User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130911121005

Well... I suppose I should finally stop crying and post a review on Chapter 10. XD

Once again, it was nice to see Brorag being the guiding force of reason and logic at the beginning of this installment. :P Seeing him fighting alongside Range was actually quite cute. XD Two brother Toa, working together in order to achieve awesomeness. XD

What shocked me the most about the chapter was the apparent death of Merall. O.o You left it on a cliffhanger so I suspect that she will either already be dead or that she will die dramatically in the final installment. Then again, you might just pull a Vorred and have her get up, brush the dust off her armor and ask why everyone's looking at her. XD

Pirai's death was, again, nicely done. :P He was a real jerk but it was truly heartless of Merall to not save him. XD That scene really reminded me of Sidorak's death in Web of Shadows and, technically, this means that Merall indirectly killed him, giving her another victim in her killcount. :P

The death of Viretha was unfortunate as I was growing fond of the character. I much rather would've seen Jacobi die. Ah well... I guess now we'll just HAVE to have Chorrum show up to fill the gap in Aescela's life. XD

In particular, the battle between Tilira and Nuva was very effective, despite the darkness of the location. I was rooting for Nuva, myself and, I'm glad to see, he won. :D The destruction of their weapons was also nicely carried out but, Nuva's ultimate victory was all the more impressive. Nuva used dirty, survival tactics, while Tilira used the legitimate, frontal fighting moves, affording Nuva the victory.

The use of the Kanoka disc launcher was nicely done and was a great way to reference back to the nostalgic days of BIONICLE. :P Why aren't Kanoka discs used anymore?! XD They had tonnes of interesting applications that were never explored, even if the one that you used was a Regeneration Kanoka, the effects were spectacular and I can't wait to see how the Patriots recover from the striking destruction of their leader. It was deeply symbolic in a sense and you pulled it off extremely effectively as always. :P

In particular, I had two snapshots contending the position of being my favorite. The first was this one. Range and Brorag are working together as a team and Range looks really photogenic. :P Additionally, Merall is doing something badass just underneath that, which makes me like it even more. :D

My other favorite is this one. Not only does it include nice closeups of that wonderful Kanoka, but the build of that launcher is incredibly sleek and fitting. :D It looks like a genuinely effective creation in itself. Plus, that is the first time a Kanoka has been used to such an evil capacity and is certainly the first time a power-level 9 Kanoka has been used by anyone outside of Metru-Nui or anyone evil, which alludes to the existence of other Great Kanohi out there. :D Plus, the way you have Nuva holding it is very effective.