User blog:Darker511/A Vast World- It begins!

Yeah, I could have made a whole blog for all of the things I've done so far with this new Avatar, but I'm lazy. Anyways, here you have the prologue and first chapter for A Vast World, the first story in the Darker Arc.

Here you are.

Prologue
The Arrum species had lived in relative peace on Indarus for years. That wouldn't last. From their settlement, a blinding blast of light engulfed the land, destroying all that it touched. A few moments after it so abruptly appeared, it shrank and returned to whoever summoned it. All the Matoran on Kiri Nui  had seen it and wondered what it was. Argon and Arohni were asked again and again in that day and the one following. They had no answer. Arohni suspected it was from a settlement of a species thought to be a myth, the Arrum. The Matoran wouldn't believe it, and kept bothering the Turaga. Little did they know that there was only one survivor.

Chapter One
Adert looked up. The sky was blue and the clouds grey. That didn't make sense. The clouds on Indarus were never grey. The black and red armored being frowned. How did he know that if he didn't remember his own life? The Tryna- wearer sat up, and surveyed his surroundings. He was lying in the remains of a village. Oddly enough, it felt familiar to him, as if he lived here. Adert stood up, his armor shining in the burning sun. He quickly glanced around, hoping to find someone other than himself in the ruined settlement. There wasn't anything that inferred there were beings living here. Not even graves. The being looked at the damaged village, hoping to find some way how it could have happened. He found that it seemed to happen from a blast of some kind, but he could figure out where it was from… Other than himself. The blast seemed to origin from the clearing he had lay in, but he didn't believe he had done it. "I do, right?" The ground didn't have an answer for him.

Pages That have appeared so far

 * A Vast World (Will have these chapters later.)
 * Kiri Nui
 * Argon
 * Adert

I'm working on chapter two and three, but I need your opinion for how I'm going with this.

Give me your feedback in the comments below.