User blog comment:BobTheDoctor27/December 2011 Update/@comment-2026417-20120102000047/@comment-2026417-20120104221727

Actually, I rather liked the beginning. I read it here and there at school, and after I got my iPod, at night. One of my favorite lines in the book is in the beginning: "He had spent many a boring evening studying such Toa and, as much as it embarrassed him to think about it, he considered himself an expert on the females in particular… He had been bored." Trust me, the story's very well written, and I know how hard it gets sometimes to write (I've experienced this many times with Sigma, my Sci-Fi novel). Good luck with the rest of your novels. Oh, and with the Stars sets as well.