User blog:BIONICLEToa/BIONICLE: Mask of Karhi... What do you think?

I wanted to know what you guys think about my story me and my bro made so far. It's only a 1-pager, but I think it's pretty good. The reason for this blog: So, please make a comment, or go to the story's talk page!
 * 1) I wanted to see how much people are reading my story!
 * 2) I want to see what you guys think.
 * 3) I want to get some ideas from you guys for my story!

Also, please keep reading the story as it continues! You can read it here.