User blog comment:LoganWoerner/LoganWoerner's April 2013 Update/@comment-1524575-20130420194348/@comment-2215631-20130420205246

Yeah. I tried to portray Erevayx as a Makuta, not just a tumor-covered psychopath who only uses poison powers. I tried incorporating Kraata powers other than poison, and I think it went well. I hope you use the fact that Erevayx is a Makuta to his advantage, and be varied with his powers. Makuta are so fun to write about, especially when you use every Kraata power in the book.

Yes, I also felt that Poisonous was a bit rushed in some places, especially the dialogue at the end. Erevayx's temporary defeat did seem a bit quick whenever I wrote it as well. I'm sorry about that. The purpose of Poisonous was to complete a story on CBW. The short story, even in my own opinion, is a bit rough around the edges, but I think it fulfils it's purpose.

Poisonous is not the begining of Niha's story, so you won't see the "next 'chapter'" until later. I'm going to write a story about Niha's training, and the sequel will be about what happens after Poisonous.

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you took the time to write one, because critique is something I crave.