Talk:Pure

TDG Review
I thoroughly enjoyed the story in spite of its short length. It took me roughly three minutes to read and was straightforward enough with some nice images and a couple of clear themes.

Firstly, my personal favorite part of the story was the description of the Rusted Gear. It was brief, blunt and utilitarian, which serves it well in this situation. What's more is the implied subplot of the Ga-Matoran barmaiden. The implication of her decline and fall from better days to her current situation was an interesting concept to draw upon and it makes me wonder if it will reflect Vexus' own plight.

Furthermore, the motif of the water was nicely done. 'Pure' is, I'm guessing, a reference both to the cleanliness of the drinking water, but also to the integrity of the characters. The Ga-Matoran is skillfully depicted as having some kind of trouble in the past which haunts her even in her new job. I get the sensation that she is tainted. Damaged femininity is a very nice image to draw upon. The notion that a Ga-Matoran - a character who would normally be associated with spiritual strength - is sullied serves as a nice reversal of expectation.

And, of course, Vexus himself is favorably depicted. I like his mysterious vanishing act at the end. The fact that he leaves the glass full is a nice indication that he was up to something. As his initial motive for entering the tavern was to rehydrate himself, I get the impression that the Ga-Matoran's story compelled him to take some kind of action. Either way, I admire his swiftness to react and the overall mysterious element that he brings with him. He literally vanishes into thin air, like a magician.

But, what I find most interesting, is that the story describes events that have already taken place. In a sense, Vexus isn't the hero of his own story. Focus is instead put on the Ga-Matoran and the reader is left to derive meaning from her anecdote of lost innocence.

Another wonderful little installment, I must admit. I like the overall 'bite-sized' nature of your stories. It makes them digestible and easy to read. I look forward to whatever comes next in Vexus' continued adventures.