User blog comment:Vorred/Elegy - Feedback Blog/@comment-958607-20140928203525/@comment-5174759-20140929201958

'''Range is hiding behind that bush. Over there. Don't you see him?'''

The prolog of Patriots was superior in a way, you're right. It made the readers want to know how the subplot will be concluded, and I've let them wait another three chapters before that :D In my view the photography is much worse though. Patriots' prolog was much shorter and the pictures were the earliest I took and they don't live up to my standarts anymore. But I can totally understand why you liked it better :)

The origin of the Farside isn't explained in the prolog yet. But I left some hints here and there... and your theory with Globoh is already pretty good.

I never actually saw that the blue Lewa Nuva looks like something you'd make my characters to receive (:P) as he was more of an inside joke, but now that you mentioned it, I can't unsee it!

Thanks for the long and in-depth review! Always a lot of fun to read them, and gives me a lot to respond to. Keep up the corrections at the end, I'll make sure to follow them once this story gets it's release on the other websites!