User blog comment:BobTheDoctor27/Judgment Day: Preview/@comment-2215631-20140308155622

Very impressive, Bobdo! This is the kind of chapter I aspire to write: one that doesn't necessarily have a lot of action, but it's entertaining nonetheless. It's something that's hard to do, but really pays off once it's done.

I'm still very new to the Fractures Universe, so I really enjoy finding all the small (and big) differences from the canon storyline. I really like how you have Kaulus reminisce about the construction of the GSR. For some strange reason I have always thought that the residents of the MU never knew that they lived inside a starship. Now that I think about it, I don't think anything addresses it :P

Obviously, my favorite part of the story was Thode :D I love how he has some regrets&mdash;or at least it seemed like he did. He's not just some random crazy killer. You really have the advantage here, Bobdo. None of the characters have gotten old, because I have never experienced a Fractures story, except for Vendetta.

There is one thing that I don't like that really makes me tick. I really hate the use of "Rode-wearer" and "Mask of Rahi Control-wearer". I always have hated using the term "[insert Kanohi]-wearer". Maybe that's just me, but I am really distracted by it and probably will be always. Sorry if I was a bit harsh about that :D

Overall, this was a great preview, and I hunger for more!