User blog:MAZEKA/Self MOC, first look and advise needed

Ok, so I've decided it's time I got a proper self-MOC. I have spent my free time over the last few days building the prototype and the finished thing will appear in my second comic. That's right, I've only just started the first and I've already planned the next.

This is my third attempt at a custom MOC and probably my best, but it is still in need of serious work, I can't get it to look right. So, here are some pics, please comment and giva advise on improvement. :)