User blog comment:LoganWoerner/Niha Storyline Character Applications/@comment-1524575-20131021233908

Another character application process, eh? Well then, I do believe that I have two characters I can put forward. By know you should be able to guess, they are the infamous Order member: Polemistis and the deadly Makuta Erevayx.

Starting off with Polemistis, while he isn't exactly inexperienced; I guess you may say that he is new to the Order's morals and rules, after spending most of his life as the Major Domo of the Lykos Kinsman Republic. So in a sense, he is as new and inexperienced as Niha should be in the story.

Name: Polemistis

Species: Lykos Kinsman

Gender: Male

Abilities: Lykos Kinsman Essence Seeker mutation, (essence recognition, essence manipulation [can be used for healing, changing physical nature, etc]) and increased physical stature, (strength, speed, etc).

Bio: Born into a Lykos Kinsman Paketo in the northern region of Exusia, Polemistis was raised to be one of the Paketo's finest Warrior's; taught the way and the nature of the Republic, Polemistis swore an oath to uphold the mantle of guardianship. Training in the finest War College's on the island, Polemistis was trained to be one of the greatest warriors; eventually donning the title of Major Domo, the highest rank to be achieved in the Republic's Armed Forces. During the invasion of Exusia, Polemistis eventually lost command of his troops due to an anonymous source to where he lost the war. Captured as a Brotherhood slave, serving alongside their forces in a bloody conquest against the Order of Mata Nui. Eventually coming to the light of his ways, Polemistis was captured by the Order; to where he diminished his freedom to serve along side the Order to settle debts with the Brotherhood. Serving as a member of the Order, Polemistis usually works alone to complete the Order's 'dirtier tasks'; however on occasion must work alongside other members to keep him in check.

Core beliefs: While is is obvious that Polemistis disagrees with the beliefs that the Order has itself, he believes it as an end to war and a way to return to his lost homeland. He believes that the Lykos Kinsman must stand alone in his or her works, and to persist in bringing forth honor to his or her tribe; which Polemistis claims to have failed to do so.

And without further ado, the monstrosity of the Brotherhood; Erevayx:

Name: Erevayx

Species: Makuta

Gender: Male

Abilities: Biotoxin mutation, (capable of controlling all toxins inside a given atmosphere, enhancing toxins, etc) all 42 Makuta Kraata Powers.

Bio: Created in the Southern Chains in the Matoran Universe; Erevayx was originally created to help aid with the population of Rahi. Creating several Rahi, most of these animals died due to lack of substance they needed to survive; forcing Erevayx to discover a new mutated substance he knew as: Biotoxin. Learning that this toxin mutated these Rahi into unimaginable beasts; he later found use for the toxin after the Great Cataclysm commenced, beginning to use it as a weapon. During a battle with a Toa of Fire on the island of Syuth; Erevayx poisoned himself with the substance, mutating him with indescribable power and insanity.

Later during an invasion of an island known as Veli; Erevayx became the cause of hundreds of Matoran deaths; leading a bloody campaign around the island to his own enjoyment. Noticing his lethality and danger, Erevayx has since then become a highly feared and disgusted member of the Brotherhood; earning his title as the 'Monstrosity of the Brotherhood' by members of the Order, and with good cause. Many fear facing him, few have prevailed; but none have ever walked away without serious harm or displeasure.

Core beliefs: Erevayx has no moral compass, he simple wanders about the world of Aqua Magna; looking for ways to make countless suffer painful and slow deaths. He finds pleasure in torture and mutilation of others, willing to watch the fear and anger boil up inside those he face. He is known as an animal, playing with his captured prey rather then honorably ending his enemy. Surely, there is no humane thought lurking around the dark mind of Erevayx, nor will there ever be.

And with that, I conclude my applications. Criticism is desirable, so begin posting those hateful comments I divulge myself in.