User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-5072107-20130827193524/@comment-5174759-20130828110310

Nice I get to see your thoughts on my characters! That always means to me that the reader got interested in them and their developement.

Comparing Khan to Solunus... who ever thought of that? But I see your point, they have something in common.

I see that you're the only one so far who mistrusts in Tilira. Even a shiny, white-armored hero could follow his own rules, right? What reason should she have not to use her powers? :)

I always like to get my readers to guess a bit more, so that Merall part gave me yet another idea. That's fine idea you have there... but how would you react to somebody too stubborn you barely know and who just slapped you in the face? And you know how Merall usually behaves, right? :D When Theran's team is the one from the legend... what about Khyae's team? You saw three of them... aren't they "twisted heroes" as well?

I'm glad I could move Nuva away from that stereotypical "he's just evil because he is evil"-bad guy behavior. Makes hi more interesting.

Why do you think it's unoriginal to divide the team? Why does that stick out to you that much?