User blog:The Inceptionist/Mask of Infinity

Tell me what you think!
My story called Mask of Infinity is progressing along. It's not finished yet, but I want some input. Read it and tell me what you think. If you have any compliments, comments, or suggestions, then tell me. Also, vote on a scale of 1 to 10 on the story (1 is lowest and 10 is highest).