User talk:LoganWoerner/Niha (being)

Pros

 * I like the use of post 2006 chains and the Mistika claw as hair. It makes the MOC look feminine and is a very original idea.
 * I also like the use of dark blue and silver in her color scheme. However, I think the light blue is pushing it slightly. Looking at the image, it appears the light blue pieces that are in use can all be replaced by dark blue pieces.
 * Choice of weapons: It is clear that you have used a well chosen weapon for this MOC. The Trident is sleek, silver, and conveys a water/classic female appearance - which mirrors the actual MOC.
 * Torso: I like the use of the
 * Fish: XD Kind of random but it works.
 * Hips: Looks very sleek and very flexible. I wouldn't necessarily have broken off the bottom part but I guess there isn't really a way around the random lump that would be there.

Room for improvement

 * Arms: I like the sleek effect that the arms seem to have but the Turaga hands kind of spoil that for me. I would probably recommend using either a black or silver Bohrok eye in its place.
 * Rubber Bands: They don't do wonders and make the arms look a little shabby. If I were you I would either attach the shoulder armor to either a Kiina knee-piece or a Gelu knee-piece. If you have tried that then I would probably recommend using the black rubber bands which were issued with the Turaga, Bohrok ect. That way it looks more professional.

Summary
All in all, I think that this is a very well designed MOC. It looks very feminine and sleek Grade:A- Although this is my first MOC review, this is one of the best female MOCs I've seen in ages! The only possible drawbacks I can think of are the rubber bands and light blue armor but they don't even seem to drag it down. Very good job! :D

Matoro1 19:47, April 30, 2011 (UTC)