User talk:BobTheDoctor27/Archive3

Thanks for the praise! I'm glad to hear it from you, and comments like this motivate me to write more. &mdash; Bionicle  Kid  (Blog 15:45, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Hey there. Just sort've getting back to (a bit late, I must admit) to some of your feedback, specifically that regarding the Zyglak. Whilst I understand your criticisms (I really do; they are fair and make decent points), I'm struggling to imagine an alternative way around them. I mainly used the Zyglak's lack of plague as a plot device that would sort've allow me to have the Zyglak directly fight Sonitous (the reason why it didn't have its plague was kinda built around this plot device) though I wish to address your feedback because it presents a minor plot hole. The only problem is, I'm not sure how I could do it, considering how much physical violence was required in the story. I appreciate the rest of your feedback quite a lot (thanks by the way), though if you could help me through this particular problem, I'd be very grateful because I always like a second opinion. If you're too busy, I'm sure I'll be able to work around it eventually, so no pressure. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 12:35, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Brorag
Hey Bob, I saw you "created" the page for my character Brorag, what happened there? I'm pretty aware of writing that article, but the archive also leaves no mark of my edit. Was it deleted? 14:48, February 21, 2013 (UTC)

Hey there, saw you were on, and I'm going to leave my bimonthly message on your talk asking if you ever got around to reading my novels like you said you would. :P

Sorry, I'm just in a bit of an annoying mood right now XD. I assume the answer's most likely "no", because if real life's being half the pain for you as it is for me right now then you probably have next to no free time on your hands.

I should also take the time to say I'm still following your novels and I can't wait for ''Judgement Day. ''If you want at some point I'd be glad to do NRC reviews for your stories if you want. I'm in the process of restructering the club at the moment. 00:06, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Glad to see you've returned to full activity! Actually I was offering to write reviews of your stories for NRC, not the other way around. That said, I wholeheartedly will accept you into the club, like you said we need to encourage story-reading. I'd be honored to do NRC reviews for your stories too, if you want. Feel free to add yourself as a member on the club page. :)

And Into the Darkness, while a good starting point, is also arguably my worst written work in the series (having been done just about three years ago now). Still, it's great you'll read it over. You don't have to review it though-- unless you want to... 00:50, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Even your weakest writings weren't as bad as my weakest, trust me. :P Anyway, one good turn deserves another. I'll get those NRC reviews for your series up as soon as my workload evens out a little. Any personal preference to which stories you want reviewed, and in what order?

No problem, and thanks again for the offer. Even though ITD's quite poorly written, I hope it interests you enough to read the rest, at the very least. :P I hope to eventually review all of your stories, but I'll wait for the rewrite to do Ghosts and ''Over Your Shoulder. ''In the meantime I'll reread WiTD and Frozen Calling and get around to reviewing those two. :D

I'm already doing a chapter-by-chapter analysis of ITD on my own. Though I'm sure Varkie would like to hear all our input, what I'm trying to say is don't feel too obligated to review it; feeling obligated is my job.

Timmy ( talk ) 02:31, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Just thought you should know I made that slight revision to The Voyager. Hopefully that covers everything you mentioned. Also, I've been contemplating of changing Mersery's speciality as a scientist. At the moment, I have him written down as a chemist, but I don't seen that as a very practical specialisation for an Order of Mata Nui member and I can't think where chemistry may come in to play in the Matoran Universe. Do you think you could throw me a few suggestions of what he could specialise in? http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 11:38, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Erm...why are you changing the wording of ITD's prologue? Not that it doesn't sound better, but I'm just curious. Varkanax    Talk    20:30,2/24/2013

That's really awesome of you (I really have no other way of saying it), that you're going through and spell- and grammar checking it in addition to reviewing. Here I was expecting something like an NRC review and you give me a grammar-checked prologue. :D Absolutely in your debt.

Anyway, glad you liked it. The prologue sounds much better now, however, I'd prefer if in the future you didn't do any rewording or removal, barring grammar or spelling mistakes. It's not that the changes are bad by any means, I just don't really want my writing (no matter how bad it was back then) to be altered, sorry. If you find something that sounds awkward or you think should be removed you can mention it in your review or on my talk. As it is, though, I like the changes you made to the prologue, so I'll leave them in.

Also, can't wait for more Falling in the Black, and once again thanks. Varkanax    Talk    21:37,2/24/2013

Late Answer
Another Message by me.

I just looked at all my pages again and noticed that I never actually wrote the article for Brorag. He was the last character of the six main Toa group I still needed to do, and I somehow forgot it. The only thing I'll change on the article will be the small pic there, I want everybody to get a unique one :)

But many thanks for your help with that article! It's completely written and has no information missing. And about the rest of them: If you like to write with me, that's great! Some of them will have similar background, others not, but I can tell you which ones if you like. Your name will be mentioned in the trivia, or even the headline together with mine.

It's also nice to see both Brorag and Range are some of your favorite characters on the CBW! 19:01, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Well, how should you've known of Merall's gender? The Mata styled body doesn't tell you anything and the mask is also pretty neutral. However, since Range is already male I thought it was pretty clear I kept all the characters the same gender as their look-alikes :)

I have such a great idea for a new armor design that would match Merall perfectly. Let's see if she survives Chapter 2 or if I have to put the idea to some other character ;) 20:09, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Hey there, sorry for the late reply. Whilst I like all your suggestions, many of them have been used in some way or another. Mersery did actually participate in the Time Slip, relocating a number of Matoean. However, from a scientific point of view, he couldn't really have participated, seeing as the memory-erasing was done by Mata Nui rather than the Order. And as for being a doctor, I already have him listed as being a competent physician (an idea I plucked from his counterpart in ' storyline). However, I wouldn't want to make him a fully-fledged doctor, as I don't think that's what Mersery would really focus in the scientific world and I, personally, feel that him as a doctor would be a really forced reference to my love of Doctor Who.

Apologies if I'm sounding blunt or appear to be disregarding your ideas. They're all quite good, but I guess it's just that they don't really fit my vision(?) of Mersery as a scientist. I'll try and think up of something. As for the research team, well... I already had a very big idea about that beforehand, but you'll just have to wait and find out what it is. :P http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 08:54, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

Again, the Toa-enhancing suggestion is part of the backstory. XD Since the storylines of myself and Scotttjt are semi-connected, it mentions on Mersery's page that he was part of the project that transformed Toa Hydros into what he is today. But the study of Energized Protodermis could still work. Like I said, I'll pay some thought to these ideas. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 11:31, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

Cameo
Hey Bob, do you have any favorite Matoran character? If so, I would like to offer you a very small cameo for Patriots, where you will see him/her in the prologue. If you like that suggestion, answer me as quickly as possible; I'm taking the first pictures very soon! 19:37, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Here you go!



I decided to use Danza; I basically needed to make a Metruan or a normal '03 Matoran for that purpose. I would've also liked to use the others, but I haven't got the mask of Lothorna, and like I said: Av-Matoran styled bodies don't match.

I'm very interested how you will like his Danza's small appearance in Patriots! The picture shows him next to Farside Village (some Trivia) ;) 19:52, March 6, 2013 (UTC)

Title Feature in Character Template
Hey, I dunno if you know about this, but you can have an alternate title in the Character infobox templates. Like, for the page Nalek (ThatDevilGuy). The Character infobox says "Nalek", yet the page in named "Nalek (ThatDevilGuy)". The coding is as follows: {{Character etc.
 * title = Title. "Nalek", for example.
 * header = Toa
 * -- [{{fullurl:User:ThatDevilGuy}} http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110823111447/custombionicle/images/4/43/TDG.gif] ( Talk ) 11:01, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

Hey there, sorry for the late reply. I don't think I had any plans for that Turaga of Stone; I primarily just created him to be Thode's 'employer' in Perspectives. I could use 'Slagjaw' as a character in the future, if the need arises, but for now, I don't think I'll need him. But do feel free to use him in some promotional shots if you want to take them. :D http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 21:05, March 25, 2013 (UTC)

Also, I didn't really touch on this, but I think some promo pictures would be great. I personally don't think the banner I made is too good, so any promo images that can brighten it up would be much appreciated. I intend to post the finished it very soon (hopefully today). http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 22:52, March 28, 2013 (UTC)

Well, I've published Perspectives. It's finally out online. I didn't proof-read it though, as I was eager to just post it. I've got Varkanax reading through it for mistakes, thankfully. XD http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 01:23, March 29, 2013 (UTC)

It's quite alright. I had fun writing it. :P

EDIT: I take it you're also anticipating Doctor Who, no? http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 01:50, March 29, 2013 (UTC)

Character Pages
Hey Bobby, seems you are quite active these times, aren't you :)

Well, as you may noticed, I wrote the article for my character Aescela. Since she and the other Matoran have a similar background, I would ask you if you want to write with me now (since you asked for it earlier).

On these pages, you can also be a bit creative regarding their specific backgrounds or jobs they had or the exact reason they came to Farside Village. If you don't want to, you can always just make a similar story to Aesclea's.

Tell me what you think! 23:14, March 29, 2013 (UTC)

Done. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 02:12, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

Many thanks for the article about Viretha! It's great you also put some information about her early life on Spherus Magna/Metru Nui, which works well together with the rest of the story. Nice integration of her Firearm :)

Only thing to complain is that you got her gender wrong; she is actually a female ;) But I understand why you hadn't known that, she is neither a Ga-Matoran nor has any details or build that show otherwise, so it's just a little thing to correct.

Otherwise, nice work on that article!

At last, about the "missing" page: I think Page_y10 doesn't even exist. Since I had to design a specific layout for the images of the comic, I always copied from the last page and later altered the file name, so it just happened that I typed in an additional page which doesn't even exist :) 14:01, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

I just wonder; who do think are females/males of my story? I think I just integrated 4 (Viretha, Aescela, Xafri and Merall) so that's sadly not very balanced... the reason for that is that I did that stupid stupid self-MoC sign-up on MOCpages. Since almost everybody there is male, I had a gigantic overflow of male characters, and I couldn't just go with making everybody of my characters to be female.

Really, I'm never doing sign-ups again. I mean, most of those people in the story don't even read the comic! Next time, I'll choose some MoCs of my readers and integrate those :I

Still, thanks for creating that article again :) 17:50, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, you are surely right on Vastara, Tilira and Falecía's genders, I though you talked about the females in Uprising :D

I hope that whole gender confusion won't appear in the last chapter, since I can design the bodies of them more than with the old designs.

And that you mention Jacobi... he's of course a self-MoC with the most ridiculous name I ever saw. Gonna change that.

And that sign-up when similar to yours, since everybody wanted to make just not an appearance, but a very important one.

And yes, I made Glonor, good you noticed him by now ;)

I just think the role I put Danza in was too little, since he just hasn't more then a minor statist role. Glonor will at least get a bit more attention. He is also one of your favorite characters, could that be?

And yes. Balfe Nui is the Island where everything takes place, including the location of Farside Village. 19:09, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58
Hey Bobby, I'm a new member of this wiki, and my trilogy is called the Damned desert Trilogy. I was wondering in the next story serial if I might be able to do some chapters in Tethys and include Tollubo and Jollun. I also want to maybe include Karabak in World of Hell, which I am writing, and include Lothorna and Jex in THIS IS BARA MAGNA. It's because there aren't so many characters left for me to make, and I need some crossover characters as well. So can I have permission to use them?

On the second thought, never mind. Still, u r AWESOMER THAN AWESOME!!!

Matoro58 Re: Characters
Thank you for your permission for a use of agori characters. I'd be happy to use Eselox and Lothorna. Probably in  Serbinius' blog, because I think it might be interesting for one of them to fight with Serbinius or Sahmad. Probably it would be because they insulted Thornox, a half-Zesk and half-agori, who likes eating dead stuff. I want to like include Santis in World of Hell, because you said he travels in alternate universes. Maybe also an alternate versaion of Juulant and Mudro. I hope those are enough and I gave a few good reasons why.

MATORO58

P.S. If I make an indirect reference of Tollubo through Santis if you O.K the characters I asked in this blog. And I need help to think of a fanon location in the damned desert universe.

Matoro58: Pouks
Hey bobby, can you read a page of mine. It's called Pouks. Tell me if I need to add a quote. I know about the no pictuters part because I don't know how to upload one.

Matoro 58: RE: Pouks
Thank you for telling me what the page is like. I recently uploaded pictures of him. And about Toa Santis, I'll include him probably in THIS IS BARA MAGNA and Eselox in Serbinius' blog. Now Juulant I'll include in World of Hell, probably in a Tajun chapter and Mudro in a Rocktus chapter.

Now I've got a favor for you and I'll hope you'll do it. I want you to do a story of Pouks in his matoran past. I'm asking you becuase I've read a few chapters of Over Your Shoulders and Whispers In the Dark and they are  AWESOMER THAN AWESOME!!!! So I hope you could do it, and thank you once again for giving me permission to use some Fractures and Deserts of Death characters. See ya bobby!

Matoro58: Juulant, Santis, and Mudro
Bobby, I will use Juulant in World of Hell in a fight which her vs. Kiina. Tell me what weapons to use so I could make a true apperance.

Also about Mudro, was he alive around 1,001 AGC? Because you didn't say when he died. And I mean which year. I'm just checking. Actually, maybe instead he can be kept alive? I think maybe he'll look like a bad*ss if he tries to kill  Serbinius. : ).

I think I know that Santis is able to be used immediatly. Because he doesn't have the weapons and cape from Falling in the Black. And I won't reveal anything unless if he was at Gaaki, Bomanga, and Kualus' universe. I would like to cange his mask. If he can aquire the Danju in the Damned desert alternate universe, somewhere underground, I'd be obliged.

So let me know what Juulant's weapons are, if I can have Mudro alive, and if Santis can have a lead role in THIS IS BARA MAGNA.

How do you keep toa santis's mask please post pictures or something.

Onu-matoran slave (talk) 13:51, April 9, 2013 (UTC)Onu-matoran slave

Matoro58: RE: Pouks story
Hey bobby, Matoro here. I was thinking, can we write the story together. I do the first part and you do the second part. Maybe they could be as long as a story serial both parts. That way, we could both contribute to a project I thought of. If you don't think it's good, then we could add some of your characters. Probably the matoran in Falling in the Black, because they originated from the same island. And maybe Tollubo could make a side appearance in Karzahni.

Hope your revamps are going good, and see ya.

MATORO58

P.S. You like Roodaka because you made Racasix out of her.

Just wanted to note that this picture of yours has a truly amazing effect. How exactly have you done it? Just by taking a picture when dumbing a big rock into the water? 15:12, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Oh man... I can't get over how awesome the effect with Jekkai jumping is! Seems that you can do a bunch of amazing effects with water!

And yes, I always follow your updates, and I like the new pictures of characters you upload :)

A big banner then, with Vorred's face on it saying that 50% of the comic is mine due to the inspiration? Nah :D

Just make a note somewhere. Would be cool! 15:32, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, those pictures I have already seen, even when I may never actually commented... seems I forgot. Those look very atmospheric and you can almost feel the adventure when you look at them :)

And I always wandered about if that mask was a reference or not. I came across the whole article for some times (it exists since some time, right?). Great you made that, it's cool to be a "part" of your story! 16:13, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: RE: Pouks story
It's okay. I'll write the story myself. Just give me a good one word title for it. Your titles r AWESOME, AWESOMEST, AWESOMER THAN THE AWESOMEST. I'm gonna need a matoran character other than Tollubo. You said I could use Lothorna. I'll take up that offer. She'll live on Pouks' home island like Pouks and Varian. And she'll get fixed. Like it?

MATORO58

P.S. Mudro has a drinking problem. .

Matoro58: RE: Degeneration
Thank you. The title will be the one above. ''Degeneration. ''You could make the "Fixed" version of Lothorna. I made a "fixed" version of Pouks, and it's bad. :P

Varian wasn't part of Norik's toa team. However, I read that Tollubo was on Voya Nui. So from Karzahni and on, he will be on Voya Nui.

Now, if I could use any of your matoran (I'm already using Lothorna) name them. And can I have Turaga Vilinus as the insane Turaga. The matoran can live on the Tren Krom Peninsula. Nihdiki will be in my story, and I was thinking of Lhikan being there, but he doesn't exsist in the damned desert universe.

MATORO58

P.S. How sane do you think Tollubo is, due to Chapter 1 of Whispers in the Dark.

MATORO58: RE: Degeneration
I think a blue painted 2008 Hau nuva sounds good, but I don't want it to be a Hau. If you could think of a fanon mask power, I'd be happy to use it. Can you think of another mask for the pre-fixed Pouks. The rode was given to him by Karzahni, and the Purai (Mask of Emulation) was given to him by Teridax. And if you could of a pre-fixed mask for Nihdiki, I'll be happy to use. : D

MATORO58

P.S. I don't have anything to say here

Matoro58: Degeneration cast
I'll use the mask of sensory apitude as Lothorna's Karzahni mask. And I've recently created a turaga who wears a Sanok, so that turaga will be the insane one. Now I'll show you the main characters for Degeneration. Like it? Tollubo will be introduced in Karzahni, but will be a main character. I'll also make a joke where he can't shake hands with anyone unless if they want to have holes in them. And can I have Tourik make a minor appearance. It's when he and his Toa team (Jovan's) arrive at Voya Nui (Southern continent). Jovan will sacrifice his powers so Nihdiki, Dalu, Varian, Pouks, Reysa, an a Ta-matoran called Alicaer become toa, so he'll become a turaga. I've already made a turaga version of him as well.
 * Pouks
 * Nihdiki
 * Dume
 * Krakua
 * Lothorna
 * Varian
 * Kazi
 * Tollubo

MATORO58

Matoro58: RE: Tourik
Don't worry. I'll make his appearance so brief, the reader won't notice. I also need to ask permission for usage of marriage. But in this universe, female matoran are able to give birth ("Who in their right mind would do that?"-Tollubo). I'm also asking for permission of beer drinking (I want the turaga to go insane by getting drunk).

MATORO58

P.S. The turaga will be a turaga of stone.

Zero Hour banner
So I created a banner for the upcoming "Zero Hour". Just wanted come by to hear what you think, in case I should change something. Well... here it is.



Matoro58: Turaga Hewkii
Now, the matoran will produce, not reproduce, more matoran. They'll just be dead souls from the red star that lost their memory.

Now since the Turaga wears a sanok and is a turaga of stone, I basically decide to use Hewkii. He switched places with the turaga. I decided Hewkii to be the first turaga.

MATORO58

P.S. Click the link here to go to Degeneration

Matoro58: World of Hell
Bobby, Matoro58 here. Could you doo me a favor and read Chapter 14 of World of Hell. I just finished it and I think it's epic.

Matoro58: RE: World of Hell
Okay, I'll fill you in about the deal about World of Hell and the Damned desert universe. In the Damned desert universe, Helryx uleashed a water nova blast during the events of that universe's Dwellers in the Darkness. The Toa Hagah, Axonn, and Keetongu escaped while Zaktan, Brutaka, Helryx, Miserix, and Mata Nui die. You see, at the last moment, Teridax, switched minds again with Mata Nui.

The deal about Jiirka, is that, well, during her imprisonment, she was asleep. Part of her was able to influence The remaing Order of Mata Nui members to send Sidorak, Vezok, Radiak, and the Toa Magna to Bara Magna. She also influenced Vezon, as she said, to bring Nektann with him. They were both influenced by her. She also influenced the Sisters of the Skrall and the Skrall to help Vezon and Nektann. Before the Toa Magna and their allies arrived at Rocktus, she revealed her presence to Vezon and Nektann. Plus, she's more evil than Teridax. Instead of taking over, she wants to destroy. Plus, an evil villian in most stories and books I've read reveal their plans because they think they're unstoppable. Same deal with Jiirka, but she wanted the Toa Magna's blood to fuel her to her true form. She's the main antagonist of the series, and evil than any villian of Bionicle combined with the other villians in Bionicle. Certavus stopped her the first time, and I'm currently planning a story about that. She doesn't care about the sunlight or the air. She just wants to see it all destroyed.

If you don't get what I said in the first paragraph, it's easier to read the chapters before chapter 14 of World of Hell.

MATORO58

Zero Hour
Hey, so I decided to go ahead and try to make my own attempt for Zero Hour's images.

Cheers. &mdash; I'm a  Koala  05:24, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

No problem! If you ever need a banner for a story or whatever, just leave me a message! &mdash; I'm a  Koala  21:06, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

New Message :I
Hey Bobby, I've read the message you send me, and I don't think I truly understand. Matoro58 is upset by me not making a new headline? All that talk was never meant, I actually only wanted to note that I liked your picture and saw no reason to make an extra heading for that.

"Hey Vorred, I'm Matoro58. I here to complain because you wrote in one of my messages to BobTheDocter27. It's like spam what you did. Not that I'm complaining or stuff."

Sorry, but I think there is somebody here who misses a definition.

I now sadly have a bad impression of a user I don't even know, because he simply accuses me of something that he calls "spam" which casts a damning light on me.

Oh, and if you like, here is a pic I made today when I was outside taking some photos:



AW SO SAD

Until then! 19:56, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not going to hate Matoro58 now, don't be afraid :D

I never really thought of it before, but of course Aescela isn't able to fight after she lost her leg when Farside Village was attacked.

If you want to make her a friend, be sure to remove some limbs so they're both injured and can lament about that the whole day while the others save the world :P 13:34, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

That would be fun :P

If you make a character, be sure to don't make his arms disassembled in combat, otherwise pen-paling would be quite difficult... unless he writes with his feet :D 20:42, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Yo
Hi BobTheDoctor27,

I've been on CBW for years...but I, for whatever reason, don't think I've introduced myself. Anyways, just stopped by to say hello. -- Kopaka mata97  Has Arrived 03:36, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Oh! Great to see you again, man! LOL. Anyways, want to collab on a story some day? -- Kopaka mata97  Has Arrived 19:12, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Sure thing! I'm planning on a short story called Seventh Divide. It's going to be a prequel to The Silence of the End. Up to it? -- Kopaka mata97  Has Arrived 19:30, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Alright! Sounds like a plan! -- Kopaka mata97  Has Arrived 23:38, April 24, 2013 (UTC) PS. Check out MoC contest - User blog:Kopakamata97/Predaria MoC Contest 1 -- Kopaka  mata97  Has Arrived 23:38, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Co-writing request
Hey there BTD! I was actually wondering if you would be interested in co-writing 'The Hagahs' with me. It's about a group of Toa/Glatorian mercenaries that fight for justice in the world. (if you want to co-write the novel with me, I will give you more info). I'm going to include myself as a character called Firey Star and I have a question. Do you give me permission to use you as a character? You will be called BTD.

Well hope you reply soon and take care!

Firestar. Fire Alone Can Save Our Clan...  18:37, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: RE: Jollun
Okay, got the deal about your brother. I also want to tell you I joined the Custom Bionicle Reviews Wiki, just for kicks. Now I can say how @#$%! and how AWESOME sets are.

A Proposition For You
Greetings, salutations, bonjour, etc.! If the title of my message hasn't intruiged you yet, then let's hope its content will. Following your lead,I have decided to perform a semi-reboot of my storyline. When I say semi, I mean I am only rebooting JoD and its sequels, rather than anything set beforehand like Punishment. The reason behind this is relievingly simple. When it comes to writing, it is clear I am better at short stories than longer ones. This is basically because I'm not so good at stretching my ideas out for such long periods of time. Effectively, I can plan the long game, but am not so good at actually playing it. This is noticeable in JoD through its infrequent lack of updates; I have dozens of ideas and plot points, but I don't know how to get to them. And that is basically what JoD is at this stage; just filler waiting to be justified by a key plot point.

Tha has resulted in me craving for a fresh start with no baggage, which is what I've decided to do. What this reboot is basically about is me being more organised with my storyline and planning it out more efficiently. This doesn't mean I intend to start from scratch. Most (if not all) of my current plans and ideas will be re-adapted in some way, but from a fresh, new perspective. Many of my plans were oncieved some time ago, and since many of my tastes as a writer have developed or changed, I wish to reevaluate them.

Now you are most likely wondering what all this has to do with you (and bravo if you've read this far). This is the interesting part. In this planned reboot, I would like to have two experienced writers to help me plan out my storyline and help me set it in a particular direction. They would help me develop my ideas and expand upon them whilst also suggesting their own. I've already got Varkanax on my side, but I was wondering if you would like to also step in as a writing consultant. You don't need to write anything for my storyline, simply be part of a creative team who provide feedback and ideas, so it should not make you too busy. If you don't want to join or simply don't have the time that is perfectly fine. But it would be great to have you aboard, as I plan a storyline of Moffat-level complexity. --http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 17:56, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Speaking of Moffat, what have you thought of the latest series of Doctor Who? Anyway, the choice is yours.

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Matoro58: Frozen Calling
Hey Bob, Matoro58. Now, I hae a question about the story serial Frozen Calling. Now, it says that you will not include any Main saga characters in it apart from Glonor. Howver, there is a picture showing Tollubo, Betak, and Tourik standing over "Gravition's" body. This confuses me, and I don't know if it's a rewrite, or if it's just for a different story serial.

MATORO58

Hello! Now that I am back with my computer (I've been operating off a touchscreen, which is noticeable in the last major message I sent to you), I shall be able to type as much as I want now. Thank you for that very positive feedback! I've forward it on to TH, since I think it's stuff he'd definitely like to read and take in. I'm glad you caught the whole Jekyll-Hyde aspect of Alxor's character, as that will prove to be a major part of his backstory and plot point further down the line. In regards to Mersery and Herkain, their relationship is going to be a very focal part of the story, especially during Act Two, which will begin with the invasion of Versuva. Whilst I understand your puzzlement on how Mersery and Alxor's paths will intertwine, you don't need to worry. All will be made clear in due time.

Also, in regards to your new role (rank?) as one of my story consultants, I'm wondering if it would be possible to discuss my storyline and my plans for it on the CBW/WMF chatroom on Mibbit whenever you have free time on the weekend. That way I can have a conversational discussion with both you and Varkanax at once and be able to avoid posting my ideas on talk pages here on CBW. If that doesn't quite work for you, I'm sure we can figure something else out. Anyway, time to make my announcement blog! http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 06:20, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Hey bob. im kinda new here but I got brught over by your aesome stories and really cool mocks. You re really awesome and I want to write good stories like yours. :L I think everything about the [fractures universe] is awesome and your characters really deep. I have lots of favorites of yours. I think [kyros] is funny and [tollubo] is best hero ever! I love frozen calling and I reaally cantMwait for zero our.

You re my idol and I think that you re awesome! Please don't ever leave because you bionicles are really special and all my friends at school are reading your story. :d

Bah, I don't think you really need to worry about creating an account. I never did. You just need to pick a username and join the chatroom. Speaking of which, is now a good time for you to join the chatroom so I can just start filling you in on some of my ideas? I'll just leave the chatroom link here if you'd like to enter. I promise DW talk as well. :P

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Matoro58: Tourik's guide to the Fractures Alternate Universe
Hey bobby, it's me Matoro58. So I read your March 2013 post, and yep. You were right. You'll be switching to Tollubo in the middle of the Frozen Calling. However, I noticed something at the end of it: Tourik's guide to the Fractures Alternate Universe, which I'm guessing is the story from Tourik's perspective. I like the title, because it sounds like Makuta's guide to the Matoran Universe.

However, you posted it on your stories list, and I clicked on it, but you haven't made the page yet. Also, you accidentally titled Before the Dawn's Infobox "Vendetta". So I have a question? When will you post Tourik's guide to the Fractures Alternate universe? I can't wait for it, and I guess some other people are waiting, too.

MATORO58

Matoro58: Blazrox
Hey Bobby, it's me Matoro. So I recently published another part of Degeneration, and I mentioned Makuta Blazrox but not by name. Is that okay with you?

MATORO58

Matoro58: Frozen calling Humor
Thanks for reading Degeration. I'm glad you told me it's going good. So anyways, I was readig Frozen Calling, and I noticed you were using Reidak as a prison guard, which was humorous, considoring his destructive nature.

Keep up the good work! :D

MATORO58

Matoro58: Story Serial
Hey bobby, Matoro here. Now, I need your advice on something. Now see, if you read one of my pages called Esnidar, you'll see that I didn't do a good job of making his past. I would just post his past on his page, but he's one of the Major-Bigtime characters in my stories. So I was thinking of doing a story serial for him, but I'm caught up with finishing "This is Bara Magna, Serbinius' blog, Degeneration, and Legends of Anarchy." Now I was thinking of deleting this is Bara Magna, because it's the weakest of all of them, but I still feel like I need to include Santis in a story.

However, if I delete This is Bara Magna, I will probably make Santis appear in Legends of Anarchy and The Last Stand, the Story Serial after LoA.

So tell me what I should do in order to make Esndar's story serial, and if I m allowed to have Santis included in Legends of Anarchy.

MATORO58

Would now be a better time to try that meet-up again? XD http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 09:12, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: RE: Story Serial
OK, about the Esnidar crime thing, the Order planned for him to be imprisoned forever, but they freed him just to give a second chance...not to drink up and waste himself. However, as I told you, I'd like to detail Esnidar's matoran past in a story that describes his violent nature, because he used to be part of the Toa Mangai, and they all came from different islands. In Esnidar's case, an island similar to Zakaz, except it smells better and there no Tahtorak, but lot's of Rahi and Conditions similar to Xia. Jiirka's the Makuta of the Island. At least, until she got defeated on Bara Magna. Then an unknown male Makuta got the island. The island is called Jara-Nui. Is that good for a story serial?

Now about Santis' mask, I think it would be better if he wore a mask of undeath, then in The Last Stand, trade it for a Danju.

I hope this works.

MATORO58

Ah, okay. Don't worry about it then. Also, the wait for The Name of the Doctor (even if its only broadcasted a day later for you guys in the UK) is murdering me! D: http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 22:04, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

MOFFAT!!! XD

But in all seriousness, I'm now really looking forward to it. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 23:00, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Well, DW in itself is rather implausible, so I should be able to let that slide. As for the ending (or the "moment of moments" as Matt Smith described it), I'm not surprised that it has a cliffhanger so unbearable. As a fan of Moffat's Sherlock, I know that any cliffhanger whipped up him will have excruciating an wait for a resolution. I'm primarily interested in knowing whether it lived up to Moffat's very bold claim of it changing the course of Who history. Still, I'm especially keen to see it now. From the BBC promo clips, Strax is as funny as ever. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 23:35, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: RE: Story Serial
Well, I'm planning an adult side to this story about Esnidar. Basically, this is to detail his life as a matoran, how he became a toa, and his revenge against the Makuta, who is giong to be called Girdis. I already made a Makuta MOC, so I think Girdis would be a good Makuta. Girdis is arrogant, power-hungry, deeply corrupt, more than insane, and hates The Plan. He was the Makuta responsible for killing all those Toa of Iron and Magnetism. He drove Karzahni insane, and caused the Great Disruption by disguising himself as a Po-Matoran and spreading a rumor that the Ta-Matoran were spreading their borders. He absolutely hates any Toa on Jovan's team (Yes, he hates Tourik), and any toa he hates more is Esnidar.

Anyways, I was thnking that Jara-Nui could be the home island of Thode's team, to describe Thode's violent nature, and also because I made a Toa of lightning that has a similar build to him.

MATORO58

Matoro58: RE: Story Serial
Well, the Toa of Lightning's page won't be made for some time. But until then, I'll try and make sure credit goes to you for Thode existing.

The deal is with Girdis, is that he was evil from the moment he was created. He kept killing off Matoran until Miserix condemned him to die at the hands of Teridax. But, as evil as he his, Teridax sent Girdis in hiding on Metru Nui as a Po-Matoran called Deik. However, he started the Matoran civil war on Metru Nui just for his own amusment. Then, when Teridax overthrew Miserix, Girdis came out of hiding, and to prove his loyalty, kill off the Makuta of Tren Krom's island. He kept killing Makuta, and was responsible for Jiirka being sent to Bara Magna. Then he plotted to kill Teridax on the Southern continent, but when Teridax found out, they battled, and Teridax left Girdis for the dead. However, a "fixed" Onu Matoran found him and nursed him back to health, and Girdis, seeing potential value in it, he turned the Onu-Matoran into a slave by putting antidermis in the Onu-Matoran's systems.

Now, when Girdis and the Onu-Matoran traveled to Jara-Nui, they transformed into Matoran as disguises. They met Esnidar, and Girdis thought that Esndar would make a valuable Pawn. However, Esnidar was captured with other other matoran by Skakdi Pirates.

So does the events in the third paragraph fit in a story? Let me know what you think of this.

MATORO58

Just saw the finale! Oh Moffat, that beautiful man! I'd personally say that's the best series finale I've seen in a long time! That cliffhanger! Absolutely loved it. SO MANY QUESTIONS! How will we survive until November!? I need answers! D: http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 11:36, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

The Paternoster Gang were great as well! :D http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 12:11, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

Hi
I just wanted to introduce myself. I am Ansem The Awesome. It is a pleasure to meet you.

Ansem the Awesome  Has Returned  13:34, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

OK, I didn't know Zaria killed one of the Makuta, but Girdis was exiled for killing OTHER Makuta. So Girdis was the Makuta responsible for killing all the Toa of Magnetism he was able to kill. He is the Most Dangerous Makuta (Used to be second most, but Jiirka left), has a really large weapon even I can't describe, and he's larger than Teridax. He's too evil to be evil, and any toa that confronted him has been absorbed into his body. Or did all of them? (Cue the dramatic music) :O.

MATORO58

Currently
Well, I'm working on a new story. Check my userpage and look for BIONICLE Legacy: Darkness Rises. It's gonna change soon (wanna think it through better) but you can get a look at my writing style. Also, you check out some of my other characters. I admire your building style by the way

Ansem the Awesome  Has Returned  14:20, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

I actually saw those when they were originally released. Let's face it, the three need their own spin-off show! http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 10:50, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

Knox
Hey BTD, I'm in need of an Agori trader for one of the opening scenes in my upcoming Story Serial Son of the Suns and was wondering if I could use your Jungle Agori Knox. As of now he'd only appear in a short scene or two, though he might get a larger role later on if I run out of names. Would this be ok with you? DeltaStriker  16:25, May 21, 2013 (UTC)

It's an alternate timeline, but does't share any settings with the Core BIONICLE Universe. DeltaStriker  16:59, May 21, 2013 (UTC)

K ;)

Btw, I enjoyed the end of Frozen Calling, though I was confused about one thing: if Algor's kneecap was shattered, how was he able to battle Garnax? DeltaStriker  20:37, May 21, 2013 (UTC)

BIONICLE Legacy
Hey, I just wanted to know if you would like to read what I have on my story, BIONICLE Legacy: Darkness Falls? I think I could use all the help I can get on creating the story.

Ansem the Awesome  Has Returned  00:53, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks
Im going through a story plot draft as well as a more detailed chapters. I wont be changing anything for a while. Ansem the Awesome  Has Returned  02:38, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: Frozen Calling
Hey bobby, it's me, Matoro58. I'd just let you know that the end of Frozen Calling was great, but still, there are some stuff I need to tell you.

I was one of the People who wanted Glacii to become a Toa. It would have been interesting, and it would've beefed up J-Day. It wasn't a good choice to let him die, but I liked the twist. Maybe Torlo can be a toa.

But Tollubo's fractures counterpart, I was like "Tollubo's dead?! But isn't he the main reason the OoT came to the Fractures Alternate Universe?" He should've definantly been in J-Day. He's one of the Main Antagonists.

Fianally, there's the Coliseum scene. You said apart from Glonor, only Toa Tollubo, Betak, and Tourik would appear. And then you brought in Vilinus, Carnac, Gribrak, and the rest of the Toa Metru (This counts for Fractures Tollubo too!). But, however, it was kind of nice to see them. Guess you didn't have much of a choice for the second matoran and unthinkable deaths. Varis wasn't so important, I guess. And Glacii as the bent cop? Stealing a loved one to make you do something for the kidnappers. The oldest trick in the book. And it still works. That was a great twist. So close to getting the longest page! But, you save the best events for J-Day.

Good luck!

MATORO58

Yeah, I don't mind that you lied. However, it might have been interesting to see Glacii as a toa in J-Day, searching for his wife, and getting killed when he found her.

But about Fractures Tollubo, that might've not been the best choice to kill him. I mean now, there's only like one main antagonist left until you publish J-Day, and that's Karabak. I know that until J-day, he won't appear. But Tollubo was like my favorite antagonist. You were screwing with Light Tollubo using him and Fractures Mesa (Actually, Mesa is enough for Tollubo. But his death was nice, and you've did a pretty good job in detailing him  too much . 

Apart from Glacii (Who was an audience favorite) and Tollubo (The antagonist who's obsessed with dead bodies) dying, the end of Frozen Calling was awesome.

MATORO58

Oh his handiwork will live on, including Mesa.

Tollubo is insane, but you've got to know that Tollubo isn't scared of Mesa if she's still alive. More likely, he's scared of her ghost. I'm pointing out that the likely the alive Mesa is an imposter, and the real one IS  dead. And if Mesa is an imposter, then she's probably the second Makuta.

See ya

MATORO58

Ever wonder how the murderer Clarence DeMacro knew the coordinates to Trenzalore? Well, wonder no more. Here's a small, spooky prequel to The Name of the Doctor that was released on the DVD boxset. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vvZMSrktskw

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Yeah, I read chapter 9 of whispers in the dark, and it shows Mesa as a lunatic. Because, well, the Makuta's a female, and she'd like to break Tollubo's courage and bravery by disgiusing as someone he knows. And who could be better than Mesa, his former girlfriend. He needs to move on, but he can't because just when he decides to, Mesa came back.

He's heartbroken by Mesa, tormented by Fractures Tollubo, and angered by Karabak. He's alone, desperate, and helpless. And his drinking up didn't help. Betak, Eselox, and Jollun can't help him, as well as the other Order of Tollubo members. The only people who are calming him are a Steltian, a Xian secret service hot Vortixx chick, a sarcastic Toa of Plantlife, a renegade Toa of Plasma (Maybe not), and a Skakdi of Plantlife who's not reliable.

Just kidding. Nobody's helping him. So this might be how Vendetta wil be posted.

Keep up this good material

MATORO58

Would now happen to be a better time or do we yet again find ourselves in unfortunate circumstances? :P http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 12:26, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

It now appears I'm the one in an inconvenient circumstance this time around. It seems I'm unable to access to CBW chatroom. XD--http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 12:29, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Well, I'm there now. Only briefly, however, but regardless, you can sign on briefly if you want. XD http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 12:36, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

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Question
Yo Mr. Doctor, I simply wanted to ask: what's that piece you always use for your Fractures Universe Turagas' bodies?

Aljarreau 15:17, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

That should be them :P Can you gimme a parts number, please?

Aljarreau 15:17, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Was just curious xP

Aljarreau 18:19, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Ah, THAT part! You used it so cleverly it looked like another xD Good use of that part!

Aljarreau 19:13, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: Messaging
Go to one of the wiki's showing on the "Favorite wikis" on my section. Message me there.

MATORO58

Splash
Here, took a photo:



I now understand how hard these are. Didn't do it alone, since it's very hard to take a pic in the right second and to throw a character into the water. But I still took about 40-50 times until I got a decent one, most of them being just fails. 04:44, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Those pictures were so damn funny :D

Just the look of the two when they saw Jekkai in the water, like that they're thinking "ah yes, it's just him again" :P

My picture however wasn't really intended to be funny, but I guess when you don't know what happened before it could look like it.

So with my experience of trying to take splash photos, the first one must've taken hours! Or did you throw him all the way into the river were you photographed and got a lucky photshot? :)

Many of the characters in the story are (due to my stupidness of making a sign-up) self-MoCs, so normally I would spend time trying to find out which element they are. Since nobody appearing in there follows the story however, I just make them up now.


 * Solunus is, like Gringat, a Toa of air.
 * Andron and Solace are Toa of lightning.
 * Vastara is a Toa of plantlife.
 * Falecía's power is shadow.

The other characters with Tilira, Gesikk and Nuva are special ones with certain backstories I already have in mind, so those pages would be up to me. If you do Vastara's page before I do it, make sure to give her some kind of "criminal" story.

At last, I really liked how you made a connection to Spherus Magna for my characters. However, please don't put in any information about the red star as a big revival machine. I totally hate the concept of that, surely the most unrealistic and needless thing ever introduced.

A little spoiler about Aescela here: She will loose her mask in the third story part, so if you have a brown Ruru, it would also match (since that will become her new one). If not, don't worry; they never met yet, right? :)

I'll look forward to your new blog update. So far, I did roughly 400 pictures and there are about 200+ more to come. That will be three times longer than Uprising, so I still have to look how I'll make the chapters; either few, but very long ones or many with one having the same length like Uprising's. 23:55, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Solunus' mask is just for decoration, so it's a normal Kanohi Kakama, he probably painted it :D

And like I said before, those were exactly my thoughts about the red star revival machine. I don't even see why they had to give it that purpose... the red star was always something mysterious, why not give it a different purpose? Like explaining why it can turn Matoran into Toa (like with the Inika)?

So you're planning a story after Zero Hour? That's great to hear! But as for now, I'm still excited about your first comic and the next MoC Update. Do you have a release date already in mind? 12:58, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Would now be an ideal time to have another Mibbit chat? http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 08:37, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

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Well, I'll be sitting in Mibbit chatroom until you arrive. :P http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 11:02, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

Heya, BTD27,
Hello BTD27, and thank you for the complements you have given me in the past but I need a little help with something. The newest message on my talk page about the warning from ShadowMaster seems a little harsh to me. One, the single comment I made that was inaccurate (every one makes those) and was clarified in the following replies was as Shadow Master stated in his exact words and other topics. "

"Some of the other staff members and I have been talking, and it's been mainly agreed that your behavior is getting a bit out of hand. First off, you've been bossy towards other users. Case in point is your telling of Artek the Crazy One that he's "making too many blogs". While the matter at hand is resolved, I want to ensure that such an event does not occur again. You have no right to tell any user how many blogs they should be making unless they're actually breaking the "one blog a day" rule. While your efforts to get people to adhere to the MoS are appreciated, telling people how many blogs they should be making is not. So please, don't tell people what to do unless they're legitimately breaking the rules. Second, you've become argumentative, as evidenced by the small-scale "blog war" on Artek the Crazy One's "Limits on Kanohi Powers" blog. You've sparked three different small-scale arguments on there. Now, it looks to me as if you often don't understand something, like what other users are saying. This seems to be the case for two of the three different arguments, for example, not understanding Kanohi powers, or not understanding why I asked users to stop double-posting. After you've been proven wrong, you refuse to stop or apologize to other users, and when you do, you claim that you "corrected yourself" (which I must point out that you didn't actually do). The comments there have gotten out of hand, and as far as the admins and I can see, you're the one at fault for it. So I'm going to ask you to very thoroughly read what other users are saying and comprehend it to the best of your ability, to avoid further confusion and argumentation. And please stop being argumentative. A blog war is not something we need right now. In particular, I'd like to explain the string of comments in which I told users to stop double-posting. Double-posting is annoying, increases your edit count, and it's excessive. Users were doing it, so I told users to stop, and I said I'd delete any double posts. Now, you obviously didn't read the last sentence, there, because when I said I'd delete the double posts, I meant that I would delete them. Whether you saw them or not does not matter, because it still breaks the rules. The world doesn't revolve around you, as I pointed out on the blog. Yet another example is on one of Chicken Bond's old blogs, on which there was confusion over who Mersery's murderer was. Now, if you'd paid attention to the date at which that blog was created (which, I must point out, was 2 years ago - there's no reason you should be reviving 2-year old blogs), you'd have seen that this was long before Velika's identity as the killer was revealed. So, really, had you paid attention, you'd have realized that you don't need to go onto that blog and point out it's Velika, acting like the others are idiots and you're so high and mighty. So, again, one more time, pay attention to what other users are saying, please.

Finally, I'd like to point out that your blog comments are becoming excessive. Nearly 70% of your edit count is blog comments (which I find hypocritical of you, since you claimed Artek was creating too many blogs). I think that a number of those blog comments also relate to what's stated in the second paragraph, that you're too argumentative. Now, the focus of this wiki, and the focus of blog commenting, as clearly stated in policy, is not to socialize. So please, edit mainstream articles more.

So, read over all of what I've said and consider yourself warned. I hope that I don't have to issue another warning to you in the future"

Second, the small scale blog wars really aren't debates, they just us jokin around, tying to understand something and still seeing flaws and plot wholes. Another thing, is that he said I refused to apologies, I think I did. *shrugs*. One last thing is that I have made mistakes but some of them have been taken the wrong way. He also said i have acted like the world revolves around me. Well, you have read what SM has said, I think. If you want more info, don't understand, or do understand and have any opinion what so ever about the topic, you know we're my talk page is. --Check out Millennial Shadow or DIE! (talk) 20:55, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks
Thank you. That is kind of what I thought you would say. I looked at the comment I made about blogs thinking to change wording like "I think" or something, but a reply about how he didn't know what I meant so I explained, then went to bed and forgot about it, then forgot to edit the comment, and then, blammo. So that's what happened there, and I meant on your Bonecrusher part of your most recent blog as instead of the story you gave um. I'll say stuff more like that next time. Well, thanks again, --Check out Millennial Shadow or DIE! (talk) 22:48, June 12, 2013 (UTC).

Aescela's Greetings
Saw your blog response and new pics. Have fun ;D

19:12, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Nah, it's not such a great piece of artwork :P I simply searched "old paper" in google and took one of the good-looking images. Then I installed the "Mata Nui" font on my PC, opened the thing in Gimp and typed. Nothing special actually, but it's funny to see how simple things can look so special when the other doesn't know how it was made ;D

Also, take your time. No need to rush :) 05:22, June 18, 2013 (UTC)

MOC Blog 3 Matoran
Could you send me instructions of the matoran in your third MOC blog? If you can, send them to my talk page. Zombiejiger (talk) 10:49, June 21, 2013 (UTC)Zombiejiger

Can you tell me what you think my work on the Bionicle Reviews Wiki? I've added lots of categories to pages. I think it's wise as one of them I added is dedicated to the highest rated products based on polls on the review pages. Tell me what'cha think when you take a look at it.

-Collector1

Yeah, I wouldn't mind a promotion. :) Collector1

Thank you! Have a good night! :D Collector1

Thanks once again! One of the first things I'm going to do is change the logo, from the stale blue text to an image from the Mata Nui Saga where the great beings are looking at the great spirit robot being constructed. I thought it would make a nice logo as it looks like their reviewing it. You think that would be a nice touch?

- Collector1

All right, was going to upload it anyways. Collector1

You mind if I announce the winners of the current contests? They seem inactive. Collector1

Hey there. Just letting you know, I managed to think up a way to include your MOC form of Inrye into my storyline. It's only in a minor capacity, but it felt nice to acknowledge your MOC in my storyline. It's on his page if you're interested. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 12:00, June 22, 2013 (UTC)

As I've said many times before, you are far too kind. XD http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 23:10, June 22, 2013 (UTC)

That letter
Yep, the translation is correct. I think the word "prothesis" is just a mistake I made :P

It's good to see some progress on the letter-writing :D -- 09:33, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Hey there. For the first time in many months, I'm actually making a new MOC/character. She's a Vo-Matoran and I'm currently using Betak's leg design on her. I just wanted to double-check with you to see if it's okay that I use it. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 10:32, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Themes
Admit it: That'd be the perfect theme for Thode:

Smiling like a Killer (Motörhead)

And a theme for you:

Doctor Robert (The Beatles)

xPPP

--Aljarreau 11:42, June 28, 2013 (UTC)

Letters
I finished deciphering the letter, and luckily I also checked your translation afterwards... I noticed the whole introduction and greeting is somehow mising in the letter, it just starts with "argument with female Vortixx" :D

Expect the answer to be send on the next weekend. I could do these every day, but I think it makes more sense to leave some space between each and connect it to the current events of my story. -- 14:32, July 1, 2013 (UTC)

I just think it would give me more to write when I connect it to the story, making the letters a small report of whats happening at Aescela's view.

If you desperately want one sooner, I could do that :D -- 16:17, July 1, 2013 (UTC)

Vendetta
I just read the first chapter of Vendetta, and it is already building up suspense. When will the next chapter be posted, and I'm itching for a chase scene between our least favorite Steltian, and Tollubo. Maybe something with motorcycles?

Jahoan 04:11, July 7, 2013 (UTC)Jahoan17

The articles
I saw that you continued creating articles for me, and I must express my thanks once again.

Andron's background is fantastic, it matches with the original canon so well and you explained his different looks and gender in a way thats very easy to understand. It's also a great idea to let the two Toa that fused into Savage be former members of his team, that makes the whole reason why he joined the Patriots much better.

Viretha's Uprising history is correct, well-written and has all the improtant main points of the story. However, it reminded me yet again I have to change some of the names (Lordanian, Cossy, Jacobi and Snipe) who sound just too human or non-fitting for my story.

The also saw you completed Pirai's article. The mask of Rahi control really fits his wolf helmet! Great idea on that.

It now seems that you've written more articles than I have! :D

Thanks again for the help. Expect Aescela's Letter soon! -- 12:15, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

I think a Toa of Iron would match Pirai better, not only because his owners reads the comic over at MOCpages, but also because I gave him a mainly silver armor that would match the element better. Toegether with his steel claws and his non-fire rifle it would match more.

Here is my spoiler answer:

Those are some great updates on your story. Basic outline is enough in my opinion since that's the way I make my story! August is next month, so much anticipation for that! -- 18:57, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

It's amazing you're so greatly interested in making these pages! I'm somehow not that good at writing articles, so I appreciate that even more. I probably warn you now: It can happen that I'll change some of the things on Vastara's page since she's a character that I did very long ago so her background and behavior is already pretty much thought out. Be sure to give her some kind of criminal background and it will be okay :D

Ah, you meant the Kanohi Tilira... now it makes sense. I was confused that you described it as silver since it's actually white/grey...

Your new theory comes even closer to what's true. There seems to be one thing nobody figured out so far... but I guess nobody can by now.

Soft spot for characters is never bad. I somehow knew it would happen, since most of the time the side characters are more liked than the main protagonist/leader. But don't forget the other two of their team, at least one No more spoilers :I

Sure, you have my permission to make him. Nobody did a character of mine yet (only the self-MoC) so that's a nice change! -- 22:00, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

First of all, have fun with this!



Now to the actual reply :P

Stars Range looks very cool! I think he totally looks like the one in Uprising, and the connection of the shoulder pads is great! He probably is even the same size like the real Range because the new Matoran became so big :D Even though I can't really see his eye/heartlight colors on this picture so well, it's still a nice little detail to keep both yellow! I'm really looking forward to the new pictures. Many thanks for making him! And you're also doing a Toa version? That's just amazing! I like how Sonitous is build and I think it would match Range, too. So you plan to keep his silver armor then? I'm just asking because his armor color changed by now to gold :)

It seems like both of you have a great and glorious job then, have fun with that :D

There aren't just the many possibilities by now, there are even more to come. I already planned something you just have no chance to guess it by now since it never appeared yet. But theories are alway interesting and sometimes even inspiring to read, so I'm always open for those! -- 10:38, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the compliments on my MoCs :) I was quite active for a bit more than a year on MOCpages, which is pretty much my resource for the featured creations now.

Tilira wasn't only to be seen on MOCpages, I also announced the character on the characters reveal blog update, and I always wondered why nobody noticed it :P

Except Vastara, no MoC on that site has to look exactly like on the photos when I do the third installment. Some will get simpler... and not everybody seen there fully upgraded has to stay alive in the story... -- 00:08, July 12, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, BTD27, do you mind if I give some of your MOCs cameo roles in one of my storylines?ToaOfDubstep680 (talk) 16:46, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

I'd like to use Knox, Betak, and Vunto. However, you may not approve of Betak and Knox's roles in my storyline, because I will have Tetran-Z kill them, and Vunto will only be mentioned once or twice.ToaOfDubstep680 (talk) 16:59, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Hey there. Please let me know when it would be ideal to meet up again on Mibbit for another discussion. I think I have something interesting in regards to Millennium. :P http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 09:27, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

In regards to your wanting to know more about the circumstances of Betak's death, she is the only Matoran who knows how to make the weapons that my Toa Team uses, and since Tetran-Z wants to know how to make those weapons for his own personal armada, he kills Knox to try and scare Betak into telling him how to make the weapons. However, she refuses, so Tetran-Z decides that she is of no use to him if he can't get the information out of her, plans to steal the weapons to reverse engineer them to find out how they work, and orders Meta Knight to behead Betak.ToaOfDubstep680 (talk) 19:13, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Alright then. And funnily enough, the inspiration for this latest idea came from Iago from Shakespeare's Othello. :P http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 00:52, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

OK. Can I use Torlo instead of Betak, then?ToaOfDubstep680 (talk) 01:16, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks bro! I'll need to know which ones you'd let me use, though, so I'll know who's off limits.ToaOfDubstep680 (talk) 01:26, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, I thought you'd like to know that the first chapter to feature Knox in Son of the Suns was released today. Seeing as he is your character, I had hoped you could read it over and give me your opinion on my representation of him. Thanks,  DeltaStriker   01:32, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Alright then. Just let me know whenever you're ready to begin this shindig. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 09:55, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Tanks for pointing that out. I'll fix it when I post Chapter 2 later today.

Actually, it's on a planet named Terra, in an Alternate Reality. It's somewhat hard to explain without spoiling some of the plots I have worked out for sequels and stuff, but suffice it to say that Kikanalo are natural inhabitants of the planet and widgets are the currency used by most inhabitants of the world, and when Destria was cut off from the outside world it just kept the same economic system.

I glad you enjoyed it, I worked hard on the second half of the chapter yesterday so I could get back on schedule. 15:56, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Merall
Just read through Merall's page. Apart from some details (like the name Gesikk, not Gresikk) you can keep it how it is! Great work on her background, the story was very interesting to read. It's also nice you pointed out her strength multiple times, something that is very important for her character. 09:03, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for bringing this to my attention. I'll make sure it gets addressed. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 09:02, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

You no longer need to worry about this. I've left him a message on his talk page that will hopefully clear all this up. Again, thank you for bringing this to my attention. http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/d/d4/VamprahSymbol.JPG  Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  http://images.wikia.com/custombionicle/images/5/55/PohatuSymbol.JPG 10:04, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry about that, I didn't mean to go against your tactics or anything. I promise from here on out to not interfere with the page layouts of any of your characters again. DronesFoul (talk) 02:35, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Hey BobTheDoctor27, I was just reviewing a certain article when it came to me that it needs more than one editor to complete the job. Could you please follow the link provided in the text and fix it up? DronesFoul (talk) 20:01, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I was quite suprised (in a positive way) how much the expansion of her story matched with the plans on her Toa origin since you just expanded on her life as a Matoran. I would suggest you enter that story into the contest I'll publish soon! There are some nice prizes to win :) Of course there has to be some talk about the Toa Kaita fusion you would like to put into the story. Since the Toa are pretty much unexperienced with their powers (that's why you never see them using those) it would be best if it's described as something like an accident. Maybe also include a reason why they didn't tell the others, since a Kaita transformation might have helped in the fight against the Protosteel-Worm a lot. -- 11:28, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

There is no need for a shoutout in the feedback blog, I'm going to create a new blog post with all the information (rules, prizes etc.). It will probably be posted quite soon, maybe after the new comic today. -- 10:10, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Ah okay, I'll wait for the review then :)

I just hope people aren't scared away from the contest since all the ideas I posted are already taken. Maybe somebody will come up with his own idea, that would be very interesting. -- 19:18, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Haha, nice! You can take your time however (contest ends next year) but if you're into the story right now I won't stop you to finish earlier! Sounds like some nice updates on Chorrum. Let me see pictures when he's done :) -- 21:19, July 28, 2013 (UTC)