User blog:MAZEKA/The story is over, the Chronicle has begun!

So, I have finally finished a story I have been working on since roughly October. This story marks the beginning of what will hopefully be my main series on the wiki. Thank you to all of you who donated characters to be used last year and I will say now that I only managed to get a couple into this story, but as many of the others as possible will appear in later stories. If anyone else wants a character to make an appearance then please let me know below and I'll see if I can fit it in somewhere. (This offer does however exclude Makuta, Visorak and Rahkshi.)

Feedback
The story is over, but once I have finished updating the character pages I will be going back through the story and trying to improve certain points. I have already received some feedback from users such as ChineseLegolas, but if you've read part/all of the story and there's something that could use improving, please let me know. e.g. more character description, re-wording a section...

Secrets of Orentorus
Now that my summer exams are over I will have more time for editing on the wiki and it's my summer holidays in 4 weeks. So I'm hoping to start the sequel story shortly. This story takes place on Orentorus (the equivalent of Bara Magna) and follows a group of Glatorian and Agori in a world turned to a barren wasteland and their struggle against mad Glatorian who rule over them planet and have enslaved the Agori. The story will skip between this new location and our heroes of the first story, but the first part will mainly focus on the new guys.

I also held a MOC competition a while back to create an Orentorus Gresh and Kiina, but never really announced the winners. So I guess I should do that now.

The winner of the Gresh contest is: Max the paranoid android with this entry:



Well done as well to BobTheDoctor27 and Ganno. It was a tough choice but this entry had the feel to it that I was looking for.

And the winner (and only entrant) to the Kiina contest is: Toa Pozico, with this entry:



Well that's about it. I hope those of you who read the story (if anyone did) enjoyed it and I'll be looking forward to seeing your thoughts on it soon.