User blog comment:Chicken Bond/PLEASE CRITIQUE: The Mentor's Way/@comment-4227112-20121120203920/@comment-1221909-20121120205305

The contest was originally to end on the 12th of November, but was then extended to the 26th of November. So you have a few days to enter.

Did you spot any particular problems with my entry? Was it a bit boring just to hear two guys chat for practically the entire story? XD