User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130710011048/@comment-958607-20130710204118

Well, currently, each act has approximately ten miniature scenes in them. The first and second acts appear to be the longest because they have a number of different settings and scenes in them. The later acts, however, have fewer different scenarios in them, but are longer. Indeed, I am also following that plan with each act representing a different step in the climactic rise in tension. Whether or not Zero Hour will be a tragedy or a comedy, however, will be revealed soon. :P

Well, my storyline does have a wide variety of different characters, and the Cult of Darkness was (back in 2011) supposed to just be one villain from every species. :P Plus, the Fractures Universe was created in late 2010, so all of the species had been named and I was ready to use them once more. But don't beat yourself up about that. :P Your Undead creations are far more iconic than a bunch of Rahkshi, and the fact that most of them were Toa makes them even more unnerving. :D

Well, I probably like them because their Toa Nuva forms were some of my favorites last year. :P Range's color scheme totally revitalised my faith in the old sets, as did Merall's and Brorag's. But still, they do look like interesting characters even now and I especially like how Merall hasn't been made hyper feminine. :P I've only ever made one overly-feminine creation (Racasix) but that's because she is the MOC form of my girlfriend. Plus Brorag's stockly, hunched appearance is very true to his original Pohatu Nuva build. I think that they are both excellent creations and I cannot wait to see what the future holds for them. :D It'll be interesting to see them as the focus of a chapter.

I shall look forward to that next chapter with much anticipation and I can't wait to read this next blog. I'm really getting into your storyline at the moment. XD