that's just my opinion. <font color=#FF4F00>Vark anax  39  00:21, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. I actually would have given it an A-, but Slice's reviewing standards are quite strict... <font color=#FF4F00>Vark anax  39  23:23, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Do you still plan on doing the TDL review before you leave tomorrow? (I know you're busy, and I'm sorry I'm bothering you, but I'd like to know). <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Varkanax    Talk    <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;">17:08,10/7/2011

Another excellent review. And yes, I can see why TDL and Shattering flow together, they're very related, and a lot of the plot threads introduced in TDL (such as the Silver and Dust subplot and Valkyria's treachery) are continued in ''Shattering. ''Anyway, excellently done (you're one of the best reviewers on this site) and very well-thought out review. Thanks for taking the time to review it.

And I will get working on the NRC reviews as soon as I can (I'm still reading Dark Origins. My apologies for making you wait this long. <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Varkanax    Talk    <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;">23:40,10/14/2011

How do you like A Toa? BionicleKid

Thank you for giving me permission to use the Mud Vipers! I certainly can find a way to fit them into the XMS storyline. Also, I have a definite plan for the roles of Roden and Keelara, and I can confirm that they'll both appear in the penultimate XMS story, ''The Final Prophecy. As for the others, they'll probably appear in either Shattering or The Final Prophecy. ''

Regarding the Shadowfell outline, my apologies for not having sent the plans to you sooner, I've been busy recently. I hope to get the plans out to the authors this weekend. And I'm glad you're enjoying Shattering so far, and thanks for the compliment! <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Varkanax    Talk    <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;">21:42,10/18/2011

Re: NRC
I've almost finished Dark Origins,  and will be reviewing it. Right now, all of the others (Except my stories and The Ways Entwine, which I'm doing) are open at the moment, just let me know which one you want to do. <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Varkanax    Talk    <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;">18:15,10/25/2011

Okay, sounds good. <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Varkanax    Talk    <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;">17:41,10/28/2011

Yeah, I'm going to re-write a few parts, and I think the story will be too short to be put in chapter format, so I'm working on that.

I'm not very active online at the moment due to the fact that I am extremely active in real life. My best friend is having major girl trouble and I'm really involved with the world.

I haven't read Rain yet. I haven't given CB the go ahaid yet. I'll probably not be editing much. Bionicle Kid  (Stories| Characters) 06:24, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, sorry about the coding for the Awesome Story award, thanks for fixing it for me. <span style="border: 2px solid lightgrey; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:lightgray; background-color:gray; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Combat   <span style="padding-left:2px; color:lightgray; background-color:gray; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Robotic     Prototype   <span style="border: 2px solid lightgray; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:lightgray; background-color:gray; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"> 11    02:48, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'm glad you responded, you're the first. :/ Anyways, a few chapters is great. Yeah, I had actually forgotten about this, but I'm glad you reminded me. I need to ask the others, again. :P Well, I'll let you know when we're going to get strarted, but that might not be for a little while, though. Thanks! - θι  Mαδ   Hε  δερ  11:07, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Plans for Shadowfell
Okay, here are the story plans for Shadowfell, as promised. Apologies for the delays. I know you've read the entire XMS to date, and that you're familiar with such concepts such as the Fall of Arcaea, so I haven't gone into detail on that. If you have any questions or plot change ideas, feel free to message about it.

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Glad you liked the plot! And yes, cut/paste the plans to a word document, or to another location where they cannot be read by anyone else. And regarding the Veythari, I have to sign off now, but I'll send you a detailed description of their culture, traits, etc. as soon as I can. <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Varkanax    Talk    <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;">00:49,11/23/2011

NRC Review
Thanks. That's the first time someone has said something more than "lack of description". :) Oh, AND YOU SEEM TO HAVE READ MY MIND. Srsly. You said something that has not been hinted or spoken about on CBW. Anyways, thankyou for the review. I agree - it was a greatly rushed. Partially because I want it to be a short story, but it's just got far too much going on in it. Do you have any ideas that won't increase it into a far larger blur of text? Thanks in advance.
 * P.S. Did you see my request on TBW?
 * --http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110823111447/custombionicle/images/4/43/TDG.gif ( Talk ) 06:45, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Shattering review
Hello Toa Roden, I was wondering, could your planned review of Shattering be the NRC review? As you probably know, TheSlicer, who had previously claimed to be able to review all of my storyline, has confirmed he's left the wiki for good, and will not be able to do the reviews, and you're a just as good a reviewer. <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Varkanax    Talk    <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;">18:23,12/14/2011

If it would be faster to simply do a normal review rather than an NRC one, then by all means, go ahead. You're alreday being very kind doing the review at all, and I don't want to make extra trouble for you. But it's totally fine either way. <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Varkanax    Talk    <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;">18:30,12/14/2011

If you know Thebioniclelegend he has a couple of shadow krata<font color="#990099">GREAT GLOVE SAVE! BY IVJUB! 02:34, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Veythari Traits (for Shadowfell)
Regarding the Veythari's physical appearance, this is a good picture of one of my Veythari MOCs, though most Veythari tend to use scimitars or longbows rather than scythes.

If you need any information, just ask. :) <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Varkanax    Talk    <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;">23:57,1/2/2012

Re:

 * 1) Essentially so, yeah.
 * 2) The Rahkshi-style helmet is fairly common, though it's usually not silver but steel-gray. Same with armor color, which is not always green and silver, usually just gray (though for commander's it's silver as well).
 * 3) Yes! Good idea.
 * 4) Thanks for letting me know you read the posts, and glad you're enjoying TFP. :) <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:3ex;"><span style="padding-left:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-left-radius:1ex; border-bottom-left-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topleft:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:4ex;">Varkanax    Talk    <span style="border: 2px solid black; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;"><span style="padding-right:2px; color:white; background-color:darkred; border-top-right-radius:1ex; border-bottom-right-radius:1ex; -moz-border-radius-topright:1ex; -moz-border-radius-bottomright:3ex;">21:26,1/7/2012

hey i was wondering if you can help me on my story serial/ (hopefully) novel? Toacervax 22:40, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

any writing tips or ideas you may have idk what exactly but i figured its wise to geta bit of help ^^' Toacervax 18:16, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

yeah 4 chaptersare up so far search "Reign of the Founders" you'l find it ^^'

Toacervax 22:10, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

ur askin me about my story?Sniperray213 22:50, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Wikify
Toa Roden,

I have a page (Toa Kewon) needs to be 'wikified,' but I don't know what that means. Could you help me? And if not, who should I go to? TW~ 17:22, January 17, 2012 (UTC)TW

Thanks, I think I get it now. TW~ 14:08, January 18, 2012 (UTC)TW

thanks
thanks for the feebdback and help ^^' much appreciatedand dont worry no offense was caused :) so, looks like ive got A LOT of wor ahead of me right? well good luck me!

oh and P.S yeah i'm new :)

Toacervax 00:49, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

More Shadowfell Info
17:13, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, sounds good. By the way, I have you read my announcement about the XMS Prequel Series? 17:17, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Rahara Entry
My entry for the Rahara MoC contest is here. Uninte... and Dragon Force Strike!!! 23:43, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Dang it, the link didn't work. try here.