User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130818230312

Chapter 6 was another engaging installment with some masterful camerawork that I am very fond of. :P The images do seem blurry and unfocused, which adds to the illusory effect and there is a great contrast going on between the two varying perspectives.

It was interesting to see the Skakdi reappear and I loved how he seemed to be dozing when the red warrior chained him up. It made for quite a comical effect. I liked how he kicked Solunus aside but I noticed how you moved Solunus between the shots on my second reading. It's not very noticeable, but it looks a little awkward. :P Still, that's only a minor, personal grievance that nobody else seems to have spotted.

Regardless, I don't think that there is much to detract from the overall concept. Your use of setting is, once again, very appropriate. :P I particularly liked how you used the backdrop behind Nuva in these pictures. :P

From what I can gather, this chapter does draw into question which characters are really the bad guys. Nuva speaks of liberation and is polite to and understanding of Theran whereas Solunus speaks of sacrifice, infection and revenge. He seems like a dictatorial, secretive, rude, violent and bitter individual who has promiscuous intentions. Solunus really is developing into another complex character and appears to be abusing his power. As Range pointed out in Chapter 7, he always seems to be absent or late. I don't think that he's a very good leader. He does well at all the public speaking but he keeps to himself a LOT and doesn't reveal much to his followers. :P

Another excellent installment, though it feels strange not to see the other Farside Toa in the crowd. It's a little isolating as there aren't really any links back to the original story in this chapter apart from Nuva, Gringat, Solace and Sycco, hardly any of which had much screentime before. Since their leader is missing it makes me wonder what happened to Range, Merall and Brorag in the gap in between the chapters. :P

As always, you fail to disappoint. XD Another great chapter and some amazing character development. :P