User blog comment:1999bug/Wrath of the Infinity (BLOG)/@comment-6788126-20110521110221

Yeah. The story has to be interesting, long, but not long enough for the person to feel like they don't have time, and has to have a good mix of dialogue paragraphs and descriptive paragraphs. That equals a perfect story. Also, don't just focus on gore, gore, gore! but maybe be more focussed on the pain of the charact er, if they are attacked.