User blog comment:Echo 1/Overcast MOCs Blog/@comment-5900628-20150104010116

Time for some critique.

Whera looks pretty well done, especially for a MOC that uses colors with few parts to them (old gold). The feet are painted? If so, I'd suggest you paint her mask to match. I also think the yellow sword looks a bit out of place -- maybe you could change it to silver, which is already in her model. (Also props for the upper legs.)

Malachi also looks pretty solid. He does have some open pins in the legs, and the blue pins are more distracting with his darker color scheme than some others. As for the mask, how about a Mask of Rebounding?

Amahain suffers a bit from the brown color's fluctuations, shoulders in particular. Also, is there a reason for the dark red and dark green torso?

Makir is also pretty solid, but not as much as the others. The stomach looks weird, the dark green torso is distracting, and the blue Bohrok eyes' shade is a bit off from the rest.

Lewix isn't quite up to the rest of them, probably due to his height. The legs look rather skinny and stretched, and the lower legs in particular don't flow well. Could also stand some silver in the arms.

Dreg's also a bit lacking, the legs used as armor expose some balljoints, and the torso's not really smooth. The upper leg armor introduces a random bit of dark brown, but that probably can't be fixed.

Alvaron... for some reason, the gold and the trans orange seem to contrast. Not really a fan of the shoulder armor either. Could say something about the wings, but I'm terrible at those myself, so I won't.

Xaldius and Jevson suffer from the same height/bulk issues as Lewix. I'll just say that for now.