User blog:SEDTheEditor/Paradise And Other Stuff

Heyo everyone! It's me SED! Well as of recently I've been working super hard on some new videos (not the Callan ones, those are good but I'm working even harder on other stuff). However, at this moment I can't tell ya'll anything about it. But I will say this.................it could be a new show for the Custom BIONICLE channel.................just saying..........could be ;).

Anyways, on to Paradise. For a long time now I've been wanting to write a story, nothing super big just a simple story. Whenever I come here to read stories and stuff, I always want to do one myself. Making the videos that I make don.t really leave any room for stories such as these. So I decided to start writing one in my off time. I will admit I am TERRIBLE at writing and grammar is probably one of the biggest school subjects I strugle with. Grammar, or Grammer? So I will admit that this story will have lots of errors and uses of words that shouldn't be used (see, If I used better grammar that last sentence could have sound a lot better). But anyways, the prologue was just put up today, so if ya'll don't mid take a look (link below the break). Please tell me all your complaints and comments, I need to get better at writing so criticism is helpful. Well thats all for today, see ya'll later!

Paradise
http://custombionicle.wikia.com/wiki/Paradise