Talk:Toatapio Nuva's Comics

Comments
"WOW.Great comics Toatapio! ther very unique and funny.The idea of a backround shop is very oringanal. Your characters are clever as well.The guest star comic was very funny. these are awsome!!!!!!"

- Bzp member Dvd about these comics

"nice! your comics are absolutely hilarious"

- Bzp member Turaga of Water about these comics

'''The reply below was a huge thing for the comics. I really took advice out of it and my comics got better! Thanks Kilorak!''' "Hmm.. These comics are ok, but not actually funny. Being a comic maker myself, I'll give you some pointers: Irony: Irony is one of two things that often makes comics funny, so try to use it often, but not too often. Jokes: Jokes are the other thing which makes comics funny, so try to use them, rather they be peoples' heads exploding(Well, I find that funny, not sure about anyone else.) Or a word joke. Spelling: Try to use Grammar, as the easier someone can read the comic, the funnier it will be, asuming you have jokes or irony, or anthing else funny. Randomness: Try to no use much of this, but still alittle, as slight randomness with humor is often funny. But still, not bad for a beginner. (Sorry if this seems harsh, as I am only giving you pointers.)"

- Bzp member Kilorak giving advice for these comics