User blog:BIONICLEToa/NEW CHAPTER to Bionicle: Mask of Karhi!

My series, BIONICLE: Mask of Karhi, has a total of 8 chapters now. It's pretty long, and I hope more people can see it and read it. ALSO! I'd love some constructive critism about the story!

I have made a bunch of the Mocs, and there is more chapters to come. I hope some people see this story and enjoy it!