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NRC
Please do so. Also, it would help if you got more people to participate in the project. KHA AAA  AN!  03:34, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! I'd be happy to help! I'll happily give it a shot! -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  13:27, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I am. Sorry, I'm in the midst of writing a new page. I'm thinking of taking up Speewaa's Story. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   13:50, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I will read your stories, and I will do the reviews. I owe you that at least. KHA AAA  AN!  02:46, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

How's Chapter 5 coming along? I know you're busy with TSC, but i'm making sure BW doesn't start lagging behind. i want an active, up and running story. Also, can you write Rernahk's early life section, since you know your own storyline better than me XD -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   13:31, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I didn't know. BTW, thanks! :D

Moccer T  20:11, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, I'll have to read those today. BTW, thanks! :D I'm planning on getting some more Bionicle to help with my MOCcing, I don't have the good mask. :P That's why I've learned to make my own heads.....

Moccer T  20:20, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

BTW, I wanted The Cold One to be one of the main villains.

Moccer T  22:08, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Letting you know, J97 opposes the Cold One's inclusion in his story. Not sure if you know that yet.  Shadow master    (Contribs)   22:16, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Same, I think the characters that have appeared only in the DR trilogy should stay there. It would seem odd to have the Cold One and, well, you know who, in other stories, they fit their place best in the DR and related stories alone. Plus, his powers aren't really described that much in what he's appeared in so far, it would be hard to depict him in another story right now.  Shadow master    (Contribs)   22:28, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I believe I will, though it may be a while yet before I finish reading the story. KHA AAA  AN!  23:48, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I just save them from OpenOffice files. KHA AAA  AN!  23:51, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. I felt the Cold One is a character who should not really appear in any other sagas beyond the Dark Empire Storyline. It illogical and senseless for him to appear beyond the DR saga. He was designed exclusively and solely for that storyline, and it doesn't make sense in-story for him to appear elsewhere. So I agree, we'll lean towards a no. Also, could you give me a hand with making the Imperial Resistance page? -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   02:36, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

RE:
Sure, go ahead and use some Infinus if you want, besides, I've created a place where the Infinus get imprisoned, a realm, the Twilight Realm, a hellish realm where the worst of the insane are sentenced, and the torturer, the Infinus of Twilight, an insane being that makes anyone that meets him also insane, called Zant. (His MOC will be made later by me) You may use this concept, but I am also using it for Utopia.

''' Toa  Fairon  (Contribs AWA)

Thanks! I'm just as good writing dark stories as I am writing milder ones. Also, would you like to help me with the Main Page? I think its time to update all but the AfW sections. You can do FU and FS if you like. Also, Mibbit per chance? :3

I've got so much time on my hands. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   12:50, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Fair enough. And I do plan to do that review. No force on Earth can stop me (except maybe breakfast), and I will read and review the story. This now reminds me to go comment on your blog post XD -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   13:03, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks for trying though. :D

Moccer T  16:13, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cold One Entry
Hey Varkanax, I know you're a judge for the Dark Realities MOC Contests, and I wanted to let you know I finished my Cold One entry. I am aware I already posted it on CB's talk, but I wanted to post it here too for two reasons.

1. I'm impatient.

2. If, for some reason, CB does not see my message before the 26th, then you can use yer fancy admim powers and add it to the entries on his blog.

So here it is:

There ya go. Bye. Bat erra  12  02

Invited
Hey, Varkanax, I've had some recent concerns regarding ToaFairon's blog, and the mibpaste there can endanger the reputation of some users. Can you replace that mibpaste with this abridged version? Thank you. Also, if you can, can you come to Mibbit?  Shadow master    (Contribs)   22:25, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. It gives more info and it does not point out specific people.  Shadow master    (Contribs)   22:29, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like to do the Featured Story section? And how's BW coming along? -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   12:07, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Understandable. If you don't have the time to get around to it, don't waste time trying to do it :P You are on vacation, after all? It's your job to relax and have fun, is it not? -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   12:16, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

One word: YYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS! -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   12:56, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

We were discussing this on Mibbit a little while ago. I think we all agreed that we'd keep it closed.

By the way, CB and I were discussing new ideas for BW that you should probably hear. Come to Mibbit if you want to hear them. KHA AAA  AN!  01:30, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

A World at War
Hell, Varkanax, I saw your comment on my story A World at War. I'm glad to see that there are some people whom take the time to read stories. I have began to read The Shadows Coil, and I can see that you have a talent with writing, so I am asking, if it wouldn't be too much trouble, to tell me which chapters need work in, my story. I would appreciate it if you told me which need work, for you are a better writer than most contributors on the wiki. Liople urodon  ferox  20:39, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, and I shall continue reading TSC when I get a chance. I think I might submit A World at War for an official review. Again, thank you for your feedback. Liople urodon  ferox  21:31, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome to my official list of friends!

Liople urodon  ferox  21:49, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sure thing! I will now take time to read through the whole thing, and I'll give you feedback on TSC talk page. Liople urodon  ferox  00:36, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

I've left feedback on TSC. I appologize if it's too vauge, but I am very much enjoying the story.

Hey, Varkanax, I know you're good with stories, and I need advice. Does a well-written story posted chapter by chapter attract the crowds, or would it be better to post it all at once? THE DARK  SIDE : WHO WILL WIN?

I'll get 'round to doing it once the weekend comes. I'm very busy during school days. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  11:20, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mibbit? :3 -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  11:58, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, never mind. I don't have time. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  12:09, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I am going to continue TJS. And I shall get to work on it first thing tomorrow. And I need you to come to mibbit, so you can give your input on the winiers of the DR contest. Please? :3  J 97  Auditore   01:39, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Check out the page for the Dark Fusion! Also, do you think you could create the page for the Cold One, seeing as you have better insight into that character. Could you also assist me in completing the Imperial Resistance page too? -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   07:48, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Get my above message, pal? I'll promise to get Speewaa's Story done soon too. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   20:55, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

To be honest, i haven't been following it too well. It just feels to hard to read on the web once I've fallen behind. I plan on printing it out and reading it like a proper book :D

Anyways, what I want you to just help me clear up the history section of the Imperial Resistance. I'll handle everything else. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   08:39, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Game Victors
I read the newest chapters of TSC, where Fairon has to fight in the Eternal Game again, and I was wondering, are you going to add the other victors, such as Azzurok, Shadowplayer, Agrana, and Skarge, to the "Known Victors" list on the Eternal Game page? And who is Kharix, by the way? I can't find her in the entry list. Bat erra  12  02

TDS
I just read the TDS review. Thanx! What can I do to improve? THE DARK  SIDE : WHO WILL WIN?

OK, I'll do that. And I can't wait to see Kharix. Bat erra  12  02

I've changed my standards. I now think I overrated and underrated some stories the first time (or second), and therefore I'm compensating for that. KHA AAA  AN!  23:28, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Invitation
Would you like to join? We attempt to get MOC pages up to date with the current events of stories (or will, when enough people join) Liople  urodon  ferox   23:39, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Great! I shall add your name to the list. Here is the club template

I'll see if I can fix it. One sec. KHA  AAA  AN!  23:52, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

An Age of War
What do you think of the prologue of An Age of War? Bionicle  Kid  (blog) 16:09, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I haven't read it yet, as I haven't had the time, but I loved TEG. Bionicle Kid  (blog) 17:19, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Prologue finished!
Hey, V, I've finished the Prologue! Please read!

I was thinking maybe we could each review each other's most recent Chapters in each of our current stories, chapter by chapter, on the story's talk page. Whatd'ya think? Bionicle Kid  (blog) 01:03, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Did you get my above message? Bionicle Kid  (blog) 00:56, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, Varkanax, I've been a little curious, and I kinda want to construct a scene from Dark Realities with my Cold One. This would require a few Vakra MOCs, a Blast MOC, and a half-inverted/"purified" Zaktan MOC. Is it okay if I do that?  Shadow master    (Contribs)   18:04, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. I'm going to try to make it as accurate as possible. Just wondering, the Vakra were described to have hoods. Would these be black or white? I can get either color.  Shadow master    (Contribs)   18:14, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you. That's a very kind thing for you to say and I am incredibly pleased to hear that you enjoy reading my stories. Still, I think you're right. (Aside from the 'me being awesome' part, of course. :P) We haven't properly spoken to each other before, which I find strange now that I think about it. Perhaps we should talk more often. :D Matoro  1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium! 21:54, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Too true, although I'm afraid that I don't read a lot of stories here. My computer's screwed up to the extend that I can constantly see the two creations in the background, which makes reading pages difficult. Still, which of my stories have you been reading? Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium! 22:15, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! That's a lot! Well, you'll be pleased to know that I'm currently working on the next few chapters of WitD, which should be another lengthy one. Which story serial is your favourite? Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium! 22:24, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think that I would have to agree. Battle of Bara Magna wasn't really planned properly and I'm ashamed to admit that I just kept putting off chapters of WitD every month. I was planning on finishing it months ago and I'm still only halfway through. As for GotP and Frozen Calling, they're probably my two personal favourites. I planned GotP down to the last detail and literally put my heart and soul into writing the finale. How about Shadow Heart and City of the Damned? I didn't plan them as well as GotP or Frozen Calling but they link BoBM and GotP. Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium! 22:36, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

That reminds me, I promised to read that story of yours ages ago. I'll have to disappoint you by saying that I haven't done it yet but I have had a very hectic summer and not a lot of time, ironically. However, I promise that I will get around to reading it at some point when WitD is finished. (Which I'm hoping will be in the near-future) By the way, thanks for the tip on the skin. I'll try it out because it's been bugging me lately. :D Matoro  1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium! 22:53, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Really? You don't remember? Well it was on one of the blog updates if I recall correctly. As for the skin, it seems a little too different for my liking. I mean, I know my way around it thanks to BS01 but it doesn't really feel a welcoming to me as the New Skin look that I have. Still, it does make pages seem professional. Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium! 23:06, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

True, I can imagine that would work to get rid of the creations in the back ground. Perhaps, I'll try that out in future. Thanks! :P Matoro  1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium! 23:11, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'm anticipating about 5 or 6 more chapters with one or two chapters of Frozen Calling between. Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium! 23:21, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I will help update the Eternal Game page sure. And as for your chapter, that's perfectly fine. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   00:47, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I'm glad you liked his portrayal although I really wish that I could have given a bit more about what happened to Rotam between the two stories. Still, I'm very pleased that you liked Karabak. He is my personal favourite character to write about. Matoro 1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium! 21:06, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Will you please give me some advice on writing a descriptive, interesting story? Bionicle Kid  (blog) 00:57, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks a lot! Thanks for the advice.

I very often tend to make short prologues compared to my chapters. I plan for AAoW's chapters to be around 3-5 times longer than my prologue, and if this goes according to plan, there will be 15-20 chapters. So, if all goes to plan, and your estimations on my prologue's length is correct, the story will be 45,000 - 100,000 words (average 72,500 words).

Again, thanks! Bionicle Kid  (blog) 02:00, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Xaterex continuity
I'm not quite certain on the order of the stories (since, y'know, I haven't read them yet), so when is TEG set in relation to ITD? Is it set in between it and TSC, or are the two stories concurrent? KHA AAA  AN!  13:31, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'll assume it's an alternate version of Shardak or something in TEG, then, correct? KHA AAA  AN!  13:37, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, Vark, would you consider a partnership with myself and CB? We're both going to be working on An Age of War, and I couldn't help but ask you to work on it also. If you accept, I'll give you a chapter-by-chapter synopsis of the story, once I complete it.

Something
Just created these while I was bored.

That's completely fine. Bionicle Kid  (blog) 14:02, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I have. I'll get to a review soon. KHA AAA  AN!  17:17, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I've just been reading Chapter 3 of TDL, and I've noticed you've made a passing reference to Mersery in the rebellion. Unless an explanation has been given previously which has been overlooked, how did he survive the battles in the arena in TEG? Good work on TDL BTW. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   20:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I loved TSC! Great work on TDL, too. I'm liking it so far.

I've got a question. Is the "presence" in the prologue anyone I know? The voice's descriptions seem unmistakeably like that of Ennithek, the Dark One. If this is true, I need to give you a few points and guidelines for his character.&mdash; Bionicle Kid  ( Blog 04:03, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Fine with me. It was a vague guess. But really, your writing is very good!&mdash; Bionicle Kid  ( Blog 13:18, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The Shadows Coil
I just wanted to congratulate you on a magnificent job. Oh, and you owe me another review... ;-) Toa  Roden

Hey, can you delete this image? I need to upload a new version, but so long as the old version exists, only the old version shows.  Shadow master    (Contribs)   16:13, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, it's still not working. Can you delete it again (sorry)? I'm just going to upload a whole new file.  Shadow master    (Contribs)   16:19, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still writing BW? Its seems like its kinda been forgotten. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   21:12, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Come to mibbit i'm online. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   23:33, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Vorgaan
Dude, ask for whatever you like, it's fine! Sure, you can use the Vorgaan, although I'm not sure about Vor (unless it's set before the rising, as afterwards there's all the stuff from Dancing with Destiny.

But yeah, be my guest! And as I said, if you ever want to use anything of mine again, please just ask. I honestly don't mind it one bit. Ihu  rules!  12:04, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

That's absolutely fine with me. Ihu  rules!  13:37, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, you can use the name. [http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110809014452/custombionicle/images/thumb/5/54/Parallels.png/150px-Parallels.png ] 00:34, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hi
Wanna be friends? I'm an experienced editor since 2008 and I'd like to make a few friends. -- Kopakamata  97  18:30, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hello Again
Alright. Thx! When I was asking for personal information, I was kidding around by immitating some loser named TakaNordas. -- Kopakamata  97  19:31, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, about that. I had to have breakfast. I agree we need to have a more direct, grand, fear-inspiring presence driving the plot. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  21:49, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, just woke up from a dead sleep. O:

But, if you still want to speak with me, I'm online now.

I have not started as of yet. I've been primarily focused on writing Punishment, though I will start soon. As for your second question, that is my own version of M1's Saren, which I am incorporating into my storyline. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!  02:27, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Coolio! I'll be sure to check them out as soon as I have the time to, which will hopefully be later tonight or at the weekend. :P Matoro  1  SAVE THE BANANA! Its a good source of Potassium! 19:14, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, V, would ya do something for me? The elemental ghosts (Niha, Novux, "Whiteout", Xillahk, and Ennithek) are pretty powerful, But, maybe in your universe, these spirits were cast long ago into a deep sleep, and maybe somehow they can be awakened.&mdash; Bionicle Kid  ( Blog 19:59, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

...Silly me. :P  J 97  Auditore   19:14, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks buddy. (No hard feelings about earlier?)

Thank you! Thank you very much! * bites thin air *

I've literally just got on my computer :P I went to bed just before you posted your last one 8 hours ago. Anyways, I'll see which sections I can update. Which oens do you want to do? -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   21:09, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

No problemo my friend. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   21:13, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, do you reckon we should try and update Shardak's page and bring it up to scratch with all ongoing events in your storyline? I'm willing to lend a hand, but I can't do it by myself. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   11:14, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. You should complete the sections that detail everything prior to Shardak's first appearance in TSC, and then I'll be able to step in from there. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   20:56, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Varky. I'm just wondering have you read HiS? If so, can you tell me what you think? I'd like to know where I an improve. :) ODST! 21:10, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great! I'll take it from there and see what I can do. BTW, seeing as he's your character, I think you should be the one to write his Abilities and Traits section and his Mask and Tools section. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   00:34, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

SPJ
Hey dude, if you have time, could you write Chapter 6 if Shadowplayer's Journey? If you can, thanks, if you can't, oh well.

I have not properly read it in thorough detail, but I do know what happens in general from my readings. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   12:51, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Though I may just read it in the PDF form, since that's a damn LOT fo paper to use XD -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   13:01, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

So, wait, hang on a sec. Is Slice still writing the next BW chapter or not? -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   13:26, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Welcome back!
Thanks for the offer: I'd be greatly honored to join the NRC, although I may not be able to review a lot, due to lack of time. But I'll do what I can. Also, I'll have a few questions about the NRC style of reviewing, but they can wait until later.

Oh, and I'm currently reading (and enjoying) TDL. ;-) Toa  Roden   17:54, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I do still plan on reviewing it once time's on my hands. BTW, who should write the next BW chapter? -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   13:01, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, do you think you could come onto Mibbit, please? I can continue telling you what I've planned. -- Welcome  to   the   Fezpedia!   14:01, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I noticed you tried to update the Wiki's skin. I'd like to help, if possible.  Shadow master    (Contribs)   22:04, September 17, 2011 (UTC)