User blog comment:FireDrag1091/Coldest Day Reviews/@comment-4787732-20131225223630

Now it's review time! Sorry that it took so long buddy I had to answer for my crimes on Christmas Eve to celebrate Christmas with my family so yeah. Now on to the review!

Well The Coldest Day is the type of story that I enjoy. Action packed and some suspense. It was really good and my favorite assassin is Tiara (duh!). I really like the way she was portrayed in this story. The only minor part of the story was that Vantelic used those plasma rifles when he wanted revenge for Vadkii's death. I actually prefered it that he fought with his fists and gadgets like Batman, but that was the only minor thing about the story in my view. The story wasn't confusing at all! Everything was told very well. I'll give the coherence a 9/10. The story was very very interesting! I really looked forward to what would happen next and it did't disappoint. I'll give the suspense a 10/10. I thought that Vantelic was a very good and cool character. The assassins were also interesting. I'll give the character development a 8/10. The problems that Vantelic had to deal with were challenging for him and that was very good. Also when Vadkii was killed, he had to turn his grief into anger and that was very well written. I'll give the dilemma a 9/10. The story was very cool and it was original. I really liked the Batman kinda feel it had, it was very interesting and thrilling to read. I'll give the originality a 25/30. As I said before it was a very good story so I'll give it an A, let's say something about 90 %.

I have a question though. Is Tiara dead? I guess she's still alive since 'Locus' knocked her unconscious. I would really like a story with Vantelic facing 'Locus' again and also with Tiara (if she's still alive). You know maybe Tiara returns for revenge or something (also revenge for what 'Locus' did to her).

I already told you that Tiara was my favorite assassin. Actually I wanted her to succeed. It's just a feeling I had.

I would really like to participate in a writing contest about how Vantelic betrayed this orginization. That would be awesome!

I'm very glad that you used Tiara in this story! She was very well written and I really liked the fight between her and Vantelic. Thank you FireDrag for using her in your story. And above all MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!