User blog comment:Vorred/Elegy - Feedback Blog/@comment-11429692-20150114014235/@comment-5174759-20150122133156

Thanks for the feedback on every chapter! It's better to get it late than never :P

It's great to see how you felt about certain characters along the way. I guess you really liked Grentar's build?

The word fractures alone is always a a reference.

The scene you referred to wasn't inspired by the Narnia series, for I have never read it.

How does the overall story remind you of Skyrim? The stories don't really have anything in common from the way they are told or what happens in them, or did you just refer to the killing scene of that Forgotten Warrior?

I always liked the idea of a "good" Makuta, ever since the light version of Teridax was first introduced. It's just so cliché these days to have a bad evil monster Makuta overlord, so I made Lanudos very different from those, even though he can't fully be considered good!

No problem! I like making wonderful stories :P