User blog comment:Jefforyduck/Please help me/@comment-906080-20111103144318

I read The Odyssey of Rannok. It was fast paced and adventurous but make sure it does not become fast paced to the point of loosing description (trust me I've been there). I like the amounts of description especially while setting up your story but I honestly think you need more in the future, for instance you descried the table he was on but not the room that held the table.