User blog:Violet Spinel/Story Rewrites

Day 1, I guess. June 2nd, 6:05 AM.

Too much caffine. I had 1 Starbucks Mocha energy drink, 1 Pina Colada Rockstar, and 1 Java Mocha Monster. They were delicious and I havr them to thank for my latest creation.

Although it's unlikely that anyone cares, the story (although never fully completed in the first place) requires a severe rewrite for a few reasons.

1st and most importantly, Toa Fanua, one of the most important characters, had a drastic redesign that no longer suits his role in the plot.

2nd is because two characters of mid-tier importance, Falara and Valara (they were to be given their own page in a week) have been destroyed for parts. They will have to be written out of the story.

Lastly is that I seem to have forgotten the three virtues, because Unity is pretty important and I just kinda spaced that and had Fanua run off on his own. But unlike someone like Vakama who did that and then learned the importance of Unity, Fanua did no such thing. He just went "oh, I'm too strong" and then ran off and proved he was too strong.

Anyways, where was I? I mentioned my latest creation, yeah. So, after drinking all that caffine, I tried sleeping but I happened to be right next a box of Legos and I saw Fanua and thought "way too bulky". So I took him apart and remembered the CCBS is pretty cool so I slautered some other Bionicles to make way for the new Fanua and before I knew it, I had watched 30 episodes of Nostalgia Critic and it was 4:00. Anyways, tell me what you think of Fanua. He's technically my Self-MOC, so I think he suits me a lot better now. A Wiki-Grade picture will be taken later when I feel satisfied with his final design (AKA after I get some feedback).



Well, here's the finished product compared to his original state. Now criticize me please. Be harsh. No mercy.

Original is on the bottom, redesign on top. Thanks. Good night...