User blog comment:Ciaranhappy!/august update and a flagship series from ciaranhappy!/@comment-23174019-20140805180706/@comment-1221909-20140806084843

Improvement comes through constant practice and peer feedback.

I don't think anybody here has ever written a knockout story on their first or second attempt. Keep writing and you will improve; I think the first major hurdle for you is to really improve your grammar.

Also, "leftless" isn't a word. Did you mean lifeless? :P