User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130630172655

OK, firstly, I would like to point out that I love the different paneling style you have now. :P If I recall correctly, Uprising was regular with two panels per page. I notice that this is no longer the case as you have more erratic spacing between each image.

In terms of plot this was a very well-executed opening. :D The actual beginning was extremely well done and I loved the immediate tense atmosphere with Glonor on the run. Plus it was nice how you contrasted that with the friendly, simple Mata Nui-esque life. :P You really captured Glonor well. One of the things I wanted Frozen Calling to show was that Toa are inadequate and gentrified in comparison to some of their more independent, hardy Matoran and you really showed that well here. :D Glonor did a lot of the work while the Toa fell.Plus I love how Glonor ended up saving the female Toa of Fire's life. That was a great reference back to the 2006 message: you don't need to be a Toa to be a hero.

The introduction of the undead figures was also a point of particular interest and, the fact that you used a large panel, really made it seem like a professional comic where an entire page is dedicated to the introduction of a big bad villain character. :P

As far as introductions go, I'm really struggling to find fault with it. :D Once again you photography and storytelling were stunning and I wholeheartedly recommend this first installment. :D 10/10