User blog:Max the paranoid android/New story idea

Greetings and salutations, wonderful peoples of the world wide interwebs! Today, I come to CBW with a new idea for a story! But just to make sure it that it's a good idea, I have made this blog a story idea feedback blog! (Ripping off Vorred yayz) Anyways, this version of the bionicle universe has been forever altered due to the maniacal Makuta Dactylos's experments in the field of alchemy, or transmutation. While attempting to unlock the secrets of alchemy, Dactylos accidentally unleashed the so-called "alchemists curse", a metal eating bio virus created by the great beings to ensure that no one would ever "tamper in the gods domain". This plague has been unleashed on most of the public, turning them into walking, rotting corpses known only as the reavers. The select few beings who have managed to survive the infection must now fight for not only their own lives, but for the sake of freedom itself.

So, What do you think?

Feedback is greatly appreciated!

Peace out, homeslices! :P