User blog comment:FireDrag1091/Coldest Day Reviews/@comment-4787732-20131225223630/@comment-1524575-20131225231141

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the story; I put some considerable time and effort into this short story--especially with the given deadline of Christmas Day. It was a long story, but I am glad I was able of finishing it.

I'm glad that you liked how I potrayed Tiara as well--however, worry not, she is not dead. "Locus" did not kill her, she wasn't his target--if she was; she would be of course dead by now. ;)

However, if you want to use "Locus" in your own story to fight Tiara since she has a fowl-mood with him; go ahead. I'd like to see how two of the Deadliest Assassins in the Universe fight it out. And never rule out that Tiara came really close to killing Vantelic, she just needed to be more aware. ;)

I was kind of weary with Vantelic using the weapons, but it made sense to me because he no longer holds these morals in the story; and he supposed it was no longer a promise because Tiara killed Vadkii.

61/70 isn't bad, that is an A.

Thanks for the review, and you have a Merry Christmas as well! :D