User blog comment:Vorred/Patriots - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20130811222901/@comment-958607-20130812213942

That's very true, mentioning the deaths of his allies and the losses he has suffered does partially justify Theran for his actions and I think you made him appear as something of a lovable-anti-hero. :P You did an excellent job. :D

But I don't think Uprising was as void of emotion as you claim. :P Sure it had some blank moments but most of that story was needed to establish the setting and events, as well as the characters. I feel that it could've done with some coverage on the other Farside Toa but it established Range, Theran and most of your main cast very well. :P

Well, the sight of Theran lying bleeding in the snow in that spoiler image set my suspicions on him for going from high to low in this story. Personally, I think that you're going to kill him off in Patriots, and I can definitely see his descent into madness and savagery. :P

Seeing as neither Merall or Theran have pre-existing pages on your MOCpages site, I'm fearful for their fates. Ultimately, I can see GloBoh coming back to finish the job and personify karma. XD It would be a form of poetic justice for his victim to kill him, but I can also see Range stepping up to deal with him. A conflict between two friends/brothers is plausible. :P