User blog comment:BobTheDoctor27/September 2013 Update/@comment-5174759-20131006172446/@comment-5174759-20131007111156

Oh, you could describe my backyard as ancient if you consider nobody did anything there (except for lawn mowing) for about 2 years now :D But that's what makes a great setting. I only think that there should've been ruins somewhere...

That already sounds like a good idea for the book. I would add a navigation box to the top and bottom to give the feel that you can scroll through the pages. Maybe it would also look nice if you choose the character's profile pic and set it to a certain transparency and make it the page's background...

I understood part of it, it's quite hard to make out the crossed and blurred parts and I can't make out some words here and there... at least I got the most important magic water part right :D I'm imagining Tollubo just throwing every enslaved Matoran into the sea.

Now I remember Nixie, but just from the first game. YOu had to talk to her 2-3 times, right? And I don't know why somebody would implement a before-time feature, it sounds like a stupid easter egg to troll players!

An explanation comic is a good idea. You can never really tell building techniques or anything similar by writing it... that's why I failed understanding how Jahoan described it.