User blog:Nuju of Ice/Rebel Destiny Commenting

I have written the first fifteen chapters of my new epic, Rebel Destiny. It's pretty long, and full of action. It also has a long way to go.

The point is, I'd like people to read the story, then give their feedback here. I'd appreciate constructive criticism, praise, and just plain comments. No archery of insults at me, if I'm allowed to use weird metaphors.

So please read it, and once you do, comment here! Adios!