User blog comment:Ciaranhappy!/i need help/@comment-23174019-20140708120234/@comment-23174019-20140708124510

Well i personally have no idea what your story is, a good way to develop your story is to, well...write a story. However do not do this until he have mastered your grammar. I developed my story by writing Three stories, read over them to get ideas about how correctly write a page.


 * Downpour


 * Sabotage


 * Into The Rot

However you should write the background story for each individual character on their on page. Examples:


 * Tusk


 * Dazix


 * Kerath


 * Drakaal

So so far no, your story isn't bad. If you need anything please just ask me.

Tusk Out!  12:45, July 8, 2014 (UTC)