Talk:Freedom Lines

General Veers? Is'nt that from Star Wars? :D

Anyway, I read your story. Seems pretty good so far. I know you'll add more later on.

Anyway, thought I'd mine as well read some of it. You story is unique, especially at the start. I believe it was a computer speaking, correct?

Anyway, good story so far! Keep up the good work! BIONICLEToa! (Talk) 23:20, January 3, 2014 (UTC)