User blog comment:TheSlicer/Triumphant Return!/@comment-1788742-20110321235650/@comment-1610819-20110322013302

Well, it's not really a full rewrite. I'm doing some modifications to most of the prologue and the end of the second chapter, throwing out the entire beginning of the fourth one (it was all a pile of infodump) and making some minor tweaks to the rest. So far, I've gotten through most of the first chapter, and it's improved.