User blog comment:LoganWoerner/January 2014 Blueprint: Merall vs. Niha/@comment-25983570-20140101201821

Happy New Year!As promised I have read On and I have a review, I liked it! It was well written with a good plot holding it up, I also liked how the cast talked to Niha, through the lessons she was givin we learned more about your world and more about the conflict of the story. Bob did an excellent job writing chapter3 and really set up the next chapterto come, can'twait for the rest.:)