User blog comment:PoseidonR/Toa Crono - Looking for Criticism on Character Designs/@comment-3275483-20190306033528

These are looking pretty slick, but there a few things that could benefit from a second look. Some of your MOCs have colored pieces that don't exactly fit. A rule of thumb for MOC making is to usually have max three colors for your MOC (excluding weapons, which are usually silver anyways). A good practice is to layer these colors accordingly and to have them evenly distributed. Also, while you can use the same color in different shades, be careful, as it can clash. Freila and Omaga are examples of that. Also, make sure to consider aesthetic and have your MOC stick to parts that compliment each other nicely. Your MOC Ziona definitely follows these guidelines and is, IMO, the best one out of the bunch.

Your paint jobs are looking pretty clean, but make sure to paint multiple layers so it stays on nicely.

For Magnara, I've never seen that piece used as a helmet before. It looks nice, I like it.

As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. You've got a lot of potential, so make sure to keep practicing, seeking criticism, and experimenting with new techniques. Godspeed.