User blog comment:Karov Kurad/The Big Update:Part 2/@comment-5900628-20140626170453

I guess I have time to comment on this now so... here goes.

Your pictures of him seem slightly blurry, but Karov's upper arms seem to have improved. I don't know what you intend by adding that ball-and-socket to his waist -- inappropriate connotations flow through my mind. Unless you are intending to give him crotch cherries, I would suggest removing that. Lower legs still seem a bit gappy, but it's difficult to fix that on simple limbs.

Navej looks cool, but his color scheme is rather erratic -- the gold is concentrated on his lower legs and torso, the tan is all in his waist/upper legs and lower arms, and the brown is only prominent in his upper arms and lower legs. Unless you're attempting color layering I would say switch around some of his armor pieces and see if the colors become a little more spread out.

I agree with Artek concerning Malfurion's awkwardness, but unlike him, I will tell you some of the reason why: you've built him too tall without giving him enough bulkiness, especially in the upper legs. I suggest doing a copy over Koroklam's legs for him. Besides that, the chest (from the one good picture I can get of it) is way too protrusive, and from what I know of you I'm quite sure that isn't a bad FeMOC chest design. I would say thin out the chest some and then we'll see how he is.

Koroklam is rather nice and bulky -- one of your better MOCs. My only complaint concerns the colors -- the feet have a large amount of yellow while they don't appear anywhere else in the MOC at all. If you can, replace all the yellow bits with grey/black.

Dranosh looks great, the armoring of the limbs works well and the custom torso looks great (from some angles at least.) Except for that pendulu,-stomach thing, I have no clue what purpose that serves (or maybe I do, again, inappropriate connotations.) His sword is cool too.

Now that I have a good quality picture of Jeyna, my verdict is -- pretty good. The dual-colored Hahli Inika pieces might be out of place, but I could let that suffice as sand/dust picked up while traveling. My only real complaint is the Exo-force arms on the chest piece, they make her seem a bit unnecessarily bulky (which isn't a bad thing in itself, but kind of detracts if you want to make them sexy. :P)

Arkon's first picture is too blurry to be much good, and the second pic doesn't give me a good look at his proportions. What I can see is that the color scheme breaks in the legs (old gold right there? Really?)

Kadren is one of the worst of the lot. The double jointed legs look awkward, the custom torso isn't executed very well, and the bulk and color scheme seem to variate throughout the build.

With Poisonnay, I'm glad you took my suggestion about removing the silver Nuvaboobs. They work decently for me, and make the color scheme a lot better. She could end up being one of your best MOCs someday.

Toronigo, the last in the pics, could be the least -- again, irregular bulk levels, and the torso just doesn't seem the best.

All in all, what have I to say in summing up this 15-minute waste of time that is this comment? Some are pretty bad, but others are pretty good, and others have the potential to become incredibly unique and well-built characters/MOCs. Keep it up mate!