User blog comment:Vorred/Elegy - Feedback Blog/@comment-5174759-20150111144935/@comment-7630469-20150111172742

Never pieced together that Berwak could've been a Toa Hagah, and that Lanudos was a good Makuta. But he's the Makuta of Balfe Nui, which means he had to protect it...Vorred, you're making us forget all of this canon stuff, about Toa Hagah protecting Makuta and Mauta protecting island with Range's awesomeness The end of the Therall shipping  Vorred (Self-MOC) not falling asleep anymore your smart plot twists and storyline.

Great chapter overall, can't wait to see what happens next. ;)