User blog comment:Chalk33/What the Turkey? November 2013 Update/@comment-4787732-20131121215417

I have to say, The Darkness Consumes is a pretty good story so far. Though Chapter 1 is kinda short. I would advice writing longer chapters. People like longer chapters, trust me, I know...Something like the size of my chapters of my newest story The Age of Chaos. But as I said it's pretty good so far and I would like to see how it develops further.