User blog comment:MAZEKA/Storyline(s) updates and stuff/@comment-29135115-20150827092157

Well, before I review the MOCs, excuse me while I laugh at the fact that you are now running FOUR STORYLINES SIMEULTANEOUSLY(ish. Hey, I managed to spell SIMEULTANEOUSLY correct without autocorrect! I usually can't do that for the life of me!) and also writing for Servicemen. If that's too much on your plate, feel free to drop out at any time, but actually, I think it's both brave and kinda silly to have so many stories going on at once.

But now, MOC-time!

Matoran: The first three Matoran's builds are impressive, (not to mention they remind me strikingly of Elisis) and create a perfectly sized, well armoured, posable Matoran build. The Le-Matoran's helmet makes me squirm a little, though, it just seems wrong in some way. The other masks work very well though, and the colourschemes for the Le and Ko-Matoran are very good, green and black, white and light blue. You didn't seem to like the Ko-Matoran's colors? Well, look at this!: http:demitsorou.tumblr.com/tagged/element-colorschemes (see "Ice" and "Glacial Caverns")

As for the other two matoran: bulkier and more Agori-like in build, I don't really have much to say about these.

Toa: Both these Toa are evil. Are all Toa evil in this storyline? Is this like The Toa Empire? Anyways, these are cool. The Toa of Ice's build is very aesthetically pleasing. The red looks kinda like brown to me in the photo, but eh, doesn't really matter. The other one though, she looks like a nasty piece of work character wise. Kind of like Siaki, she looks a heck ton more menacing with the thingamabobbin on her back. Was she based off a witch doctor? Like, with the spirit thing and all the ornaments on her build? She looks awesome anyways, and I love your choice of mask.

All in all, cool idea, cool MOCs. Keep it up!