User blog comment:Vorred/Elegy - Feedback Blog/@comment-23174019-20150401180009

Well, i'm still iffy about whether or not this is the true end. Regardless, I think this deserves a proper review, even if it is an April Fools joke.

To begin with, and honestly the only issue (other than the Olmak situation which i'm assuming you will enlighten us on), is the fact that so much happened in this one chapter. The going back in time thing would have been so much better, had you drawn it out over the course of a few chapters. Also, I would have loved to see them struggle to find Nuva in the past, with the addition of Theran and Range encountering their old Uprising selves, possibly?

I can see something else that could have made for some more action, was those three orbs. Maybe you could have had Theran and Range have to go to like...I don't know...three temples, or something to find them. Not going to complain too much about that.

Also, maybe making Nuva a bit more confused about why there were two Toa attacking him, instead of hime instantly wanting to kill them. Maybe he coud have gotten scared and put the mask on in fear?

Another thing, was the ending. This story definately needs a epilogue, as I see that you should never have to look outside of a story for answers. I mean sure,you could assume that the reader would have known that everything went back to normal, but for those people that don't know a lot  about BIONICLE, that may confuse them a bit.

After reading it over a few more times, I can truly see that this is a somewhat logical end. Very nice final chapter. If it is truly the end.