User blog comment:Echo 1/Freelancer Stuff and 1,000 edits!!!!/@comment-3136874-20110628173235

These MOCs are pretty good, however, I personally don't approve of THAT much silver used on a MOC with THAT much red. I'd suggest removing it or changing the colour mostly talking about Malachi. Rating: 6/10

Anyways, I know you said X is still a bit of a WIP <small(Work In Progress), But he doesn't look too bad, he actually looks okay... Except for that Vahi... Seems out of place on him. Rating: 8/10

Skipping Tamar, since she doesn't look much different. Harbringer is pretty cool! But I highly suggest giving him more trans-orange, and less silver. The whole silver+red/trans-orange/orange doesn't look too good in my opinion. Rating: 7/10

I'm not sure where the name Aladar is from, so I won't mention that (too late now aye?) Anyways, he's probably my favorite here! Nothing too bad I can say about him, except a lime-green/Metru-green chest plate would look better, but he looks fine now! :D Rating: 9/10

Dylaan looks okay, but his torso... D: That type of double chest plate doesn't look good on him or on any other MOC... The rest of him looks gre- wait what's that? Sorry, but silver feet... and METRU feet... I'm sorry, but in my opinion, that looks absolutely horrible. If you're intent on using Metru feet, I'd at least make them red. Rating: 7/10

Sarai is okay, but no offense, her colour-scheme reminds me of Tahu Nuva's... And sorry, but I must say, that's not a compliment. My main problem with her are those I bet you already know what I'm gonna say silver Inika shoulder pad things... Can those be considered shoulder pads? They don't exactly cover the shoulder... Other than that, she's fine, I guess. Rating: 6/10

Overall, I can't say I'm too impressed. The MOCs are okay, but there's only one that I don't have any big problem with. :/ I'm sorry if I offended you in my reviews, and I'm sorry if the following rating offends you as well. Overall rating: 6/10 Please note that these are based off of my own rating system. We don't need another moccer1380 or whatever his name was incident.

Also, take note that I am NOT trying to offend you, Echo, just trying to help you make some better decisions while MOCing.