Talk:All the Pretty Things

All the Pretty Things follows mainly two perspectives of both a Ga-Matoran: Elisis, and an amnesia affected Toa of Plasma as they attempt to push off the assault of a rogue Lykos Commader: Aalska. The two protagonists, and the antagonist interestingly have similar end goals: hoping to defeat and overthrow the Lykos Republic, but the clashing ideals between them force them to stand off—especially considering the solution that the Lykos has involves the extermination of an entire Matoran village. Elisis' struggle to deal with the emotion of having lost a friend of the Lykos is expected, but gives more reason for her to protect her village.

This story shows not only that the Matoran have a strong will to survive the Lykos onslaught, but also that the Lykos Kinsmen are not too one-sided in their ideals.


 * Originality: All the Pretty Things have similar themes of survival of a Matoran village against a greater enemy, but what ties it together is the reason the antagonist has to destroy the village for what would have been the greater good. The Matoran as a protagonist is also a welcome addition, as Elisis has interesting characteristics behind her. (9 out of 10)
 * Follows Existing Plot: All the Pretty Things manages to follow the existing plot of the V Osade alternate universe. (5 out of 5)
 * Character Development: All the Pretty Things has interesting character development behind it, giving solid reasons for all the characters involved to do what they did in the story. (4 out of 5)

Entry Score: (18 out of 20)

- Representative  of the    Union  01:31, August 25, 2015 (UTC)