User blog comment:Ahpolki Inika/Spring Break 2014 Blog/@comment-24847792-20140422011929

Those MOCs all look pretty cool. I especially like Dilukrom.

Anyway, the story. It seems like a good concept, and I look forward to reading it in the future. The idea of Teridax and Mata Nui being forced into an alliance is definitely interesting. The only thing I might change is the title of M'kulyth, 'Mask of Flesh,'; it could quite easily be confused for a Kanohi. That's just me, though - I don't know if anybody else thought of it in that way.

Overall, this was an informative and interesting blog post, and I definitely look forward to that story, whichever name you give it. (Personally, out of the four, I recommend Heartbeat.)