User blog comment:Starscream7/The Conclusion of Lord Starscream, a Suprise, and an Announcement!/@comment-1610819-20110701135851

I have a couple of things to say about it that you should probably improve: Basically, what I'm trying to say is that it needs some work.
 * 1) It needs more stop-motion, 'cuz really, no one's going to want to watch what essentially amounts to a slideshow. (I know I said this already on YT, but I'm reposting this here so people can see it.)
 * 2) The special effects (i.e., water) kind of suck. Seriously, don't use Paint for this kind of thing. And no offense, but if you're incapable of making special effects for this one BIONiCLE movie, then it makes me doubt even more that you'll be able to do a whole movie in Blender. It's a rather unrealistic goal.
 * 3) The text is too big in some places, and it should probably go on the bottom of the screen. Maybe I'm a bit nitpicky, but still.
 * 4) The opening narration is long and not entirely necessary, and it also interferes with getting to the narrative.
 * 5) I like how you fit the music to the movie, though to be honest, it's a bit anticlimatic if I'm just seeing a series of pictures rather than a smoothly-flowing, continuous series of events.

On another note, considering that you changed the beginning of the story, would it still be possible for me to do The Last Barraki as I originally planned it? Or would it instead serve the role of an alternate beginning to the story?