User blog comment:Windfall the wanderer/January Update and Art Blog/@comment-2026417-20160125034549

Figured I'd comment on the art since saying "the MOCs are amazing" is pretty much standard for your blogs. You keep managing to make interesting, colorful, and unique designs that work really well.

So, for the artwork, firstly I'd recommend that you purchase a sketchbook. Your style already shows you should be using something dedicated to artwork. That being said, for "doodling unprofessionally," these look really good. All the sketches have nice, smooth lines and are very expressive. The style in general seems like it would lend itself well to comics or animation.

However, some of it looks a little stiff or disproportionate. You should do some practice with posing to iron out problems, and there's also a lot of resources on sites like DeviantArt and YouTube that could give you some tips for working on this.

A few minor criticisms I have with the human artwork is that they suffer from that same stiffness, with their shoulders tucked ramrod straight next to their bodies and necks a little too straight. Relaxing their poses (and just having a wider space to work with) could definitely make these look a lot better.

But yeah, I definitely like the way your style transfers the MOCs into characters. It presents a great, stylized take on the pieces and turning them into actual armor. This could look really cool with some further practice.

Well, there's some criticisms and compliments on the art side of things. Hope it helps, and best of luck with your drawing endeavors. Keep up the good work!